2017年高考英語短文改錯訓(xùn)練.doc

2017高考英語沖刺訓(xùn)練短文改錯專練.真題回顧（2014全國卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!（2015全國卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the ciyt. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .模擬訓(xùn)練(2016皖南八校)When Mollys father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8,hand him a bag.The father was in hurry so he didnt know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Mollys junk.This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you,Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!ALast weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Realizing it wasour last school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event, such as running, high jump and long jump. Due to the hard training the athletes have done before, their performance was very impressively.My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, some raising their cameras to capture the excited moments. The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proudly. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.BMany of us are familiar to the World Cup, a football competition which is popular among people in almost all nation. Do you know there is another football competition that was well known worldwide? Its calling the Super Bowl and is held every January in the USA. It is very different from the football we know. However, the more you know about them, the well you will like it. Each year the Super Bowl is played in different American city. This is of great important because it helps make sure that the game is fair. Now the Super Bowl is broadcast on TV all over the world. But if you want to see the Super Bowl lively, you had better to have a lot of money, since the ticket for the game is pretty expensive.CYesterday my English teacher asked each student write a composition title “The Greatest Achievement of My Life”. I was not sure how to write about it. Ive thought it over for a long time. I do many things. Coming to America, get a job and meeting new people was my achievements. I think my greatest achievement is learning English. Though sometime I dont understand everything people are saying, but each day I get better and better. I told my teacher this was difficult composition to write. Above all, it is hard to measure everything you have done.DTom is one of my best friends at high school. We spent a lot of time together every day. We share a lot common. For example, we both work hardly and love sports. Although I am not so smart as her, we both do very well at school. Toms favorite subjects is history and Chinese, and he also speaks excellent English. I am used to be bad at English. Thank to his help, I have made a great progress in it. Yesterday, our English teacher said she decided to hold an English speech contest next week. I think a good chance to improve my English. Both Tom and I are looking forward to show our potential in the speech contest!EOne day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.FMy soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!GHi, Janice，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact，I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceHMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the lefthand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.II ever worked as a tour guide. One day I saw advertisement on the newspaper. I rang up the company, and I was given the job immediate. They asked me to take a tour around the city the next morning. The manager just told me to say anything that I could think about the city. My first tour is terrible. The old bus was not air-conditioned, because it was the middle of summer. It was uncomfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became very hot and angry. I owned a very hard time. I stayed there for a few weeks,and then left and joined in a better company.JDear sir, I have learned from the newspaper that you are need of a tour guide. I think I am the one who are fit for the job during the weekends. Im Li Hua, a 18-year-old boy, and I will graduate from Guanghua Middle School. My oral English is so excellent that I once won the first prize in an English competition. Beside. I have worked as a tour guide insenior 2 and was high praised for my good service. Young although I am, I am full of energy. Bringing up in this city. Im familiar with many places of interests here. However, Im sure that Im up to the job very well. If I can be hired, I will be very grateful and I will devote all me to the job. Please email me at Lilei 1999 126.com. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely , Li Lei2017高考英語沖刺訓(xùn)練短文改錯專練【答案與解析】（2014全國卷）Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry ago oftomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes years haveto self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small to everywherein size, but juicy and taste. They are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. tasty many Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had 或yetany disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! wonderful（2015全國卷）1. the a 冠詞用法錯誤。