讀后續(xù)寫-逃課之悔：一場電影引發(fā)的心靈觸動+講義 高三上學(xué)期12月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AnawkwardexperienceIwaswalkingalongtheroadtoschoolonedayandImetmyfriendRaine.Hesuggestedthatweskipschoolandgotothemovies.IrefusedbecausemydadwasverystrictandIknewhewouldbemad.RaineofferedvariousreasonsbutIstillrefused.Finally,hesaidtherewasaWillSmithmovieatthelocalcinemaandthatIcouldn'taffordtomissit.FinallycuriositygotthebetterofmeandIagreedtogo.Sowesetofftothemoviestogether,boughtourtickets,popcornanddrinksandsettleddowncomfortably.Themoviewasduetostartinfifteenminutesandthelightswerestillon.Wewatchedpeoplecomingingroups,familiesandtherewerecouplestoo.Someofthemlookedlikeschoolstudentscuttingclasseslikeus.AsIturnedaround,IsuddenlycaughtsightofmyuncleAndyandauntJanewalkingin.Isankintomyseatquicklytoavoidbeingspotted.IsignaledtoRainethattherewassomeoneIdidn'twanttosee.ButRainemadeitmoreobviousbyturningaroundandasking“Who?Andwhere?”loudly,whichmademesitevenlowerinmyseat.Tomakethingsworse,theycameandsatjustintherowbehindus.Icouldn'thelpbutoverhear(偷聽)theirconversation.TheywerediscussinghowmuchIwouldhavelovedtocometothismovie,knowingmyadmirationforWillSmith.Theywereevencommentingaboutthestudentscuttingclasses.Theyspokeinalowvoice,buttheirwordswereloudenoughformetocatch.Theydiscussedthebadinfluenceofcuttingclassesandtheimportanceofstudyinghardatschool.Myheartsankwiththesewords.Itwasasiftheywereunknowinglylecturingme,remindingmewhyIshouldn'thavegivenintoRaine'ssuggestion.注意：1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan._________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.

______________________________________________文章大意：文章講述了“我”在上學(xué)路上遇到朋友Raine，經(jīng)不住他勸說，在好奇心的驅(qū)使下，同意逃課去看威爾?史密斯的電影。在電影院等待電影開場時，“我”意外看到叔叔阿姨進來，為避免被發(fā)現(xiàn)，“我”迅速躲起來，然而Raine的舉動差點暴露“我”。叔叔阿姨坐在“我”后面，他們的談話讓“我”意識到逃課的錯誤，內(nèi)心十分愧疚，為后續(xù)故事發(fā)展埋下伏筆，主要圍繞“我”看電影過程中的心理狀態(tài)以及被叔叔阿姨發(fā)現(xiàn)后的情節(jié)展開。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：爸爸很嚴(yán)格：這是“我”起初拒絕逃課的原因，為后面“我”因逃課而產(chǎn)生的恐懼和不安做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中“我”一直擔(dān)心被爸爸發(fā)現(xiàn)，以及叔叔阿姨提到逃課的壞處時“我”的內(nèi)心反應(yīng)，都體現(xiàn)了對爸爸的懼怕，回應(yīng)了這一伏筆。威爾?史密斯的電影：是“我”最終被說服逃課的關(guān)鍵因素，也暗示了“我”對看電影的期待。續(xù)寫中電影開場后“我”卻因內(nèi)心的愧疚而無法盡情享受，形成對比，回應(yīng)了此處伏筆，突出“我”內(nèi)心的矛盾?？吹绞迨灏⒁踢M來：引發(fā)“我”的緊張情緒，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展，使“我”陷入更尷尬的境地，擔(dān)心被他們發(fā)現(xiàn)并告知爸爸。續(xù)寫中“我”在電影過程中的小心翼翼以及出電影院時的忐忑，都是對這一伏筆的回應(yīng)，表現(xiàn)出“我”害怕被發(fā)現(xiàn)的心理。叔叔阿姨的談話內(nèi)容：他們討論“我”對電影的喜愛以及逃課的不良影響，像是在無意中對“我”進行教育，進一步加深“我”的愧疚感，為“我”之后的轉(zhuǎn)變做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中“我”從他們的話語中深刻認識到錯誤，決心改正，回應(yīng)了該伏筆，體現(xiàn)了“我”的成長。Raine對“我”行為的不知情：Raine在整個過程中沒有意識到“我”的尷尬和內(nèi)心的糾結(jié)，與“我”的反應(yīng)形成反差，增加故事的戲劇性。續(xù)寫中Raine依舊沉浸在電影中，而“我”卻在內(nèi)心掙扎，強化了這種對比，回應(yīng)了這一伏筆，也從側(cè)面反映出“我”的自我反思。續(xù)寫要點：情感線：從電影開場時的緊張、愧疚，到叔叔阿姨在出口等待時的害怕、窘迫，再到最后得知叔叔阿姨不告訴爸爸時的如釋重負和感恩，情感變化豐富且真實，生動地展現(xiàn)了“我”在整個事件中的內(nèi)心起伏，體現(xiàn)了“我”對自己逃課行為的深刻反思和成長。故事線：第一段續(xù)寫電影開場后“我”無法專注觀看，內(nèi)心一直被叔叔阿姨的話困擾，同時Raine卻沉浸其中，兩人形成對比，進一步渲染“我”的不安情緒；第二段續(xù)寫走出電影院時叔叔阿姨的反應(yīng)，以及他們與“我”的對話，“我”從他們的寬容中獲得教訓(xùn)，決定不再逃課，完整地敘述了事件的結(jié)局，使故事有一個合理且有教育意義的收尾。主旨升華句：Onewrongchoicecanleadtoaseaofguilt,butitalsooffersachanceforredemptionandgrowth.