讀后續(xù)寫+200+米賽道之殤與悟：母親微笑的真諦探尋+講義 高二10月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheSmileIfthereisanythingthatIcouldrememberdistinctlytilldateinmylife,itismymother’ssmile.Itwashersmilethatmademegetreadytoschool,gowithconfidencetofaceallmychallengesatschoolandbesuccessful.Hersmiledidallthemagic.Iwasingrade7andwasthetopperofmyclassinacademics,sports,speechcontests,singing,music….FriendssurroundedmeeverywhereandIwasthestaroftheschool.Everyonewhometmyparentsalwayshadthesewordstosay,“Youhaveaverytalentedchild.Youareverylucky.”IwasfilledwithhappinessandprideandIknewthatIhadmademyparentsveryhappy.MyambitionsgrewandIwantedtohavenothingbutthebestinmylife.Thingswerefineuntiloneday.IcamebackhomewithanawardIwonintheelocution(朗誦)competitionatschool.Filledwithpride,Igaveittomymotherandwaitedforherbeautifulsmile.Shesmiledandcongratulatedmeandasked,“Didyourfriendsparticipateinthecompetition?Whatweretheirpositionsinthecompetition?”Iwasalittleannoyed.Infact,Idonotevenrememberwhowassecondandthirdorwhoparticipated.ItoldherthatIwasverytiredanddidnotremembereverything.Istartednoticingachangeinmymother,especiallyhersmile.ItwasnotthesamelovelysmilethatIusedtosee.Oneday,whenIwasgettingreadyforthesportscompetition,sheaskedwhyIwasnotpracticingwithmyfriends.ItoldherthatIwasmeanttobethefirstandIhadnobusinesstobewithfriendswhoarenotambitious.MymotherpatientlytoldmethatIhaveforgottentoenjoythesimplelittlethingsinlifelikelaughingandsmiling,spendingtimeandhelpingmyfriendsintheirdifficulty,beingtheirsupport.Shesaidthatahumanbeingbecomesagoodpersonnotwiththeirsuccessbutwiththelovethathe/sheshareswithoneanotherandbyachievingtogether.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Irealizedtheywerecheeringnotforthewinnersbutformyfriendandme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者在學(xué)業(yè)、體育、演講比賽等多方面都表現(xiàn)出色，是學(xué)校的明星，習(xí)慣了母親因自己的成功而露出的微笑。但一次在贏得朗誦比賽后，母親的反應(yīng)讓作者開始察覺到母親微笑的變化。母親指出作者只追求成功，忘記了享受生活中的小美好、幫助朋友等，這讓作者有所思考。伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：母親在作者贏得朗誦比賽后詢問朋友參賽情況，與之前單純?yōu)樽髡叱晒ΧΣ煌??；貞?yīng)：在后續(xù)比賽中作者開始關(guān)注朋友，意識(shí)到友誼的重要性，這是對(duì)母親提醒的回應(yīng)。伏筆：母親提到作者忘記享受生活小美好和幫助朋友等?；貞?yīng)：比賽中作者幫助摔倒的朋友一起完成比賽，體現(xiàn)了對(duì)母親話語的領(lǐng)悟。伏筆：作者習(xí)慣以自我為中心追求成功，忽略朋友?；貞?yīng)：在賽場(chǎng)上看到朋友摔倒后毫不猶豫地返回相助，改變了只看重輸贏的心態(tài)。伏筆：作者之前認(rèn)為自己只要追求最好，無需與不夠有野心的朋友相處?；貞?yīng)：比賽后與朋友開心交流，理解了友誼比輸贏更重要，不再輕視朋友。伏筆：母親說人因分享愛和共同成就才成為好人?；貞?yīng)：作者和朋友一起完成比賽后感受到大家的歡呼，明白了共同成長(zhǎng)和友誼的珍貴，呼應(yīng)母親的教誨。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：情感線：從比賽前的自信滿滿到看到朋友摔倒時(shí)的擔(dān)憂與堅(jiān)定，再到完成比賽后的釋然與喜悅，最后領(lǐng)悟到友誼和共同成長(zhǎng)的珍貴而感到溫暖。