人教版 選修六 Unit 3 Healthy lifeusing language課件（35張PPT.ppt

人教課標(biāo)高二選修6unit3 英文建議信屬于應(yīng)用文寫作范疇 是向征詢建議者就某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告 高考中此類信件多屬于半開放性作文 要求考生根據(jù)所給的材料 多為征求建議信 提出合理化建議 或者給出有針對(duì)性的解決辦法 建議信要寫明寫信的原因 建議的內(nèi)容 提出建議的理由 并且提出的理由要合情合理 語氣一定要委婉禮貌 此外 建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要 目的明確 語言要具有合理性和說服力 開門見山 表明寫作意圖 在本段中 寫信人應(yīng)該先簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己 然后陳述事由 表明寫信的目的及原因 委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施 或提出忠告 禮貌地總結(jié)并期盼對(duì)方的回復(fù) readthisletterandimaginethatyouaretheadviserwhodealswithstudents problems writealettertogivexiaolisomehelpfuladvice writingtask dear canyouhelpmeplease mybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking idonotlikeitanditoldherwhatithought shelaughedatmeandsaidthatiwasnotgrown upenough thensheofferedmeacigaretteandifeltsoembarrassed ididnotknowhowtorefuseit pleasehelpme idonotwanttostartsmoking butidonotwanttolosemybestfriend either yourssincerely lixiaolei dear youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto 建議的主題 andiwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere inmyhumbleopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建議的內(nèi)容 ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals andiwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouto yourssincerely liming useful furtherdetails yourfriendis smokingandyour towardsthismatter addictedto attitude ithinkitmoreimportantto thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow forothers callon concern youhadbetter hisoffer andhewill youatlast reject understand 巧列提綱 詳略得當(dāng) 針對(duì)問題需要提出什么樣的建議 要講哪些內(nèi)容 應(yīng)該先列出提綱 并要做到內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)突出 詳略得當(dāng) 井然有序 達(dá)到提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用 pointingouttheharmofsmoking showingyouradvice 翻譯要點(diǎn) 勾勒脈絡(luò) 列出提綱后 可以嘗試著將文章中涉及到的建議要點(diǎn)或忠告翻譯成相應(yīng)的英語句子 這樣全文的骨架就已經(jīng)形成了 在此基礎(chǔ)上 可增加合理的想象以及適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展 smokingis toyourhealth especiallytoyourlung ithinkitmoreimportantto thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow forothers youhadbetter hisoffer andhewill youatlast harmful callon concern reject understand 巧妙構(gòu)思 渾然成篇 增加適當(dāng)?shù)那楣?jié)和一些過渡詞將上述要點(diǎn)連接起來 加以適當(dāng)潤(rùn)色 形成一篇地道 完整的英語建議信 medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthe notonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheair bytobaccosmoke health polluted smoking whichmaybe forsomepeople isaseriesof fortheirfellows apleasure discomforts studiesshowthat suffermorethanthesmokersthemselves non smokers 規(guī)范書寫 落筆成文 上述四個(gè)步驟是構(gòu)思寫作的基礎(chǔ) 而規(guī)范書寫是落筆成文的關(guān)鍵 在這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中 切不可因?yàn)闀鴮懥什?亂涂亂改而讓人看不出個(gè)所以然 結(jié)果使整篇文章黯然失色 dearliming youhaveaskedmeformyadvice yourfriendisaddictedtosmokingandyoustronglyobjecttoit iwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere sample asweknow smokingisharmfultoourhealth medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthehealthnotonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheairpollutedbytobaccosmoke smoking whichmaybeapleasureforsomepeople isaseriesofdiscomfortsfortheirfellows andstudiesshowthatnon smokerssuffermorethanthesmokersthemselves inmyopinion itismoreimportanttocallonthesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshowconcernforothers takingyourhealthintoconsideration youhadbetterrejecthisoffer andithinkhew