讀后續(xù)寫+個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)：自負(fù)之殤成長(zhǎng)之始+講義-2025屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫--個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)：自負(fù)之殤，成長(zhǎng)之始讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Havingtakenpartintheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwasashiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipateinsuchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledgedthatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited(自負(fù)的).IwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostandinfrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?”Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwocompetitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas.“Justimagineyouareonthestageinthepresenceoftheaudience,”sheadded.“I’msorry,Ms.Sara,”Ireplied.“Ihaveabitofasorethroat.”ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticeinfrontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthebestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.SaranottoworrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpracticemyscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.Asthebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools.Iwastoovaintopracticeandexpectedeverythingtobefine.Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,thehallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmyclassmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.‘Thosewhospokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.________________________.Finally

the

resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.__________________一、主旨大意這個(gè)故事圍繞著一個(gè)自負(fù)的學(xué)生展開，她是一位出色的故事講述者。在再次被選中參加比賽后，她變得過度驕傲，忽視了練習(xí)。隨著比賽的臨近，當(dāng)她看到其他人的精彩表現(xiàn)時(shí)，她開始意識(shí)到自己的錯(cuò)誤，然后不得不面對(duì)后果。二、伏筆1.主角盡管是以前的冠軍，卻拒絕練習(xí)，這為失敗埋下了伏筆。2.為逃避練習(xí)而說謊預(yù)示著即將到來的比賽會(huì)有麻煩。3.在她之前的參賽者的出色表現(xiàn)暗示了當(dāng)輪到她時(shí)可能會(huì)發(fā)生什么。三、情節(jié)發(fā)展1.主角被選中代表學(xué)校，變得自負(fù)。2.她拒絕練習(xí)并找借口。3.在比賽當(dāng)天，她看到其他人的精彩表演后失去了信心。4.盡管很緊張，她還是得進(jìn)行表演。5.比賽結(jié)果公布。四、情緒變化1.起初，主角在被選中后感到驕傲和自負(fù)。2.隨著比賽臨近，當(dāng)她看到其他人的表演時(shí)，她變得緊張并失去信心。五、主題句1.Pridegoesbeforeafall.（驕兵必?cái)?。?.Practicemakesperfect.（熟能生巧。）3.Confidenceshouldbebasedonpreparation.（自信應(yīng)該建立在準(zhǔn)備的基礎(chǔ)上。）4.Learnfrommistakestogrow.（從錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)習(xí)以成長(zhǎng)。）5.Humilityisthekeytosuccess.（謙遜是成功的關(guān)鍵。）六、范文范文一Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIthoughtitwouldburstoutofmychest.Itookadeepbreathandtriedtocalmmyself.AsIbegantospeak,myvoicewasshakyandIcouldfeelthenervousnessineveryword.ButIforcedmyselftocontinue,hopingthatIcouldsomehowsalvagethesituation.However,mylackofpracticewasevident.Istumbledovermywords,forgotimportantpartsofthestory,andevenmadesomemistakesinmypronunciation.BythetimeIfinished,IknewthatIhadperformedpoorly.Finallytheresultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

Asexpected,Ididn'twin.Infact,Ididn'tevenplaceinthetopthree.Iwasdevastated.Ihadletmyselfdown,myteacherdown,andmyschooldown.Irealizedthatmyarrogancehadcostmedearly.Lookingback,IshouldhavelistenedtoMs.Saraandpracticedmore.Ilearnedahardlessonthatday–humilityandhardworkareessentialforsuccess.生詞總結(jié)：1.pound：（心臟等）劇烈跳動(dòng)2.salvage：挽救，挽回3.stumble：結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說話4.pronunciation：發(fā)音5.devastated：極度震驚的，極度不安的高級(jí)句式總結(jié)：1.MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIthoughtitwouldburstoutofmychest.（so…that…句型，表示“如此……以至于……”）2.AsIbegantospeak,myvoicewasshakyandIcouldfeelthenervousnessineveryword.（as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）3.However,mylackofpracticewasevident.（lackof…表示“缺乏……”）4.BythetimeIfinished,IknewthatIhadperformedpoorly.（bythetime引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）5.Lookingback,IshouldhavelistenedtoMs.Saraandpracticedmore.（shouldhavedone表示“本應(yīng)該做某事而實(shí)際上沒有做”）范文二Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Isteppedontothestage,feelingawaveofpanicwashoverme.Myhandswereclammyandmykneeswereweak.AsIopenedmymouthtostarttellingthestory,Icouldhearthetremorinmyvoice.Itriedtofocusandrememberthestory,butmymindkeptgoingblank.Istruggledtogetthroughtheperformance,makingseveralmistakesalongtheway.WhenIfinallyfinished,Ifeltasenseofreliefmixedwithdisappointment.Finallytheresultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

Ianxiouslyawaitedtheannouncement,hopingforamiracle.Butwhenmynamewasnotcalledforanyofthetopprizes,Ifeltasinkingfeelinginmystomach.Ihadfailedmiserably.Irealizedthatmycomplacencyhadbeenmydownfall.Fromnowon,Iwouldnevertakeanythingforgrantedagain.Iwouldworkhardandbehumble,knowingthatsuccessonlycomesthroughdedicationandpreparation.生詞總結(jié)：1.clammy：濕冷的2.tremor：顫抖3.miserably：悲慘地4.complacency：自滿，自得5.downfall：垮臺(tái)，失敗高級(jí)句式總結(jié)：1.Isteppedontothestage,feelingawaveofpanicwashoverme.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語）2.Myhandswereclammy