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高考作文的華麗變身 句式篇 思考 什么樣的作文會成為一篇好作文 無遺漏信息點(diǎn) 審題 篇章條理清晰 分段和過渡詞句式多樣地道的高級詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~組 思考 你能想到的好句式有哪些 推薦高考寫作10種句式 一 主動句與被動句的互換 操作難度 寫作效果 1 RiceisgrowninthesouthofChina people 2 Theyhaveprintedoneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionarysince1986 PeoplegrowriceinthesouthofChina Oneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionaryhavebeenprintedsince1986 二 將陳述句改為感嘆句 操作難度 寫作效果 1 Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant How 2 Sheisaclevergirl What Howimportantitistopreventthepollution whataclevergirlsheis 三 將陳述句改為倒裝句 操作難度 寫作效果 1 IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime 2 Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime HardlycouldIunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes 四 將簡單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句 操作難度 寫作效果 1 Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth 2 Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth Itisthroughhardworkthatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents 五 將兩個簡單句合并為并列句 操作難度 寫作效果 1 Youcandoit Icandoit Oneofusmustdoit youImustdoit 2 Iwanttobuythisbike Idon thaveenoughmoney Iwanttobuythisbike Idon thaveenoughmoney Either or but 六 將兩個簡單句合并為復(fù)合句 操作難度 寫作效果 1 同位語和同位語從句 常用于描述人物 地點(diǎn)等介紹性文段 1 LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete HewonthefirstprizeinMen s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames 用同位語改寫 wonthefirstprizeinMen s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames 2 Thewordistrue Thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech istruethepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech 2 定語從句 限制性 非限制性 1 The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing anditssloganisOneWorld OneDream The2008OlympicGames 2 Inmyopinion theGreatWallandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting Inmyopinion theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace 3 Yesterday wewenttotheEastGate andweboughtalotofclothes Yesterday wewenttotheEastGate WhosesloganisOneWorld OneDream willbeheldinBJ arethetwoplaceswhicharewellworthvisiting Whereweboughtalotofclothes 3 主語從句1 Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage 2 Itsatisfiedme Ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes 3 Ilearnedfromthestorythataslongaswehavepatience confidenceandperseverance wecanrealizeourdreams aslongaswehavepatience confidenceandperseverance wecanrealizeourdreams Whatimpressedme Whatsatisfiedmeisthat WhatIhavelearntfromthestoryisthat 推薦句型 Whatsurprises astonished satisfied impressedmeisthat WhatIwouldliketosuggest advise putforwardisthat Whatmattersmostisthat WhatIlearn concludefromthestoryisthat 4 表語從句 推薦句型 isnolongerwhatitusedtobe 我的家鄉(xiāng)不再像以前那樣了 Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe 5 狀語從句 推薦句型 結(jié)果 程度so that such that 讓步nomatterhow what when where whatever however whenever wherever時(shí)間 wasdoing when 1 不管前面有多少困難 我們都要學(xué)會獨(dú)立的克服他們 weshouldlearntoovercomethemindependently 2 我正沿著馬路走 突然我聽到有人叫我 IalongtheroadsuddenlyIheardmynamecalled Nomatterhowmanydifficultiesthereareaheadofus waswalking when 七 將兩個簡單句合并為一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句操作難度 寫作效果 1 Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings aboutdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions 2 Manyboyslearntosmoke Itdoesharmtotheirhealth Manyboyslearntosmoke which Whichdoesharmtotheirhealth 八 It作形式主語或形式賓語句型操作難度 寫作效果 1 Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon tknow It snogood 2 ItiseasytogetonwithPam Ifind It snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon tknow IfinditeasytogetonwithPam 九 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)代替狀語從句操作難度 寫作效果 1 Ifyouworkharder youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime 2 Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob hesaidnothingtothepolice myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice Workinghard Frightenedoflosinghisjob 十 with引導(dǎo)的短語或者復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)操作難度 寫作效果 With 賓語 adj adv 介詞短語 todo doing done常用句型withapopulationof withatotalareaof withalonghistoryof years 1 這個地區(qū)占地2000平方千米 人口10萬 Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers 2 我們學(xué)校周圍種了很多花和樹 吸引了大量的學(xué)生來參觀 itattractsalargenumberofpeople 3 沒有做完作業(yè) 這個小孩不敢去上學(xué) theboydarednotgotoschool 4 這兩個男人早早就睡了 蠟燭燒了一個晚上 Thetwomenwenttobedearly withapopulationof100 000 Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool withcandlesburninganightlong Withhomeworknotfinished 實(shí)戰(zhàn)操練 最近 你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場討論 討論的主題是 公園要不要收門票 請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息 給報(bào)社寫一封信 客觀地介紹討論情況 注意 1 信的開頭已為你寫好2 詞數(shù) 100左右 3 參考詞匯 門票 entrancefee 1 60 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為公園不應(yīng)該收費(fèi) Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkthattheparkshouldnotchargeentrancefees Sixtypercentofthestudentsholdtheviewthatentrancefeesshouldnotbecharged 被動句 Sixtypercentofthestudentshavetheideathatpeopleshouldbeallowedtoenterparkswithoutcharge Intheopinionof60 ofthestudents peoplecanenterparksforfree 2 公園是公眾休閑的地方 Aparkisaplaceforthepublictorestandenjoythemselves Aparkisaplacewherepeoplerestandrelax 定語從句 3 如收門票 需建大門 圍墻 會影響城市形象 Ifentrancefeesarecharged itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwillaffecttheappearanceofthecity which指代上文 Withentrancefeescharged itwillbenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofthecity 4 40 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)收門票 但票價(jià)不宜高 40 ofthestudentsthinkthatentrancefeesarenecessary butthepricesshouldnotbehigh Thereare40 ofthestudentswhothinkthatentrancefeesshouldbecharged butfeesshouldbelow 定語從句 Intheopinionof40 ofthestudents entrancefeesshouldbechargedlow 5 門票收入支付園林工人工資 購買新花木 Theincomefromentrancefeesisusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewplantsandflowers Themoneyfromentrancefeesismadeuseoftopaygardenworkersandbuynewplants Withmoneyfromentrancefees thegardenersarepaidandnewplantsaswellasyoungtreesarebought With的短語 被動句 DearEditor Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Withoutdoubt Charging