+Module+6+Animals+in+danger+作文講義 外研版英語八年級上冊

初中作文外研社八上M6Animalsindanger外研版八上Module

6Animalsindanger.

寫作主題：保護(hù)動物一、話題分析本模塊的話題是“保護(hù)動物”。本模塊介紹了我國大熊貓的數(shù)量、生存現(xiàn)狀、生活習(xí)性以及政府為保護(hù)大熊貓采取的行動，號召人們多多關(guān)愛地球上的瀕危動物，增強(qiáng)保護(hù)動物的意識。在具體的寫作中,學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能簡單介紹一種瀕危動物；2.能說明這種動物處于瀕危狀態(tài)的原因及人們對它們采取的保護(hù)措施等；3.能用不定式作目的狀語的結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)保護(hù)動物的計劃與愿望。作文精講：假定你是李華，你校英文報“人與動物”欄目擬刊登主題為“保護(hù)野生動物”的短文，邀你投稿。要求如下：1.介紹野生動物的現(xiàn)狀；2.獵殺野生動物的后果；3.提出自己的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)不限；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。開頭：引入話題1.Animalsarepeople’sfriends,soweshouldprotectthem.2.Asisknown,peoplecannotlive/survive（存活）

withoutotheranimalssothat

weshouldprotectthem.3.Itiswidelyacknowledged/admittedthat（普遍承認(rèn)的是）

peopleshouldliveinharmonywith（和諧）

animals,orwewillloseourearthoneday.介紹野生動物的現(xiàn)狀；1.However,manyanimalsareindanger.2.However,manyanimalsareindangerbecausepeopledoharmto(傷害)them.Forexample,somepeoplekillanimalstosellthem.Besides,alotofanimalsarelosingtheirhomes.3.Unluckily/Unfortunately(不幸地),itisapitythatsomeanimalsareattheedgeof(在…的邊緣)dyingoutbecauseofhumanactivities.Forexample,someanimalscanprovidepreciousmedicineorfur,sopeoplekillthemfiercely(殘忍地).獵殺野生動物的后果；1.Ifwekillanimalstoomuch,onedaypeoplewilllosemanykindsofanimals.2.Ifwekilltoomanyanimals,onedaywewillpaytheprice(付出代價).Wewon'tbeabletoeatsomekindsoffoodifsomekindsofanimalsdieout(滅絕；死光).3.Killingtoomanyanimalswilldoharmtoourhumansinreturn(作為回報).Becausewedamagetheecosystem(生態(tài)系統(tǒng)),andweareapartoftheecosystem,too.提出自己的建議：1.Asaresult,weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheanimals.Itisagoodideatobuildnatureparkstogiveanimalshome.2.Inthatcase(在這樣的情況下),weshouldtakesteps(采取步驟)toprotectanimals.Buildinganatureparkisanideal(理想的)ideatoprovideendangeredanimals(瀕危的動物)withhomeandfood.3.Therefore,propermeasures(適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧?shouldbetakentoprotectthoseendangeredanimals.Forexample,buildinganatureparktoprovidethemwithshelter(庇護(hù)所)andfood,aswellasraisingeveryone'sawareness(提升每個人的意識)ofanimalprotectionisofgreatimportance.結(jié)尾：1.Ireallyhopeeveryonecandotheirpart(盡自己的責(zé)任)toprotecttheanimals.2.Aslongas(只要)weallcareaboutanimals,wecanmakeadifferencetoalltheanimals.范文1:Animalsarepeople'sfriends,soweshouldprotectthem.However,manyanimalsareindanger.Ifwekillanimalstoomuch,onedaypeoplewilllosemanykindsofanimals.Asaresult,weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheanimals.Itisagoodideatobuildnatureparkstogiveanimalshomes.Ireallyhopeeveryonecandotheirpart(盡自己的責(zé)任)toprotecttheanimals.范文2:Asisknown,peoplecannotlive/survive(存活)withoutotheranimalssothatweshouldprotectthem.However,manyanimalsareindangerbecausepeopledoharmtothem.Forexample,somepeoplekillanimalstosellthem.Besides,alotofanimalsarelosingtheirhomes.Inthatcase(在這樣的情況下),weshouldtakesteps(采取步驟)toprotectanimals.Buildinganatureparkisanideal(理想的)ideatoprovideendangeredanimals(瀕危的動物)withhomesandfood.Aslongas(只要)weallcareaboutanimals,wecanmakeadifferencetoalltheanimals.范文3:Itiswidelyacknowledged/admittedthat(普遍承認(rèn)的是)peopleshouldliveinharmonywith(和諧)animals,orwewillloseourearthoneday.Unluckily/Unfortunately(不幸地),itisapitythatsomeanimalsareattheedgeof(在…的邊緣)dyingoutbecauseofhumanactivities.Forexample,someanimalscanprovidepreciousmedicineorfur,sopeoplekillthemfiercely(殘忍地).Killingtoomanyanimalswilldoharmtoourhumansinreturn(作為回報).Becausewedamagetheecosystem,andweareapartoftheecosystem,too.Therefore,propermeasures(適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧?shouldbetakentoprotectthoseendangeredanimals.Forexample,buildinganatureparktoprovidethemwithshe