讀后續(xù)寫-愛心傳遞Susan續(xù)寫Mark家的希望篇章講義-山東省煙臺市2024-2025學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。“Oh,Imusthaveleftmywalletathome.I’msosorry.I’llhavetoebackforthesethingslater,”Susan,a50yearoldmiddleschoolteacher,saidtothecashier（收銀員）,whostartedpickinguptheitemsandputtingthemback.Susanwasabouttowalkawaywhenaboybehindherinlinespokeup.“Wait,madam.Youdon’thavemanythingsanyway.I’llpayforthem,”hesaid.Noticingthattheboycouldn’tbeolderthan12anddidn’tlookparticularlyrich,Susansaid,“Oh,no.Icouldn’tpossiblyletyoudothatforme.”“Mygrandmotheralwaystellsmetodogoodthings,”theboysaid,placinghisfewthingsonthebelt（傳送帶）andpayingforeverythingthatSusanhadpickedout.OnceSusanandtheboygottheiritemsready,theysteppedoutside.SusanintroducedherselfandlearnedtheboywasnamedMark.ThankfulforwhatMarkhaddone,sheaskedforhisaddresstorepayhimlater.Markwroteitdownonapieceofpaperandtoldhertherewasnorush.Susanpromisedtopaybackthemoneyassoonaspossibleandpayitforwardasheandhisgrandmotherdid.Thatveryafternoon,SusanrangthebellofMark’shouse.AfterseeingMark,shegavehimthemoneyandexpressedherthanksagain.Duringtheirconversation,shelearnedthatMark’sparentshadlosttheirlivesinatrafficaccident,leavinghiminthecareofhisgrandmotherAlice.Theylivedahardlife.Afewdaysbefore,Alicehadfallenoffthestairs,breakingherleftleg.Shebadlyneededasurgery（外科手術(shù)）whichwouldcostabout2,000dollars.However,theycouldn’taffordit.MovedbyMark’sstory,Susandecidedtohelpthem.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thenextday,SusanwenttoMark’shouseagain.文章大意：Susan在超市忘帶錢包，小男孩Mark用自己的錢幫她付款，Susan得知Mark家庭情況后，決定幫助因奶奶受傷急需手術(shù)費而陷入困境的他。五要素分析：人物：Susan（一位中學(xué)教師）、Mark（善良的小男孩）及其奶奶Alice。事件：Susan購物忘帶錢包，Mark幫忙付款，Susan還錢時了解到Mark家庭困境并決定相助。時間：未明確提及具體時間，但有當(dāng)天下午和第二天等時間節(jié)點。地點：超市以及Mark的家。起因：Susan忘帶錢包引發(fā)后續(xù)一系列故事，Mark家庭貧困且奶奶受傷手術(shù)費無著落是故事發(fā)展的另一重要起因。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：Mark善良地幫Susan付款。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Susan因Mark的善良而更堅定地想要幫助他和他奶奶，第二天前往他家?guī)セI集的手術(shù)費相關(guān)幫助。伏筆：Mark家庭貧困，父母雙亡，奶奶受傷需手術(shù)費。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Susan第二天去他家給予經(jīng)濟(jì)援助或幫忙聯(lián)系醫(yī)院等相關(guān)事宜，直接解決家庭困境問題。伏筆：Susan承諾還錢并將善意傳遞。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：她第二天的行動就是踐行承諾，不僅還錢還提供更多幫助，推動善意的延續(xù)與擴(kuò)大。伏筆：Mark提及奶奶教導(dǎo)他做好事。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Susan受其影響也積極地去幫助他們，形成善良與感恩的循環(huán)傳遞。伏筆：Susan了解到Mark家庭詳細(xì)情況后內(nèi)心受到觸動。