浙江英語新高考讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)練3學(xué)案.docx

高三英語讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)練3學(xué)案 【示例3】 Willies aunt sent him for a birthday present a little writing book. There was a place in the book for a pencil. Willie thought a great deal of this little book, and always kept it in his pocket.One day, his mother was very busy, and he called his dog, and said. “Come, Caper, let us have a play.” When Willies mother missed him, she went to the door and looked out, and could not see him anywhere, but she knew that Caper was with him, and thought they would come back before long.She waited an hour, and still they did not come. When she came to the gate by the road, she met Mr. Lee, and told him how long Willie had been gone. Mr. Lee thought he must have gone to sleep under the trees. So they went to all the trees under which Willie was in the habit of playing, but he was nowhere to be found.By this time the sun had gone down. The news that Willie was lost soon spread over the neighborhood, and all the men and women turned out to hunt. They hunted all night.The next morning the neighbors were gathered round, and all were trying to think what to do next, when Caper came bounding into the room. There was a string tied round his neck, and a bit of paper tied to it. Willies father, Mr. Lee, took the paper, and saw that it was a letter from Willie. He read it aloud. It said, “O father! Come to me. I am in the big hole in the grassland.”Everybody ran at once to the far corner of the pasture and there was Willie, alive and well, in the shaft(豎井). Oh, how glad he was when his father caught him in his arms, and lifted him out! 注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的次數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語都為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1Now I will tell you how Willie came to be in the shaft._ Paragraph 2 When he woke up it was morning. _導(dǎo)學(xué) 1 原文內(nèi)容摘要情節(jié)1 Willie liked the writing book his aunt gave him and always kept it in his pocket.情節(jié)2 Willie and his dog Caper went out, lost.情節(jié)3 They couldnt be found.情節(jié)4With the dog Capers paper tied to a string round his neck, Willie was saved by his father from a shaft in the grassland.導(dǎo)學(xué) 2 續(xù)寫情節(jié)推理Paragraph 1： 可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展n 從Paragraph 1 的段首語和上下文的情節(jié)4可知： Willie fell into the shaftn 從Paragraph 2 的段首句可知： Willie slept in the shaft in the night.n 合理的細(xì)節(jié)增加： Willie 掉入shaft的細(xì)節(jié)描寫； 根據(jù)情節(jié)4可知，Caper 也掉下來了，不然Willie 無法把string套到Caper 的脖子上； Willie 有可能呼救過，但最終睡著了。 可用的詞匯及篇章技巧 1. 可用的關(guān)鍵詞 Caper， Shaft2. 其他的可用詞語 lost ones balance, fell into the shaft, fell asleep, cried for help, tried to pull Willie out3. Willie 掉下shaft 的情節(jié)要描寫得稍微詳細(xì)一些。Paragraph 2：可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展n 把情節(jié)1和情節(jié)4結(jié)合起來，就可知道Willie是想了一個(gè)什么辦法擺脫困境。 write a letter, tie a string round the neck of the dog; help the dog outn 合理的細(xì)節(jié)增加n 在具體的方法之前增加一個(gè)過渡句；幫助Caper跳出shaft可用詞匯及篇章技巧1. 可用的關(guān)鍵詞writing book, pocket, his father, string, shaft2. 其他的可用詞語hit upon an idea, tear a leaf, tie a string round the neck導(dǎo)學(xué) 3 續(xù)寫微作文1. 當(dāng)Caper看到他的小主人在井里的時(shí)候，他不愿離去。它往下探去，想把Willie拉出去。（用-ing形式做伴隨狀語）_2. Willie大聲地呼喊求救，知道天黑。不知不覺中，他在呼喊中睡著了。（用not long before）_導(dǎo)學(xué) 4 根據(jù)前面的指導(dǎo)，完成例3的讀后續(xù)寫。_【讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)學(xué)案3 參考答案】導(dǎo)學(xué)3 續(xù)寫微作文1. When Caper saw that his little master was in the shaft, he wouldnt leave, reaching down and trying to pull him out.2. Willie cried and called for help until dark, and it was not long before Willie cried himself to sleep.導(dǎo)學(xué)4 根據(jù)導(dǎo)學(xué)內(nèi)容完成示例3的讀后續(xù)寫。Now I will tell you how Willie came to be in the shaft. He and Caper went to the grasslan field, and came to the edge of the shaft and sat down. In bending over to see how deep it was, he lost his balance, and fell in. He tried in vain to get out. When the good little dog saw that his master was in the shaft, he would not leave， reaching down and trying to pull him out . While Caper was pulling Willie by the coat sleeves, a patch of grass gave away. Caper slipped and fell in, too. Willie called for help until dark, and it was not long before Willie cried himself in sleep. When he awoke it was morning, and he began to think of a way to get out. The little writing book that his aunt had given him was in his pocket. He took it out, and wrote the letter to his father. Then tearing the leaf out, Willie took a string out of his pocket, and tied it round Capers neck. After that he tied