2025年八省聯(lián)考高考英語讀后續(xù)寫試題解析課件（含范文賞析）

2025年八省聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫動物救援騎行者試題再現(xiàn)01原題再現(xiàn)

①IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary

（紀(jì)錄片）aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.

②Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestless（坐立不安的）andbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobrave（v.勇敢面對）

it.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.

③Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istopped

inshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers---verybig,tough-lookingbikers.

情節(jié)

情感

續(xù)寫復(fù)現(xiàn)詞匯原題再現(xiàn)

④I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen---allwearinginsignia（徽章）thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub----standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?

⑤AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.Paragraph1:Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Paragraph2:Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.

試題分析02

梗概

原文講述了一位熱愛動物的女士獨自去觀看救助動物紀(jì)錄片的故事。在前往活動的路上，她遇到了一群外形“兇悍”的騎士，這讓她感到恐懼和不安。然而，這次經(jīng)歷最終讓她感受到人與動物之間的美好聯(lián)系，并對騎士們有了全新的認識。這個故事的情感轉(zhuǎn)折點在于從“恐懼”到“釋然”，再到“感動”。續(xù)寫時需要抓住以下要點：人物心理：恐懼-猶豫-釋然-感動。情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折：騎士身份反轉(zhuǎn)，從讓人害怕到展現(xiàn)他們善良的一面。情感升華：通過騎士的行動傳遞人性善良、動物保護或不要以貌取人的主題。主旨點題：人與動物和諧共處的重要性或者不要以貌取人。

視角：第一人稱

讀故事Emotion看到廣告決定前往前往途中看到騎手忐忑入場？expected&alittleworriedrestlessboredtobraveshocked;uneasynervous,alarming,struggleexpected;tryingtocalm?故事線&情感線Plot寫作思路03讀清續(xù)寫段首句，初步確定兩段情節(jié)Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.6.情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折：揭示摩托車手的真實身份，帶來情感的轉(zhuǎn)折點。7.環(huán)境描寫：描寫放映廳溫暖的氛圍，為情感升華鋪墊。8.情節(jié)描寫：描述紀(jì)錄片的內(nèi)容。

9.語言描寫：主人公和摩托車手的互動10.主題點睛：點明故事主旨，傳遞動物保護和善良的意義，不要以貌取人。1.情感描寫：描寫主人公看到摩托車手時的恐懼與緊張。2.細節(jié)描寫：展現(xiàn)摩托車手的外貌與主人公的觀察。3.動作鏈推進：通過主人公的動作，推動情節(jié)向下一步發(fā)展。4.沖突鋪墊：預(yù)示情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，暗示摩托車手并非主人公想象的那樣。5.情感推進：主人公從恐懼到疑惑，為轉(zhuǎn)折做鋪墊。Para.1內(nèi)心沖突與轉(zhuǎn)折Para.2情感升華與主題點明Plot1:

情感描寫：描寫主人公看到騎士時的恐懼與緊張。

1.一陣恐懼感傳遍全身當(dāng)我注意到劇院里面滿是摩托車手，都戴著徽章。（無靈主語句）AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.Plot2:細節(jié)描寫：展現(xiàn)騎士們的外貌與主人公的觀察。

皮夾克、沉重的靴子以及他們不禮貌的盯看使得我的心跳得更快了。Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.Plot3:

動作鏈推進：通過主人公的動作，推動情節(jié)向下一步發(fā)展。

緊緊握住我的錢包，我迅速就坐在劇院的后面的座位，試圖不被注意到。(v-ing作狀語)Holdingmywallettightly,Iquicklyseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.Plot4:

沖突鋪墊：暗示騎士們并非主人公想象的那樣。

但是，我一安頓下來，我看到一個摩托車手正在人真地調(diào)整投影儀，另外一個摩托車手正在撫摸他旁邊的小狗。(themoment...;petv.

撫摸)However,themomentIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingtheprojectorandanothergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.Plot5:情感推進：主人公從恐懼到疑惑，為轉(zhuǎn)折做鋪墊。

他們出乎意料的舉動在我的思想中種下了一顆疑問的種子-也許我誤判了他們。Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.Plot6:情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折：揭示騎士的真實身份，帶來情感的轉(zhuǎn)折點。

紀(jì)錄片一開始我就意識到這些摩托車手是熱情的動物援救者，致力于救助流浪狗。（nosooner...than...;devote/commit/dedicate）NosoonerhadthedocumentarystartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.Plot7:

環(huán)境描寫：描寫放映廳溫暖的氛圍，為情感升華鋪墊。紀(jì)錄片播放著，劇院里充滿了舒緩的音樂，所有的摩托車手專注地看著影片。（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）Withthedocumentaryon,thetheaterwasfilledwiththesoftmusic,andthebikerswatchedthefilmattentively.Plot8:描述紀(jì)錄片的內(nèi)容。

Thedocumentarystartedwithastoryabouthowtheyhadbeentravelingacrossstates,rescuingdogsfromtoughsituations.紀(jì)錄片以他們?nèi)绾慰缭讲煌闹荩诶щy的狀況下挽救流浪狗開始。Plot9:

語言描寫：主人公和摩托車手的互動Duringthescreening,noticingmyinitialunease,onebikerapproachedandsaid,“Hey,lady,wedon’tbite.We'rejusthereforthepoordogs.”Hiswordsmademefeelawkwardyetwarm.在放映期間，

注意到我最初的不安，一個摩托車手走上前來并說到......Plot10:主題點睛：點明故事主旨，傳遞動物保護和善良的意義，不要以貌取人。Afterthisexperience,notonlydidIlearnthelessonofnotjudgingapersonbytheirappearance,butalsoIwasluckyenoughtoencounteragroupofpeoplecontributingtomakingtheworldbetterforanimals.范文賞析04

Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.

AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.Holdingmywallettightly,Iquicklyseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.However,nosoonerhadIsettledinthanInoticedabikercarefullyadjustingtheprojectorandanothergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinm