高三英語書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練2.doc

高三英語書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（二）: 安全問題 一、典題解析假設(shè)你是李華，請就食品衛(wèi)生問題給某報(bào)社英文欄目編輯寫一封150詞左右的信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1） 你的鄰居因食用從市場買回來的偽劣食品中毒；2） 你目睹了他們中毒與鄰里幫助下脫險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)過；3） 呼吁社會各界重視食品衛(wèi)生(hygiene)與安全；打擊牟取暴利的不法商販。注意信的開頭與落款已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago,_ Yours, Li Hua1. 試題解讀一審體裁；本文要求寫一封信，屬于應(yīng)用文范疇。二審人稱和時(shí)態(tài)：本文是作者李華自己給報(bào)社英文欄目編輯寫信，因此主要人稱為第一人稱I。根據(jù)文章寫作要求，以描述事情經(jīng)過為主的段落應(yīng)該使用一般過去時(shí)，以呼吁為主的段落就應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。三審要點(diǎn)：該篇文章要點(diǎn)有二：第一，敘述鄰居中毒及脫險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)過，為了寫作更加有條理，建議按照事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間順序敘述。第二，呼吁社會重視食品衛(wèi)生與安全，打擊不法商販，并且還要表達(dá)自己的愿望。Im writing to tell you aboutThey had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten. After several hours treatment, they finally2. 寫作模板敘述鄰居中毒及脫險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)過From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety.呼吁社會重視食品衛(wèi)生與安全3 可用素材：（1）詞匯： Poison/poisoning, fake, have stomachaches, bring up, pass by, ambulance, treatment, escape, food safety, illegal, make profits, in the race to, care about, consumer, meanwhile, take action/measures（2）句式: Another neighbor passed by only to From this all of us have realized Meanwhile, I do hope the whole society shall4. 滿分作文展示：Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago, my neighbor family ate a bag of fake food from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and brought up what they had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten as their faces turned pale. Fortunately, another neighbor passed by only to find the accident and immediately called the ambulance, which carried them quickly to hospital. After several hours treatment they finally escaped from death.From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety. As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safety measures and hygiene or care what happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile, I do hope the whole society shall begin taking action to protect peoples life safety. Yours, Li Hua二、范文背誦 假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校最近開展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的活動。你們班為此組織主題班會，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談一談你對如何創(chuàng)建“平安校園”的一些想法。短文應(yīng)該包括下面的內(nèi)容：1. 安全意識的重要性2. 在運(yùn)動中要注意人生安全3. 在校內(nèi)要注意人身安全4. 同學(xué)間發(fā)生矛盾使，一定要保持冷靜、理智5. 逐步將“平安校園”活動轉(zhuǎn)化為全體師生的實(shí)際行動。注意：1. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)150字。My dear classmates, Theres no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. I consider this is indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it .when we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. As far as Im concerned, I feel all students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at a school” activity in mind. Besides, we are supposed to observe the law discipline where we are at any moment.中國人在食品里完成了化學(xué)教育。從大米里認(rèn)識了石蠟；從火腿里認(rèn)識了敵敵畏；從咸鴨蛋、辣椒里認(rèn)識了蘇丹紅；從銀耳、蜜棗里認(rèn)識了硫磺。今天三鹿奶粉用讓中國人知道了三聚氰胺(melamine).食品安全已經(jīng)給中國人的健康敲響了警鐘，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識。詞數(shù)：150 From the message mentioned above, we can see that food safety has gradually drawn peoples attention.Why do the immoral phenomena happen so frequently in China? Driven by profits, some illegal businessmen add poisonous stuff like melamine to food regardless of peoples health and safety. What they do has violated laws and regulations. Additionally, some relevant departments fail to supervise them effectivelyActually, only a small number of manufacturers have been fined, giving rise to such terrible events as listed in the above message.In my opinion, apart from profits, manufacturers should bear some social responsibilities. Meanwhile, government should spare no efforts to regulate the market of food and laws must be passed to limit and regulate the food safety. Solving the problem needs the joint efforts of the whole society. Only in this was can we prevent the tough, disturbing problems from happening again.2011 年12月11日國物院法制辦就我國校車安全條例草案征求意見稿正式全文公布，廣納民意。請你根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容為某英語網(wǎng)站寫一篇短文。 連續(xù)的事故； 社會的關(guān)注； 政府的重視；.出臺的背景 關(guān)愛生命； 穩(wěn)定社會；出臺的意義 你的看法（請考生根據(jù)自己的感想提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）注意：1. 對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，是適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)150. 開頭已經(jīng)先好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School BusSafety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions.During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicate that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus. The draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabilizing the society. Personally, I fully support the coming out of the regulations, and I sincerely hope that everyone in our society will obey the regulations. Whats more, the regulations should be strictly carried out.There being chains of unexpected accidents happening continuously during such a short period of time, the draft was released on account of great concern among the society. Furthermore, it was governments emphasis and concern that led to such progress. It cant be denied/There is no denying that with the exposure of the draft, life which is