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英語(yǔ)試卷第英語(yǔ)試卷第頁(yè)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IfyouhadtochooseonewordtodescribeKevin,itmighthavebeen“slow”.Hedidn’tlearnhisABCsasfastasotherkids.Henevercameinfirstintheschoolyardraces.However,Kevin’senthusiasmforlifewasquitecontagious(有感染力的),sowhenhejoinedthebasketballteam,hewaswelcomedbyalltheteammates.BasketballbecamethecenterofKevin’slife.Atpractice,heworkedsohardthatyou’dhavethoughthewaspreparingfortheNBA.Helikedtostandinacertainspotnearthefree-throwlineandshootbaskets.Patiently,hestoodtherethrowingballafterballafterball,untilfinallyitwouldgothroughthehoop(籃筐).“Lookatme,Coach!”he’dyell,jumpingupanddown,hisfacejustglowingwiththethrillofitall.Kevinandhiswholeteamtrulylovedbasketball.Butjustlovingthegamedoesn’thelpyouwin.Moreshotsmredthebasketthanmadeitin,andtheboyslosteverygamethatseasonbyverylargemargins(差額),excepton…thenightitsnowedandtheotherteamcouldn’tmakeittothegame.Attheendoftheseason,theboysplayedinthetournament.Asthelast-placeteam,theydrewtheunfortunatespotofplayingagainstthefirst-placeteam—thetall,undefeatedfirst-placeteam.Thegamewentprettymuchasexpected,andnearthemiddleofthefourthquarterKevin’steamstoodnearly30pointsbehind.Atthatpoint,oneofKevin’steammatescalledtime-out.Hecametotheside,“Coach,”saidtheboy,“ThisisourlastgameandIknowthatKevinhasplayedineverygame,buthe’sneverscoredabasket.IthinkweshouldletKevinscoreabasket.”Withthegamecompletelyoutofreach,theideaseemedreasonable,soplansweremade.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Whentheywentbackonthecourt,thegamecarriedon.Paragraph2:Finally,withjustafewsecondsleftontheclock,Kevingottheballagain.文章大意:凱文學(xué)習(xí)和運(yùn)動(dòng)天賦不如他人,但他對(duì)生活的熱情極具感染力,加入籃球隊(duì)后深受隊(duì)友歡迎。他熱愛(ài)籃球,訓(xùn)練刻苦,然而整個(gè)賽季球隊(duì)除一場(chǎng)因?qū)κ治磪①惗@勝外,其余皆以大比分落敗。賽季末錦標(biāo)賽中,作為最后一名的他們對(duì)陣第一名且從未輸過(guò)的球隊(duì),比賽接近尾聲時(shí),凱文隊(duì)落后近30分。這時(shí),一名隊(duì)友提議讓從未進(jìn)過(guò)球的凱文在這場(chǎng)比賽中進(jìn)一個(gè)球,教練覺(jué)得在勝負(fù)已定的情況下,這個(gè)提議合理并制定了計(jì)劃。伏筆及回應(yīng)伏筆:Kevin’senthusiasmforlifewasquitecontagious(凱文對(duì)生活的熱情很有感染力),回應(yīng):在后續(xù)比賽中,隊(duì)友們?cè)敢鉃榱俗屗麑?shí)現(xiàn)進(jìn)球夢(mèng)想而協(xié)作,正是被他平日里的熱情所感染,大家都希望看到他開(kāi)心,體現(xiàn)了這種感染力對(duì)團(tuán)隊(duì)凝聚力的影響。伏筆:Helikedtostandinacertainspotnearthefree-throwlineandshootbaskets(他喜歡站在罰球線附近的特定位置投籃),回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,可能會(huì)利用他對(duì)這個(gè)位置的熟悉,讓他在這個(gè)位置投籃,從而成功進(jìn)球,凸顯他平日訓(xùn)練的積累。伏筆:theboyslosteverygamethatseasonbyverylargemargins(那個(gè)賽季男孩們每場(chǎng)比賽都輸了很大比分),回應(yīng):使得在這次比賽大比分落后時(shí),大家覺(jué)得勝負(fù)已定,才會(huì)有讓凱文進(jìn)球的提議,也為續(xù)寫(xiě)中大家專(zhuān)注于幫凱文進(jìn)球而不在乎比賽結(jié)果做鋪墊。伏筆:Asthelast-placeteam,theydrewtheunfortunatespotofplayingagainstthefirst-placeteam(作為最后一名的隊(duì)伍,他們不幸抽到與第一名的隊(duì)伍比賽),回應(yīng):突出了比賽的艱難,在這樣的巨大差距下,隊(duì)友們更能把關(guān)注點(diǎn)放在滿足凱文的心愿上,為故事發(fā)展?fàn)I造了特殊背景。伏筆:plansweremade(制定了計(jì)劃),回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫(xiě)中會(huì)詳細(xì)展開(kāi)計(jì)劃的實(shí)施過(guò)程,比如隊(duì)友們?nèi)绾吻擅顐髑蚪o凱文,幫助他獲得最佳投籃機(jī)會(huì)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段:故事線:比賽重新開(kāi)始后,隊(duì)友們開(kāi)始按照計(jì)劃巧妙地傳球給凱文。他們通過(guò)默契的配合,一次次將球送到凱文手中,盡管對(duì)方球員全力防守,但隊(duì)友們始終沒(méi)有放棄讓凱文得分的想法。凱文在接到球后,努力運(yùn)球,試圖突破防守到他熟悉的投籃位置。情感線:隊(duì)友們充滿決心和熱情,一心想要幫助凱文完成心愿;凱文則既緊張又興奮,對(duì)即將到來(lái)的投籃機(jī)會(huì)充滿期待。