首次出現(xiàn)的名詞，用不定冠詞a。2. think thought 時態(tài)用法錯誤。這里用一般過去時，表示“過去認(rèn)為”。3. orand 連詞用法錯誤。前后句為并列關(guān)系，故用連詞and。4. onwith 短語搭配錯誤。短語with the development of隨著的發(fā)展。5. seriously-serious 詞性用法錯誤。修飾名詞，前面用形容詞修飾6. airs-air 名詞用法錯誤。air為不可數(shù)名詞7. much-many 名詞animal為可數(shù)名詞，故用many 修飾8. found-find 動詞用法錯誤。情態(tài)動詞must后接原型9. your-our 代詞用法錯誤。這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境10. it去掉。代詞用法錯誤。我們將生活在遺憾中 (2016皖南八校)A本文是一篇記敘文。主要講述了作者和同學(xué)們參加最后一次運(yùn)動會的情況。全班同學(xué)經(jīng)過努力拼搏，最終取得了好成績，這給作者留下了深刻的印象。1 .holdheld 【解析】根據(jù)Last weekend可知，是發(fā)生在過去的事情，故用一般過去時。2. aan 【解析】unforgettable首字母的發(fā)音是元音音素，故應(yīng)用an。3. whomwhich 【解析】這里含有一個非限制性定語從句，先行詞是ceremony，關(guān)系詞應(yīng)用which。 4. forto 【解析】to ones excitement令人興奮的是。5. eventevents 【解析】event是可數(shù)名詞，前面有various修飾，故event應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。6. havehad 【解析】表示之前做的艱苦的訓(xùn)練，而且句中有before，所以應(yīng)用過去完成時。故把have改為had。7. impressivelyimpressive 【解析】用形容詞作表語。8. excitedexciting 【解析】表示“令人激動的”用exciting，excited表示“感到興奮的”。9. paid前的was去掉 【解析】主語是our efforts，所以不用被動。句意：我們的努力獲得了回報。10. themus 【解析】句意：隨著時間的流逝，這場運(yùn)動會對于所有我們都是一次寶貴的記憶。根據(jù)句意，故把them改為us。B本文介紹另一種運(yùn)動the Super Bowl。1.to-with固定詞組：be familiar sth./sb.對-熟悉；be familiar to為-所熟悉。故把to 改為with。2.nation-nations句意：在幾乎所有的國家。故把nation 改為nations。3.that was-that is根據(jù)句意可知此處講的是普遍情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，故把that was 改為 that is。4.calling-called句意：被稱作-?？芍靡话氵^去時態(tài)，故把calling改為called。5.them-it此處指代前面的the Super Bowl，故把them改為it。6.well-betterthe+比較級，the+比較級，表示“越-，越-”。故把well改為better。7.在in和different之間加a【解析】考查冠詞 句意：在一個不同的美國城市。故在in和different之間加a考查冠詞。8.important-importance形容詞修飾名詞，故把important改為importance。9.lively-live此處指“現(xiàn)場直播”。Live實(shí)況轉(zhuǎn)播的，生動的。故把lively改為live。10.去掉had better后面的to【解析】had better do sth.最好做某事，故去掉had better后面的to。C1. student 【解析】后加 to考查介詞。此處為固定搭配：ask sb to do sth：要求/請求某人做某事。故加to。2. title titled【解析】考查非謂語動詞。此處為非謂語動詞，title和邏輯主語composition之間是被動關(guān)系，故用過去分詞，titled。3. how what【解析】考查連詞。句意：我不知道該寫什么，故用what。4. do did【解析】考查時態(tài)。此文用過去時態(tài)描述，故用did。5. get getting【解析】考查動名詞。and連接的為并列結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)前后用詞都是動名詞，故改成getting。6. waswere【解析】考查主謂一致。and連接的有三個主語，是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故用were。7. SometimeSometimes【解析】考查副詞。此處表示有時候，用sometimes。8. 去掉but【解析】考查連詞。though/although不能和but同時使用，一次只能用一個，故去掉but。9. was【解析】后加a考查冠詞。composition是可數(shù)名詞，此處用單數(shù)，故加a。10. AboveAfter【解析】考查固定搭配。above all 是更重要的是的意思，此處為after all，意為畢竟的意思。D本文屬于記敘文，講述了我的好朋友Tom幫助我學(xué)習(xí)英語的事情?！拘☆}1】spent改為spend 考查時態(tài)。本句的時間狀語是every day，這是一般現(xiàn)在時的時間狀語，謂語動詞使用spend.【小題2】lot后加in 考查固定搭配。介詞短語in common共同。句意：我們分享了很多共同之處?！拘☆}3】hardly改為hard 考查副詞。動詞短語work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)，而hardly幾乎不，表示否定含義?！拘☆}4】her改為him 考查代詞。Tom是男性，所以使用代詞him指代他，而her指代女性。【小題5】is改為are 考查主謂一致。本句主語是Toms favorite subjects，這是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞也要使用復(fù)數(shù)形式are.【小題6】去掉am 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。句式used to do sth過去常常做某事；be used to do sth被用來來做某事；句意：我過去不擅長英語。【小題7】Thank改為Thanks 考查固定搭配。短語thanks to多虧.；表示原因。句意：多虧他的幫助，我在英語方面取得了很大進(jìn)步。【小題8】去掉a 考查名詞。本句中名詞progress“進(jìn)步”是不可數(shù)名詞，不能使用a修飾?！拘☆}9】think后加it 考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。本句中it是賓語，指代前句中的出現(xiàn)的名詞短語an English speech contest?！拘☆}10】show改為showing 考查動名詞。動詞短語look forward to期待.；其中to是介詞，后面要接名詞或動名詞做賓語。本句使用動名詞showing作為to的賓語。E第一處：parentparents由下文的his parents were.以及倒數(shù)第二句中的媽媽說的話中可知托尼是和爸爸、媽媽一起去的，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式parents。第二處：onin表示在商店的櫥窗里，用介詞in。第三處：去掉very句中使用了so.that.結(jié)構(gòu)，very多余，故將其去掉。第四處：lookslooking該動詞位于介詞after后，要用動詞的ing形式，故把looks改為looking。第五處：wherethat或去掉wherefound后是一個賓語從句，句子意思和成分完整，應(yīng)該用只起連接作用的that引導(dǎo)，也可以省略。故把where改為that或去掉where。第六處：begunbegan本文描述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，and連接的兩個并列成分應(yīng)當(dāng)時態(tài)一致，故此處用一般過去時，把begun改為began。第七處：tellingtold由and可知，此處和謂語動詞saw并列，故用過去式。第八處：athe這里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠詞the修飾，表特指。第九處：saw后加his這里特指托尼的父母親，所以用物主代詞his修飾parents。第十處：terribleterribly修飾形容詞worried要用副詞形式。F第一處：去掉in用last，next等表示的時間狀語前不用介詞，故去掉in。第二處：anythingsomethinganything用于疑問句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故將anything改為something。第三處：betterbest表示比較的范圍是in the world，故改為最高級。第四處：decidedecideddecide意為“決定”，此處時態(tài)應(yīng)與全文時態(tài)一致，故改為decided。第五處：stepstepsstep是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。第六處：wellgood系動詞be后接形容詞作表語，副詞不能充當(dāng)表語，故改well為good。第七處：afterwhen/while句意為：我唯一的錯誤就是當(dāng)我正在打包的時候掉地上了一些。根據(jù)句意可知將after改為when或while。第八處：athe第一段第二句中有提到party，此處為第二次提到，故用the表特指。故將a改為the。第九處：just后加to分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，might have to是謂語部分，從而get不再是謂語動詞，故只能是非謂語動詞。此處表示目的，故用不定式。第十處：enjoyenjoying此處my coach and me作介詞of的賓語，enjoy與my coach and me之間是主動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。G第一處：want后加towant to do sth.為固定搭配，意為“想要做某事”。第二處：telltold根