故事線：在200米跑步比賽中，作者看到朋友摔倒，放棄爭(zhēng)勝返回扶起朋友，兩人一起跑向終點(diǎn)，得到同學(xué)們的歡呼，之后作者與朋友開心交流，深刻理解了母親話語的含義。主旨升華句：Truesuccessliesnotinwinningalone,butinsharingthejourneywithfriends.（真正的成功不在于獨(dú)自獲勝，而在于與朋友共享旅程。）Thebeautyoflifeisnotaboutreachingthefinishlinefirst,butaboutholdinghandsandcrossingittogether.（生活之美不在于率先沖過終點(diǎn)線，而在于攜手共同跨越。）Friendshipisthemostpreciousmedalthatshinesbrighterthananyvictory.（友誼是最珍貴的獎(jiǎng)牌，比任何勝利都更加閃耀。）It'snottheindividualachievementthatdefinesus,buttheloveandsupportweofferandreceiveinfriendship.（定義我們的不是個(gè)人成就，而是在友誼中給予和接受的愛與支持。）Intheraceoflife,thegreatesttriumphisthebondoffriendshipwebuildandcherish.（在人生的賽跑中，最大的勝利是我們建立并珍惜的友誼紐帶。）寫作示范一：Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace.Asthestartinggunfired,Idashedforwardwithfullspeed.Buthalfwaythroughtherace,Iheardascream.Iturnedmyheadandsawmyfriendhadfallenheavilyonthetrack.Withouthesitation,Istoppedandrushedbacktohim.Hewasinpain,hisfacetwisted.Ihelpedhimupandsaid,“Let'sfinishthistogether.”Helookedatmewithgratitudeandnodded.Wethenlimpedandjoggedtowardsthefinishline.Irealizedtheywerecheeringnotforthewinnersbutformyfriendandme.Theirshoutsandapplausefilledtheair.Aftercrossingthefinishline,myfriendandIhuggedeachothertightly.Wewerebothpantingandsweating,butourfaceswerebeamingwithsmiles.Atthatmoment,Iunderstoodwhatmymothermeant.Successisnotjustaboutpersonalglory,butalsoabouttheloveandsupportamongfriends.Thebondweformedduringthisracewasfarmorevaluablethananytrophy.寫作示范二：Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace.Ifeltconfidentandfocused,aimingforthefirstplace.However,justasIwasapproachingthefinalturn,Iwitnessedmyfriendstumbleandtumble.Myheartskippedabeat.Iimmediatelyskiddedtoahaltandretracedmysteps.Heseemedabitdazed,soIpulledhimupandencouragedhim,“Wecanstilldothis.”Handinhand,weresumedtherun.Irealizedtheywerecheeringnotforthewinnersbutformyfriendandme.Thecrowd'senthusiasmwasoverwhelming.Oncewereachedtheend,Isawthegenuinejoyandrespectintheireyes.Isuddenlygraspedtheessenceofmymother'swords.It'snotthevictoryoverothersthatmattersmost,butthevictoryoffriendshipandmutualgrowth.Inthissimpleactofhelpingmyfriend,Ihadfoundadeepermeaningofsuccessandamorepreciousrewardthananymedal.參考答案Iwasonthetrackfieldthenextdayatschool,readytorunthe200mrunningrace.Asthestartinggunfired,Idashedforwardwithallmymight.Midwaythroughtherace,Isuddenlystumbledandfell.Painshotthroughmyknee,andIknewIhadinjuredmyselfbadly.Myhopesofwinningwereshattered.Justthen,myfriend,whowasalsointherace,stoppedandcamebacktome.HehelpedmeupandaskedifIwasokay.Desp