人教版高三英語高考基于問題解決的高三作文專題課導學案

Part 1 Compare the two passages and fill in the assessment form below.Passage 1 Dear Stephen,Im sorry to hear that you feel worried about your senior high school life. Now Im going to give you some suggestions.In fact, there are many things for you to learn in senior high. You should learn to study well. Study is important for everyone and everyone studies hard. You should learn to be a good person, because everyone needs good friends. And you should learn to take part in some interesting sports and out-door activities, too. At last, I hope my suggestions can help you in some way. And I hope you will have a wonderful senior high!Yours, JohnPassage 2 Dear Stephen,Im sorry to know that you are worried. Now Im writing to give you some suggestions on what to learn in senior high. Here are my opinions.Firstly, you should learn to study well. Study in senior high is more challenging, so youd better find effective learning methods to learn efficiently. Besides, learning to be a nice person is also of great importance. Its necessary for you to be sincere and friendly, because only in this way can you make more friends. Whats more, dont forget to take part in some sports and out-door activities, which are really helpful in building up your body and enriching your school life.All in all, take it easy! Everything will be OK! Wish you have a wonderful senior high!Yours, LisaAssessment of the passagesAspectsQuestionsPassage 1Passage 2Structure1.Does the passage have the beginning, body and ending parts?2. Does the passage have topic sentences?Content3. Does the passage give reasonable suggestions on senior high school life?4. Are there enough supporting details (eg. explaining reasons; giving examples) for each key point?5. Are the supporting details closely related to the topic sentences?Language6.Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?7.Is the passage cohesive（銜接的） and coherent（連貫的）with logical relationships and proper transitions（銜接詞、短語） between sentences and paragraphs?8. Does the writer express the same meaning using varied vocabulary and sentence patterns（語言表達多樣化）? Think: What problems does passage_ have?Part 2 To improve your writing1. Supporting detailsCompare the following pairs of sentences and summarize how to add details.(1) - He is a nice person, so everyone wants to make friends with him. - He is a friendly and warm-hearted person, so everyone wants to make friends with him. (2) -Listening to music is a perfect way to reduce stress. - Listening to music is a perfect way to reduce stress. For example, light music makes you relaxed, and rock music helps to lift your spirits. (3) -When you feel worried, talk to your parents. - When you feel worried, talk to your parents, because they may give you some effetive suggestions. (4) -The Spring Festival is very important in China. - The Spring Festival is very important in China. When it comes, almost every Chinese returns home to get together with his or her family.Summary-to add supporting details, we can:_Have a try!(1) I hate the bad weather today.(2) My father is a warm-hearted man.(3) Square dancing is becoming more and more popular in China.2. Cohesion and coherence (銜接與連貫)Compare the following pairs of sentences/paragraphs and summarize how to make the passage more cohesive and coherent. (1) - I think this model plane is wonderful. I wont buy it because of its high price. - I think this model plane is wonderful. However, I wont buy it because of its high price. (2) -You should learn to be a good person, because a good person always helps others. - You should learn to be a good person, because it helps you to make more friends. (3) - Chengdu has various delicious food. Eating delicious food can make you happy. A happy mood is very important for your health.- Chengdu has various delicious food, such as hot pot and Mapo tofu. When you come here, dont miss them! I promise they wont disappoint you!Summary-to make the passage more cohesive and coherent, we should:_Have a try!Online courses have some advantages. They are convenient, because you can learn something new. They have disadvantages. Many things have disadvantages, so we should take them seriously.3. Varied language（語言表達的多樣性）Compare the following pairs of paragraphs and summarize how to vary the language.(1) -Mr Li is my math teacher. Mr Li helps me a lot with my math. I admire Mr Li very much. -Mr Li is my math teacher. He helps me a lot with my math. I admire him very much.(2) -In my family, hobbies vary from person to person. My father likes reading, while my mother likes cooking. As for me, I like watching TV and listening to music.-In my family, hobbies vary from person to person. My father likes reading, while my mother enjoys cooking. As for me, I am fond of watching TV and listening to music.(3) -To learn English well, it is important to read more English books. Besides, it is also helpful to practice speaking and listening every day.-To learn English well, it is important to read more English books. Besides, practicing speaking and listening every day is helpful, too.Summary- to vary the language in a passage, we can:_Have a try!Doing sports is a useful way to reduce stress. Doing sports helps you forget the trouble and makes you refreshed. Talking with your friends is also a useful way to reduce stress.Part 3Task-Improve the writing 假設你是李華，你校來訪的美國學生代表團想了解中國太極拳（Tai Chi）。請根據以下要點寫一篇發(fā)言稿。1.太極拳的歷史與地位2.學習太極拳的好處3.學習建議注意：詞數100左右1. Read the passage, find out the possible problems and decide what kind of problems they are. Mark the numbers beside them as follows. lacks supporting details is not cohesive or coherent the language is repetitive and dull2. Improve the passage3. Share in groups and collect your ideas.4. Present your work in class.Good morning, everyone！Im Li Hua. Welcome to our school! Im happy to introduce Chinese Tai Chi to you.Tai Chi has a long history. Tai Chi may date back t