（一個錯誤的選擇可能會導(dǎo)致滿心的愧疚，但它也為救贖和成長提供了機會。）Thefearofbeingcaughtisnotjustaboutpunishment;it'sareminderofthevaluesweshoulduphold.（害怕被發(fā)現(xiàn)不僅僅是因為害怕懲罰；它是對我們應(yīng)該堅守的價值觀的一種提醒。）Sometimes,thekindnessandunderstandingofotherscanturnourmistakesintosteppingstonestowardsabetterself.（有時，他人的善良和理解可以將我們的錯誤變成走向更好自我的墊腳石。）Inthefaceoftemptation,ourconscienceisthecompassthatguidesusbacktotherightpath.（在誘惑面前，我們的良知是指引我們回到正確道路的指南針。）Everymisstepisalessonindisguise,teachingustheimportanceofresponsibilityandtheconsequencesofouractions.（每一個失誤都是偽裝的教訓(xùn)，教導(dǎo)我們責(zé)任的重要性以及我們行為的后果。）寫作示范一：第一段：Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.Ishifteduncomfortablyinmyseat,myeyesfixedonthescreenbutmymindelsewhere.ThelaughterandcheersfromtheaudienceseemeddistantasIreplayedmyuncleandaunt'swordsinmyhead.Raine,besideme,wascompletelyabsorbedinthemovie,laughingheartilyatthecomedicscenes.Ienviedhiscarefreeattitudeforamoment,butthentheguiltwashedovermeagain.Icouldn'tshakethefeelingthatIwasdoingsomethingwrong,andeveryglanceatthebackofmyuncleandaunt'sseatsmademyheartracefaster.Themoviethathadonceheldsomuchallurenowfeltlikeaburden.第二段：Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.AsIwalkedtowardsthem,mystepswerehesitant,andmyfacewasflushedwithshame.ButinsteadofthescoldingIexpected,myauntgentlyplacedherhandonmyshoulderandsaid,"Wesawyou,andweknowyouunderstandthemistakeyoumade.Thisisyourchancetomakeitright."Myunclenoddedinagreement.Relieffloodedthroughme,andIpromisedthemIwouldneverskipschoolagain.Fromthatdayon,Iwasmoredeterminedthanevertofocusonmystudiesandmakebetterchoices.Theexperiencetaughtmethateveninthefaceoftemptation,it'snevertoolatetocorrectourcourseandlearnfromourerrors.寫作示范二：第一段：Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.Itriedtolosemyselfinthestoryunfoldingonthescreen,butmyconsciencenaggedatme.Theimagesflashedby,butallIcouldthinkofwashowdisappointedmydadwouldbeifheknew.Rainewasoblivioustomyinnerturmoil,munchingonpopcornandchucklingatthemovie'sjokes.Ifidgetedinmyseat,stealingglancesattherowbehindus.Thesoundofmyuncleandaunt'shushedvoicesseemedtoechoinmyears,evenoverthemovie'ssoundtrack.Ifelttrappedbetweenmydesiretoenjoythemovieandtheguiltofskippingschool.第二段：Tomysurprise,myuncleandauntwerestandingattheexitsmiling.Whentheycalledmyname,myheartskippedabeat.AsIapproachedthem,Ibracedmyselffortheworst.Butmyunclesimplysaid,"Weallmakemistakes,kid.Whatmattersisthatyoulearnfromthisone."Myauntadded,"Wewon'ttellyourfather,butyouhavetopromisetotakeyoureducationseriously."TearswelledupinmyeyesasInoddedgratefully.Thisincidentbecameaturningpointforme.Irealizedthatthechoiceswemakehaveconsequences,andit'suptoustomaketherightones.Ivowedtobemoreresponsibleandcherishtheopportunitytolearn,knowingthatitwasthepathtoabetterfuture.讀后續(xù)寫參考答案：Paragraph1:Soonthelightswereturnedoffandthemoviebegan.However,Ididn’tenjoythemovieatallforfearofbeingspotted.Isankmybodyfurtherintomyseat,prayingthattheywouldn’tnoticeme.EverynowandthenIwouldstealglancesatthem.Everytimetheychattedinawhisper,myheartwaspoundingviolently.Thankfully,afterwhatseemedyears,themoviecametoanendandthelightscameon.Iwaitedanxiouslyuntilmyauntanduncleleftthecinema.Iletoutasighofreli