第二段:故事線:最后幾秒,凱文再次拿到球,他迅速跑到罰球線附近那個(gè)熟悉的位置,深吸一口氣,然后投籃?;@球在空中劃過(guò)一道美麗的弧線,空心入網(wǎng)。全場(chǎng)歡呼,隊(duì)友們沖過(guò)來(lái)?yè)肀P文,凱文臉上洋溢著幸福的笑容。這場(chǎng)比賽雖然輸了,但凱文進(jìn)球的這一刻成為了大家心中難忘的回憶。情感線:凱文從緊張到興奮,最后充滿喜悅和自豪;隊(duì)友們也為凱文的成功而感到無(wú)比開(kāi)心和滿足,大家的團(tuán)隊(duì)情誼在這一刻達(dá)到高潮。主旨升華句Intheworldofsports,friendshipandthepursuitofdreamscansometimesbemorepreciousthanvictoryitself.(在體育的世界里,友誼和對(duì)夢(mèng)想的追求有時(shí)比勝利本身更珍貴。)Thegamemayendwithaloss,butthememoriesofhelpingafriendachievehisgoalwilllastalifetime.(比賽可能以失敗告終,但幫助朋友實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的回憶將伴隨一生。)Trueteamworkisnotjustaboutwinning,butaboutsupportingeachothertoreachpersonalmilestones.(真正的團(tuán)隊(duì)合作不僅僅是為了勝利,更是為了相互支持以達(dá)到個(gè)人的里程碑。)Throughthisexperience,theboyslearnedthatthevalueofsportsliesnotonlyinthescore,butinthebondsformedandthedreamsfulfilled.(通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷,男孩們明白了體育的價(jià)值不僅在于比分,還在于建立的紐帶和實(shí)現(xiàn)的夢(mèng)想。)Sometimes,themostimportantthinginagameisnottheresultonthescoreboard,butthesmilesandjoysthatcomefromwithin.(有時(shí)候,一場(chǎng)比賽中最重要的不是記分牌上的結(jié)果,而是內(nèi)心的微笑和喜悅。)寫(xiě)作示范示范一Paragraph1:Whentheywentbackonthecourt,thegamecarriedon.TheteammatesstartedtopasstheballtoKevindeliberately.Theyfakedouttheopponentswithsmartmovesandmanagedtocreatechancesforhim.EverytimeKevingottheball,theopponentstriedhardtostophim.Buthisteammatesprotectedhimbravely.Kevindribbledtheball,tryinghisbesttogettohisfavoriteshootingspot.Hisheartwaspoundingwithexcitementandnervousness.Paragraph2:Finally,withjustafewsecondsleftontheclock,Kevingottheballagain.Hedashedtowardsthefree-throwlinewithouthesitation.Takingadeepbreath,hejumpedandreleasedtheball.Everyoneheldtheirbreath.Theballflewthroughtheair,makingabeautifularc.Then,itwentstraightthroughthehoop.“Yes!”Kevinyelled.Histeammatesrushedtowardshim,hugginghimtightly.Thewholecourteruptedintocheers.Althoughtheylostthegame,thismomentofKevinscoringabasketbecameanunforgettablememoryforallofthem.示范二Paragraph1:Whentheywentbackonthecourt,thegamecarriedon.TheboysonKevin’steamshowedextraordinaryteamwork.Theypassedtheballamongthemselvessmoothly,alwayslookingforanopportunitytopassittoKevin.EachtimeKevinreceivedtheball,theopposingteam’sdefensetightenedaroundhim.Buthisteammatesquicklycametohisaid,blockingtheopponents’attemptstostealtheball.Kevin,withdeterminationinhiseyes,struggledtofindaclearpathtohisaccustomedshootingposition.Paragraph2:Finally,withjustafewsecondsleftontheclock,Kevingottheballagain.Thistime,hewasintheperfectpositionnearthefree-throwline.Hesteadiedhimself,focusingallhisattentiononthebasket.Withapowerfulupwardthrust,helaunchedtheball.Theballsoaredthroughtheair,andamomentlater,therewasaswishasitpassedthroughthenet.Thearenawasfilledwithdeafeningcheers.Kevinwassurroundedbyhisecstaticteammates,andhisfacewaslitupwiththebiggestsmile.Itwasamomentthatwouldbecherishedforever,transcendingtheresultofthegame.【示例】Paragraph1:Whentheywentbackonthecourt,thegamecarriedon.EverytimeKevin’steamgotthebasketball,theypassedittoKevin,whowastostandinhisspecialspotnearthefree-throwline.Thefirstfewtimes,Kevinwassonervousthathemissedtheshot.Kevin’sfacefell,hiseyesfilledwithdisappointmentandself-doubt.Buthisteammateskeptencouraginghim,shouting,“Kevin,youcandoit!”theirvoicesfullofbeliefandsupport.Lit

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