讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+歸還鑰匙：于細(xì)微處綻放大愛(ài)+講義 高三上學(xué)期12月月考英語(yǔ)試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Wethreewererunningdownthepath,shoutingandlaughingwhenourdogRubbysuddenlystoppedinthedistance.Heturnedaroundandeyedus,withhistailswingingupanddown.MylittlebrotherTobyimmediatelyspedupandrushedtowhereRubbywas.Hebentdown.pickedupsomethingandranbacktous.Itwasabunchofkeys.Wegatheredinacircle,examiningthekeysonebyone.hopingtofindsomeusefulinformationaboutitsowner.Therewere3keys—ahousekey,amailkeyandacarkeyandauniquekeyfob(吊墜)verylikelydesignedspecially.“Gosh,theownermightbeingreattrouble,”mysistersighed.Shewasright.Weoncelostourkeys.Althoughwehadanextrahousekey,ittookourparentsquitealongtimetogetanewmailkey.letalonetherewasacarkey.Whomighthavelostthem?Altermanywildguesses,wefinallydrewaconclusion.Itmightbelongtosomeoneinourneighborhoodasonlyourneighborswanderedintothewoodsforawalk.Butitwasstillimpossibletofigureoutwhoitwas.Wehadaverybigneighborhood.“Theownermightcomebacktolookforthem,”Tobyreminded.Sowedecidedtostaywherewewere,keepingawatchfuleyeonallpassers-by.Ourlittledogranincirclesofexcitementsincewestayedsolonginthewild.Weremainedinthewoodsfortwohours,askingeveryonewecameacrosswhethertheylosttheirkeys,butinvain.Itseemedwehadtogiveup.Butmysisterwouldn’t,sayingthatshejustcouldn’tstoppicturingtheownerbrushingasidetallgrasseshopingtofindthelostkeys.“Howanxiousandupsettheownerwouldbe!”Itookalookatthebunchofkeysagainandquitebyaccident,foundthekeyfobhadthealarmbutton.“Look!Ifwepressthealarmbutton,closeenoughofcourse,wecansetofftheowner’scaralarm.”“That’sbrilliant.”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：“我們”三人帶著小狗Rubby在小路上玩耍時(shí)，小狗撿到一串鑰匙，上面有三把鑰匙和一個(gè)獨(dú)特的鑰匙扣。想到失主可能會(huì)很著急，“我們”猜測(cè)鑰匙可能是鄰居的，便在原地等了兩個(gè)小時(shí)詢問(wèn)路人但無(wú)果。后來(lái)“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)鑰匙扣上有警報(bào)按鈕，于是決定回小區(qū)通過(guò)按警報(bào)來(lái)找車，進(jìn)而找到失主。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：“Therewere3keys—ahousekey,amailkeyandacarkeyandauniquekeyfob(吊墜)verylikelydesignedspecially.”（有三把鑰匙——一把房門鑰匙、一把信箱鑰匙和一把汽車鑰匙，還有一個(gè)很可能是特別設(shè)計(jì)的獨(dú)特鑰匙扣。）回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中通過(guò)鑰匙扣上的警報(bào)按鈕找到了汽車，進(jìn)而確定了失主，體現(xiàn)出鑰匙扣這個(gè)獨(dú)特設(shè)計(jì)的重要性，推動(dòng)了情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：“Wehadaverybigneighborhood.”（我們的社區(qū)非常大。）回應(yīng)：這為“我們”在社區(qū)里尋找失主增加了難度，突出了“我們”堅(jiān)持尋找的可貴，也使得找到失主后的成就感更強(qiáng)烈，同時(shí)呼應(yīng)了按警報(bào)按鈕找車這一方法的必要性。伏筆：“Ourlittledogranincirclesofexcitementsincewestayedsolonginthewild.”（因?yàn)槲覀冊(cè)谝巴獯诉@么久，我們的小狗興奮地跑來(lái)跑去。）回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，小狗雖然沒(méi)有直接參與找失主的關(guān)鍵情節(jié)，但它的興奮狀態(tài)從側(cè)面反映出“我們”在等待和尋找過(guò)程中的堅(jiān)持，與“我們”的行為形成一個(gè)整體氛圍，豐富了故事場(chǎng)景。伏筆：“Weremainedinthewoodsfortwohours,askingeveryonewecameacrosswhethertheylosttheirkeys,butinvain.”（我們?cè)跇?shù)林里待了兩個(gè)小時(shí)，問(wèn)過(guò)我們遇到的每一個(gè)人是否丟了鑰匙，但都沒(méi)有結(jié)果。）回應(yīng)：突出了“我們”一開(kāi)始尋找失主的困難，與后面通過(guò)按警報(bào)按鈕找到失主形成對(duì)比，體現(xiàn)出“我們”不放棄的精神，同時(shí)也為后面的情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折做了鋪墊。伏筆：“Itmightbelongtosomeoneinourneighborhoodasonlyourneighborswanderedintothewoodsforawalk.”（它可能是我們社區(qū)里的某個(gè)人的，因?yàn)橹挥形覀兊泥従訒?huì)到樹(shù)林里散步。）回應(yīng)：為“我們”回社區(qū)找失主提供了合理的理由，限定了尋找范圍，使故事的發(fā)展更具邏輯性，也讓讀者更容易理解“我們”的行為動(dòng)機(jī)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）：第一段：描述“我們”回到小區(qū)后，小心翼翼地按警報(bào)按鈕，仔細(xì)聽(tīng)辨周圍車輛的反應(yīng)，同時(shí)緊張又期待地觀察著周圍的動(dòng)靜。當(dāng)聽(tīng)到警報(bào)聲后，如何興奮地循聲而去，最終確定是哪輛車，過(guò)程中可以增加一些對(duì)小區(qū)環(huán)境和“我們”心情的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)，比如心跳加速、眼睛緊緊盯著周圍等，突出緊張刺激的氛圍。第二段：重點(diǎn)刻畫(huà)老婦人開(kāi)門后的反應(yīng)，從她最初的疑惑到看到鑰匙后的驚喜和感激，通過(guò)語(yǔ)言、表情和動(dòng)作等細(xì)節(jié)展現(xiàn)出來(lái)。“我們”看到她的反應(yīng)后的內(nèi)心感受，以及雙方簡(jiǎn)單的交流互動(dòng)，體現(xiàn)出幫助他人后的快樂(lè)和滿足，升華故事的情感。情感線：

