高中英語 寫作-人物篇.ppt

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作 人物介紹,Usain Bolt,Born 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hard-working, love ,determined, In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games, broke In 2009, in the World Championship ,Now,Usain Bolt,Usain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love a

2、nd determined. In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2009, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100-meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.,審題的步驟,、 、 、

3、 、 、,文體,主體時態(tài),人稱,信息點整合,不要打草稿，但應(yīng)有提綱,基礎(chǔ)寫作 人物介紹,人物介紹,三段論,1.主題段 -開頭段 Birthday , birthplace and family background,2.拓展段-中間段 Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in ones life,3.總結(jié)段-結(jié)尾段 evaluation 對人物做出綜合性的評價。,人物簡介的一般步驟：Give the right order,( )教育：education ( )外貌性格appearance ,chara

4、cter ( )生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) ( )評估evaluation ( )概況age, sex, birth-place, background,概況,外貌,教育,生平,評估,A. 概況 : 譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一. 1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest doctors in China. 1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1

5、941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,語法，句法高分tips,可以用分詞短語,同位語結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡潔,通順,1.A. 概況 :,語法，句法高分tips,可以用分詞短語,同位語結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡潔,通順,譯：費孝通，我國著名的社會學(xué)家和社會活動家，年月日生于一富裕家庭年月日因病逝于北京,Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910,

6、Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in Beijing on April 24, 2005 .,B.外貌,性格: 譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā).,My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and

7、 long hair.,巧用with做定語,C. 教育經(jīng)歷：,可以用非謂語動詞, 使文章精煉,After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a

8、doctors degree.,1.在中山大學(xué)英語系畢業(yè)后,她繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí),獲得了博士學(xué)位.,D生平：,可以用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章,Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.,He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.,1.他對科學(xué)極有興趣,也有音樂天賦.,2. 他創(chuàng)了一個新的游泳記錄,為中國隊贏得了一 塊金牌.,E評估：,注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組,Lishi

9、zhen made great contributions to Medical literature.,Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .,1. 雷鋒給我們樹立了一個良好的榜樣,我們都很敬重他.,2. 李時珍為醫(yī)學(xué)做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn).,話題詞匯，詞組，句型：,外貌： good-looking相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的， white-haired白

10、頭發(fā)的，near/far-sighted 近/遠(yuǎn)視的， charming有魅力的, 時尚的fashionable, 苗條slim 性格氣質(zhì)： kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 熱心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，bad-tempered 壞脾氣的，a strong will很強的意志力，naughty 淘氣的， smart/bright 聰明的， wise睿智的，diligent 勤奮的， humorous 幽默的， attractive 有魅力的， talkative能說會道的，confident 有信心的， independent 獨立的，patie

11、nt 有耐心的,生日、出生地、年齡 , (who was) born in , is a , a , is a with a height of and a weight of 家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在貧窮的/富裕的家庭 as a child of years old, he 還是個歲的孩子時 spend his childhood in 在度過了他的童年 live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福/艱苦,教育背景： be admitted to university考取大學(xué) graduate from depa

12、rtment of university從某大學(xué)某系畢業(yè) receive/get a doctors degree 獲取博士學(xué)位 主要事跡： serve as做某種工作 devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 concentrate /apply oneself to 專注于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do決心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有的天賦,成就： one of the best/most important 最好的/重要的之一 2

13、. set a example to為樹立榜樣 3. be honoured as被授予； win the prize 獲得榮譽 4. make great contribution to 為作出巨大貢獻(xiàn),根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文介紹美國總統(tǒng)奧巴馬。,提示： 文體 分段 時態(tài) 人稱 信息點整合,subject 主語 predicate 謂語 object 賓語 attribute 定語 adverbial 狀語 complement 補語 predicative 表語 appositive 同位語 C clause 從句,Short forms 縮略語,P.,S.,O.,Att

14、,Adv,com,pre,app,Barack Obama , the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961.,S.,P.,app,Adv, ,When he was only a small a boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.,= In his childhood,/ As a small boy, he had a

15、great dream that he would become the President of the United States.,S.,P.,O.,Adv.c,In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.,=In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he gained his doctors degree in 1991 there.,S.,P.,Adv,Att c,After g

16、raduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.,=After he graduated from Harvard, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.,S.,P.,O.,P.,Adv,On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African- American Pre

17、sident of the United States.,=On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama won the general election defeating John McCain and became the first African- American President of the United States.,P.,S.,O.,P.,Adv,Adv,The success of Obama inspires African-American greatly. His achievements show that anyone can succ

18、eed as long as he works hard.,S.,P.,O.,S.,P.,Oc.,Adv.c,Student times No 6 B3,著名歌手叢飛的愛心事跡傳遍全國，深入到每個人的心中?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下面的寫作內(nèi)容和寫作要求，寫一篇短文，介紹叢飛的感人事跡。 寫作內(nèi)容 生平1. 1969年生于遼寧省盤錦市. 1992年畢業(yè)于沈陽音樂學(xué)院。 2、2006年4月20日病逝于深圳。 主要事跡 1、從1994年8月開始資助貧困兒童，堅持11年之久，共捐獻(xiàn)300 多萬，多達(dá)178名貧困兒童受助。 2、生前立下遺囑捐獻(xiàn)眼角膜。 榮譽一生獲得許多榮譽，其中包括獲得“2005感動中國年度人物

19、”的稱號 寫作要求 必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容. 參考詞匯：捐獻(xiàn)眼角膜donate cornea 沈陽音樂學(xué)院Shenyang Conservatory of Music 2005感動中國年度人物2005CCTV Moving China Award,Cong Feis spirit lives on Cong Fei, born in Panjin, Liaoning Province in 1969, graduated from Shenyang Conservatory of Music in 1992. From August 1994, he began his 11-ye

20、ar cause of aiding poor children in mountainous areas, donated more than 8 million yuan and aided up to 178 poor children. In his life, he got many honors, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. Before his death, he made a will - to donate his corneas. Cong Fei passed away on April 20, 20

21、06, but his spirit will live on.,主要問題,人名表達(dá)法 地名表達(dá)法 Choose-chose-chosen 時態(tài) Article In order to his country His many novels,假如你叫李明，你的美國朋友布魯斯開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué)，來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅，內(nèi)容如下: （1）魯迅，原名周樹人，浙江紹興人 （2）為了國家，棄醫(yī)從文。 （3）著名的作家,思想家,而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者. （4）小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如阿Q正傳、祝福這兩部影片。 （5）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。 參考詞匯:阿Q正傳:T

22、he True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice 注意:介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語. 寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。文章首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性.,Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. _. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think

23、reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming,Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-known Chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but also he was the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels ha