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：第二天的行動體現(xiàn)出她內(nèi)心觸動后的實際行動，從情感共鳴轉(zhuǎn)化為實際援助。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：描述Susan再次來到Mark家的場景，她可能帶著籌集的手術(shù)費或者已經(jīng)聯(lián)系好醫(yī)院的消息，進(jìn)門后看到Mark和他奶奶的神情狀態(tài)等。第二段：講述Susan如何幫助他們，比如把錢交給他們并說明用途，或者告知醫(yī)院方面的安排，Mark和他奶奶的感激之情，以及這件事對周圍人或社區(qū)產(chǎn)生的積極影響，如傳遞了愛心與正能量等。情感線：從Susan最初的感激，到了解情況后的同情與感動，再到?jīng)Q定幫助時的堅定，最后在幫助過程中體會到給予的快樂與欣慰，情感圍繞著善良、感恩與愛心傳遞逐步發(fā)展。故事線：Susan按約定再次前往Mark家，帶去幫助解決其奶奶手術(shù)費問題的方案或資金，順利幫助他們度過難關(guān)，這個過程中展現(xiàn)了人與人之間的關(guān)愛互助以及善良的循環(huán)傳遞。主旨升華句：Kindnessisachainreactionthatstartswithasingleactandspreadsinfinitely.（善良是一種連鎖反應(yīng)，始于一個單一的行為并無限傳播。）Inthefaceofadversity,thepowerofhumankindnesscanbreakthroughthedarknessandbringhope.（面對困境，人類善良的力量可以沖破黑暗并帶來希望。）Asmallactofkindnesscansparkagreatfireofloveandchangelivesforever.（一個小小的善舉可以點燃愛的熊熊烈火并永遠(yuǎn)改變生活。）Whenkindnessisreciprocatedandamplified,itcreatesabeautifulsymphonyofhumanconnection.（當(dāng)善良得到回報并被放大時，它創(chuàng)造出人類聯(lián)系的美妙交響樂。）Truekindnessliesnotintheamountgivenbutintheheartthatgivesandthelivesittouches.（真正的善良不在于給予的數(shù)量，而在于給予的內(nèi)心以及它所觸及的生命。）寫作示范一：Thenextday,SusanwenttoMark’shouseagain.Shecarriedanenvelopewiththemoneyshehadmanagedtoraisefromfriendsandcolleagues.WhenMarkopenedthedoor,shesawthehopeandworryinhiseyes.Susanhandedhimtheenvelopeandsaid,“Thisisforyourgrandmother’ssurgery.Let’sgetherwellsoon.”Mark’seyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.Hisgrandmother,Alice,whowasonthecouch,alsochokedup.“Thankyou,Susan.Youareanangel,”Alicesaid.Susan’sactofkindnessnotonlyhelpedthefamilybutalsoinspiredtheneighborstooffermoresupport,spreadingloveandwarmthinthemunity.寫作示范二：Thenextday,SusanwenttoMark’shouseagain.Thistime,shehadgoodnewsaboutthehospital.ShehadtalkedtoalocalcharityhospitalthatwaswillingtoreducethecostofAlice’ssurgery.Whensheentered,MarkandAlicewerelookingatherexpectantly.Susansaid,“Ifoundahospitalthatcanhelp.Wecangetthesurgerydonesoon.”Markhuggedhertightly.Alicewassobbingwithrelief.Thefamily’sdifficultsituationstartedtoturnaround,andSusan’skindnessbecameabeaconofhope.Itshowedthatevenasmallactofkindnesscouldhaveahugeimpactandmaketheworldabetterplace.(Onepossibleversion)Thenextday,SusanwenttoMark’shouseagain.ThedooropenedandshefoundMarklookingatherinsurprise.“Mark,I’vebroughtthemoneyforthesurgeryofyourgrandma.Ihopeit’llmakeadifference,”Susansaid,gentlyplacingthemoneyinhishands.TearsofgratitudewelledupinMark’seyesandhecouldn’tthankherenough.ThenextdayAlicewassenttothenear