起初發(fā)現(xiàn)鑰匙時(shí)，“我們”對(duì)失主充滿擔(dān)憂；在樹(shù)林等待失主無(wú)果后，有些失落但仍不想放棄；回到小區(qū)尋找時(shí)，心情緊張又期待；找到失主后，看到老婦人的感激，“我們”內(nèi)心充滿喜悅和成就感，完成了從擔(dān)憂到喜悅、從失落想放棄到堅(jiān)持成功的情感轉(zhuǎn)變，突出了幫助他人所帶來(lái)的積極情感體驗(yàn)。故事線：

“我們”玩耍時(shí)小狗撿到鑰匙，猜測(cè)是鄰居的并在樹(shù)林等待失主，無(wú)果后回小區(qū)利用鑰匙扣警報(bào)按鈕找車，最終確定失主是一位老婦人，歸還鑰匙后收獲感激，完整地講述了一個(gè)尋找失主歸還鑰匙的溫暖故事，情節(jié)緊湊且合理。主旨升華句（5句英文）：Asmallactofkindnesscanbeabigrayofhopeinsomeone'scloudyday.（一個(gè)小小的善舉可能是某人陰霾日子里的一大束希望之光。）Inthejourneyofhelpingothers,weoftenfindthetruemeaningandvalueofourownexistence.（在幫助他人的過(guò)程中，我們常常能找到自身存在的真正意義和價(jià)值。）Thewarmthofkindnessspreadslikeawildfire,lightingupnotonlythereceiver'sheartbutalsoourown.（善良的溫暖像野火一樣蔓延，不僅照亮了接受者的心，也照亮了我們自己的心。）Sometimes,thesimplestactionscarrythemostprofoundimpact,teachingusthepowerofempathyandcompassion.（有時(shí)，最簡(jiǎn)單的行動(dòng)卻有著最深遠(yuǎn)的影響，讓我們懂得了同理心和同情心的力量。）Everyactofkindnessisaseedsowninthegardenofhumanity,growingintoabeautifulflowerofconnectionandlove.（每一個(gè)善舉都是在人性的花園里播下的一顆種子，成長(zhǎng)為一朵連接與愛(ài)的美麗花朵。）兩篇寫(xiě)作示范：第一篇：Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Tobyclutchedthekeys,hisfaceflushedwithexcitement.Aswewalked,Ipressedthealarmbuttonatshortintervals,myearsstrainingtocatchthefaintestsound.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,castinglongshadowsonthepavement.Ourstepsquickenedwitheverypress,theanticipationbuilding.Suddenly,ashrillbeepingpiercedtheair.Wedashedtowardsthesound,heartspounding.There,inadriveway,wasabluecarwithitslightsflashing.Wehadfoundit!Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.HereyeswidenedindisbeliefasshesawthekeysinToby'shand."Oh,mygoodness!I'vebeensearchinghighandlow.Youdearchildren,howcanIeverthankyou?"sheexclaimed,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Wesmiledshyly,tellingheritwasnotroubleatall.Sheinsistedongivingussomehomemadecookies,andaswemunchedonthem,thesweetnessfillednotonlyourmouthsbutourhearts.Itwasinthatmomentthatwerealizedthepowerofasimpleactofkindness,andhowitcouldturnastranger'sdistressintoasharedmomentofjoy.第二篇：Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Withbatedbreath,Ipressedthealarmbutton,myeyesscanningeverycarwepassed.Theneighborhoodwasquiet,theonlysoundbeingourhurriedfootstepsandtheintermittentbeeping.MysisterheldRubby'sleashtightly,asifdrawingstrengthfromourfurryfriend.Asweturnedacorner,aloudalarmechoedthroughthestreet.Wesawawhitecarwithitshazardlightsblinking.Reliefwashedoverusasweknewwewereclose.Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.Shelookedatuswithamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude."IthoughtI'dlostthemforever.Youangelshavesavedmesomuchtrouble,"shesaid,tearsglisteninginhereyes.Wehandedherthekeys,andshehuggedusonebyone.Inthatembrace,wefeltaconnection,abondformedthroughkindness.Thisexperiencetaughtusthateventhesmallestgesturescanhaveaprofoundimpact,andthatthekindnesswegiveawayalwaysfindsitswaybacktousinthemostunexpectedandbeautifulways.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考答案Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Wefoundalotofcarsintheneighborhood.Wetriedtopasseachcar,pressingthealarm