作文19 遼寧盤(pán)錦卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文+萬(wàn)能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快?？骖}在線作文19遼寧盤(pán)錦卷真題在線（遼寧省盤(pán)錦市2021年中考英語(yǔ)試題）在初中三年的時(shí)光里,你不僅學(xué)到了知識(shí)，也具備了一定的能力。當(dāng)你克服困難第一次成功地完成某件事情時(shí)，這份與眾不同的經(jīng)歷一定在你的腦海里留下了深刻的印象。請(qǐng)你以“Myfirsttimeto________”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，分享你的經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。?xiě)作要求：（1）補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，詞數(shù)80-100；（2）語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，行文連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Myfirsttimeto________考題解析________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析1.題干解讀：題目是半命題作文，要求以“Myfirsttimeto…”寫(xiě)一篇作文，分享自己第一次做某事的經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，記敘過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。文章可采用三段式，第一段引出這次經(jīng)歷，第二段詳細(xì)敘述經(jīng)歷，最后一段講感受。要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文滿分范文MyfirsttimetoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.Lastsummerholiday,Iwantedtolearnhowtoswim.Iaskedmyfathertoteachme.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltuncomfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.SlowlyIcouldmovealittle.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.Ifeltquitehappy.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年盤(pán)錦卷中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)，與20年相比沒(méi)有很大變化，皆是半命題作文，在書(shū)面表達(dá)考查形式上有一定變化，19年及以前為兩個(gè)作文，是以小作文+大作文的形式進(jìn)行考查的，但近兩年作文難度有所下降，由兩篇減少為一篇，題目類型均為半命題或者命題作文，學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)中可多關(guān)注此類型的作文書(shū)寫(xiě)及相關(guān)素材積累。佳句積累1.Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.【亮點(diǎn)】asweallknow：眾所周知。2.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.【亮點(diǎn)】Ilearnedtoswim為定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞time。3.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.【亮點(diǎn)】howtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs為賓語(yǔ)從句，作told的賓語(yǔ)。4.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.【亮點(diǎn)】Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做…5.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!【亮點(diǎn)】本句為感嘆句，作為結(jié)尾，對(duì)第一次的游泳經(jīng)歷作了很好的結(jié)尾和升華。舉一反三相似題①人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次……寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.第一次……的整個(gè)過(guò)程；2.你的感受。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThefirsttimetolearntoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttimetolearntoswim.Lastsummervacation,myfathertookmetotheswimmingpoolinourneighborhoodandtaughtmetoswim.Itwasthefirstformetoswim.Atfirst,Icouldnotswimatall.Myfatherwasverypatient.Heencouragedmeandtaughtmehowtoswim.Hetaughtmehowtobreatheinthewaterfirst.Then,Hethrewmeintothedeepestpartoftheswimmingpool.IwassofrightenedthatIcouldn’tmove.ButInevergaveup.Ifeltsafewithmydadaround.Threehourslater,withthehelpofmyfather,Icouldswimbymyself.AlthoughIcouldn'tswimverywell,Iwasveryhappy.Iwillneverforgetthisexperience,becauseInotonlylearnedhowtoswim,butalsolearnedtobebrave!【考題解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文。首先開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，介紹自己的第一次活動(dòng)是什么，接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹第一次活動(dòng)的整個(gè)過(guò)程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。注意：注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；詞數(shù)在80—100。相似題②人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,描述你最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷。提示：(1)Whichthingisthemostunforgettableforyou?(2)Whatdidyoudo?(3)Howdidyoufeel?要求：(1)短文須包含所給提示,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。(開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】As__we__all__know,__everyone__has__his__unforgettable__memories.__I__still__remember__the__first__timeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allwestudentswereaskedtoclimbthemountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetotryclimbingamountain.Ifeltveryexcited.Wesetoffat8aminthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Whenwegottothetopofthemountain,thefeelingcouldn'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthenon,Ilearnedthatweshouldn'tgiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Onlywhenwekeepdoingsomething,canwehaveasenseofachievement.相似題③人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次贏得比賽……你記憶最深的是什么呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.要點(diǎn)：1)這件事情是什么；2)這件事情發(fā)生的過(guò)程；3)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2)詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allstudentsinmyclasswereaskedtoclimbamountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetodothingslikethis.Ifeltveryexcitedatfirst.Wesetoffat8a．m.inthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Althoughintheendweweretired,wewerereallyattractedbythesceneryatthetopandourfeelingscan'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthattime,Ilearnednottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.OnlywhenIkeepdoingitandfinishitcanIhaveasenseofachievement.相似題④你們班將舉行一次英語(yǔ)主題班會(huì)來(lái)討論自己第一次做某事的難忘經(jīng)歷。比如：第一次獨(dú)自旅行，第一次做飯……。請(qǐng)你以“MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，敘述一下自己第一次單獨(dú)旅行的經(jīng)歷。要求：1.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.100詞左右。MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyFirstTimeTravelingAloneIstillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttothesummercamp.ThatwasthefirsttimeIlefthomealone.Atfirst,IwasalittleafraidbecauseIhadneverlefthomebefore.Butmyparentsencouragedmealot.Imetalotofchildren.Wewenttoclimbthemountaintogether.Theywerebraveandwebecamegoodfriends.Weoftenhelpedeachother.Atlast,wegottothetopofthemountain.Wewereveryexcited.Ilearnedalotfromtheexperience.IknewwhattodowhenIhadproblems.Thatwasthemostimportant.【考題解析】審題指導(dǎo)：細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取信息：

1.敘述一下自己第一次單獨(dú)旅行的經(jīng)歷，以記敘文為主；

2.需要寫(xiě)“我”的第一次單獨(dú)旅行，用第一人稱；

3.記敘自己的單獨(dú)旅行經(jīng)歷，發(fā)生在過(guò)去，以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；我的第一次獨(dú)自旅行要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開(kāi)頭：概括我的第一次經(jīng)歷1.還記得我的第一次單獨(dú)旅游(stillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone)2.去年暑假我參加了夏令營(yíng)(lastsummervacation,gotothesummercamp)正文：詳細(xì)敘述此次經(jīng)歷的過(guò)程1.起初有點(diǎn)害怕，因?yàn)橹皬奈措x開(kāi)過(guò)家(atfirst,alittleafraid,neverleavehomebefore)2.父母鼓勵(lì)，遇見(jiàn)了許多勇敢的孩子，與他們一起爬山，相互幫助，最后到達(dá)山頂(encourage,meetalotofchildren,climbthemountaintogether,helpeachother,thetopofthemountain)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)自己的感受學(xué)到了許多，知道了遇到困難做什么(learnalotfromtheexperience,knowwhattodo)相似題⑤（2021原創(chuàng)）烹飪會(huì)給人帶來(lái)愉悅，你的第一次烹飪經(jīng)歷是怎樣的呢？請(qǐng)以“Myfirstcookingexperience”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文描述你的第一次烹飪經(jīng)歷。1.要點(diǎn)：1)描述具體的經(jīng)歷；2)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2)詞數(shù)100左右。Myfirstcookingexperience________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyfirstcookingexperienceAsweall