2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：流浪貓的陪伴：點(diǎn)亮絕望者的生命之光+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)流浪貓的陪伴：點(diǎn)亮絕望者的生命之光1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onenight,sittingonthecoldstepsatthebackofmyapartmentinKansas,I’dbeenstaringoutintothedarkness.Theonlylightcamefrommycigarette.Rainsoaked(浸濕)throughmypants,butIdidn’tcare.Backinmyroom,therewasaknifeonthebedsidetableandanoteonmycomputerscreen.IhopedthatwhoeverreaditfirstwouldunderstandwhyIhadtheplantoenditall.Sixmonthsbeforethatnight,acaraccidentcausedabraininjuryinme.Ilostmyjobandhadtoliveonmysavingsinmylonelyapartment.Sincethen,Ihadbeensufferingfromdepressionandstrugglingtogetthrougheachday.Isatthereonthosecoldstepsjustwantingtoenditall.“Tonight.Iwill,”IthoughtasItookanotherdragofmycigarette.“Meow?”4續(xù)寫原文Ilookedup.Ablackandwhitecatwithroundgreeneyeslookedbackatme.Hemeowedagain.Then,walkingoutfromhishidingspot,hejumpedatme.Hewastinyanddamp,butherubbedupagainstmylegs.WhenIreacheddowntopethim,heleanedintomytouch,purring(發(fā)出呼嚕聲).Thatwasallittook.Icried.Thecatjustwatchedme.Ididn’tscarehimaway.Infact,hestoodthereasifheknewhowdesperatelyIneededacompanionrightatthatverymoment.Ilookedintohisbiggreeneyesandhelookedback.Clearlyastray(流浪的)cat.“Whenwasthelasttimeyouate?”Isaid.Myplantoenditallwasputonhold,atleastuntilIfoundthiscatsomefood.Itbecamearoutine:Everyday,I’dgotothebackstepswithsomecatfood.Usually,thecat,whomInamedScout,wasalreadywaitingforme.Hebecamemorethansomethingtolivefor.OvertimeheinspiredmetogethelpformydepressionandevengavemetheconfidencetogetintoaseriousrelationshipwithBeckyinPittsburgh,whomIhadknownforyears.5段首句Paragraph1：Scoutbecamemyconstantcompanion.Paragraph2：IwasfarfromthelonelyanddepressedmanthatScouthadfirstapproachedintherain,butIstillneededtomakeafewmorechanges.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8主人公因車禍腦部受傷，失去工作后獨(dú)居，患上抑郁癥并打算自殺。在一個(gè)雨夜，一只流浪貓出現(xiàn)，蹭他的腿并發(fā)出呼嚕聲，這讓他放棄了自殺計(jì)劃。此后，主人公每天給貓喂食，貓的陪伴讓他有了生活的動(dòng)力，還促使他積極尋求幫助，甚至有了勇氣與匹茲堡的貝基發(fā)展一段認(rèn)真的感情。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Scoutbecamemyconstantcompanion.斯考特成了我形影不離的伙伴。每天清晨，它會(huì)準(zhǔn)時(shí)跳上我的床頭，用腦袋蹭我的臉，催我起床。我走到哪兒，它就跟到哪兒，就連我去廚房準(zhǔn)備食物，它也會(huì)緊緊跟在我的腳邊，時(shí)不時(shí)發(fā)出“喵喵”的叫聲，仿佛在和我聊天。夜晚，它會(huì)安靜地趴在我的枕邊，我能感受到它溫暖的身體，這讓我在漫長(zhǎng)的黑夜里不再感到孤單。它還會(huì)在我情緒低落時(shí)，用它柔軟的爪子輕輕抓我的手，似乎在安慰我。在斯考特的陪伴下，我逐漸走出了抑郁癥的陰影，重新找回了生活的樂(lè)趣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：IwasfarfromthelonelyanddepressedmanthatScouthadfirstapproachedintherain,butIstillneededtomakeafewmorechanges.我早已不是斯考特在雨中初次遇見的那個(gè)孤獨(dú)又抑郁的人了，但我仍需要做出一些改變。我深知，為了擁有更好的生活，我必須邁出新的一步。于是，我決定離開堪薩斯，前往匹茲堡與貝基一起生活。在出發(fā)前，我精心為斯考特準(zhǔn)備了舒適的貓包。一路上，斯考特安靜地待在包里，偶爾探出頭來(lái)看看外面的世界。到了匹茲堡后，我迅速投入到新的工作中，努力適應(yīng)新環(huán)境。斯考特也很快和貝基熟悉起來(lái)，它在我們的新家里快樂(lè)地玩耍，見證著我們生活的每一個(gè)美好瞬間。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Scoutbecamemyconstantcompanion.Everymorning,itwouldjumpontomybedsidepunctually,rubbingitsheadagainstmyfacetowakemeup.WhereverIwent,itwouldfollowclosely.EvenwhenIwalkedtothekitchentopreparefood,itwouldsticktomyfeet,meowingfromtimetotimeasifchattingwithme.Atnight,itwouldliequietlybesidemypillow.Icouldfeelitswarmbody,whichmademenolongerfeellonelyinthelongnights.WhenIwasinlowspirits,itwouldgentlyscratchmyhandwithitssoftpawsasiftocomfortme.WithScout'scompany,Igraduallysteppedoutoftheshadowofdepressionandregainedthejoyoflife.13范文呈現(xiàn)wasfarfromthelonelyanddepressedmanthatScouthadfirstapproachedintherain,butIstillneededtomakeafewmorechanges.IwaswellawarethatIhadtotakeanewstepforabetterlife.So,IdecidedtoleaveKansasandmovetoPittsburghtolivewithBecky.Beforesettingoff,IcarefullypreparedacomfortablecatcarrierforScout.Alongtheway,Scoutstayedquietlyinthecarrier,occasionallypokingitsheadouttolookattheoutsideworld.AfterarrivinginPittsburgh,Iquicklydevotedmyselftomynewjobandtriedhardtoadapttothenewenvironment.ScoutalsogotfamiliarwithBeckysoon.Itplayedhappilyinournewhome,witnessingeverywonderfulmomentofourlives.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Scoutbecamemyconstantcompanion.Eachmorning,withunfailingpunctuality,itwouldleapontomybedside,nuzzlingmyfacewithitssoftheadtorousemefromslumber.Wherevermyfootstepsledwithintheapartment,ittrailedclosebehind.EvenasImademywaytothekitchentoprepareameal,itclungtomyheels,meowingsoftlyasifengagedinagentleconversation.Atnight,itnestledquietlybesidemypillow,itswarmpresenceareassuringcomfortthatchasedawaythelong-nightloneliness.WheneverIwasengulfedinmelancholy,itwouldtenderlyscratchmyhandwithitsdelicatepaws,asifofferingsilentsolace.WithScoutbymyside,Igraduallyemergedfromthedepthsofdepression,reclaimingthepleasuresoflife.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IwasfarfromthelonelyanddepressedmanthatScouthadfirstencounteredintherain,butIstillhadafewchangestomake.Acutelyawarethatanewstepwasessentialforabrighterfuture,IresolvedtoleaveKansasandjoinBeckyinPittsburgh.Priortoourdeparture,ImeticulouslyreadiedacozycatcarrierforScout.Throughoutthejourney,Scoutremainedcalmlyinthecarrier,occasionallypeekingouttoexplorethepassingscenery.UponarrivinginPittsbur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