2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+馬克助力失明妻子走出黑暗+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)馬克助力失明妻子走出黑暗1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis(誤診),Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersinkintodespair.Hewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainconfidencetobecomeindependentandreturntohernormallifeagain.Buthowwouldhedothat?4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Susanusedtotakethebustowork,butnowshewastoofrightenedtofacethewholeworld.MarkdecidedtoconvinceSusantotakethebusagain.Perhapsonedayshecouldenjoyacitytourallbyherselforbuysomedailygroceryinthesupermarketthreestopsaway.Butshewasstillsomoodyandsensitive.Howwouldshereact?Oneday,Marksummoneduphiscourageandsaid“Honey,lifeshallmoveon,let’strytakingthebusasthefirststep,OK?”Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusonherown.“I’mblind!”sherespondedbitterly.“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Mark’sheartbrokehearingthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldridethebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatwasexactlywhathappened.Forawholeweek,MarkaccompaniedSusanonthebus.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyherhearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedheranddecidedtocontinuewatchingoutforheruntilshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.6段首句Paragraph1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Paragraph2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文章講述了34歲的蘇珊因醫(yī)療誤診失明后，陷入了黑暗、憤怒、沮喪和自憐的情緒中，生活完全依賴丈夫馬克。馬克作為一名軍官，深愛(ài)著蘇珊，決心幫助她重獲自信與獨(dú)立，回歸正常生活。他首先鼓勵(lì)蘇珊重新乘坐曾經(jīng)熟悉的公交車，盡管蘇珊起初因失明而恐懼、抵觸，覺(jué)得馬克在拋棄她，但馬克堅(jiān)持陪伴蘇珊坐了一周的公交，教她利用聽(tīng)覺(jué)等其他感官來(lái)適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，還幫她與司機(jī)交好。最終，蘇珊決定獨(dú)自嘗試乘坐公交，馬克則在暗中守護(hù)，故事展現(xiàn)了這對(duì)夫妻在困境中的愛(ài)與勇氣，以及蘇珊努力走向獨(dú)立的過(guò)程。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.借助著盲杖，蘇珊一步一步緩緩地朝著公交站挪去。每走一步，她都先用盲杖小心翼翼地探探前方的路，確保沒(méi)有障礙物。清晨的陽(yáng)光灑在身上，帶來(lái)一絲暖意，微風(fēng)輕輕拂過(guò)她的臉頰，可她卻無(wú)心感受這美好。過(guò)往行人匆匆的腳步聲和交談聲傳入她的耳中，讓她愈發(fā)緊張。她緊緊握著盲杖，指節(jié)都因?yàn)橛昧Χ喊祝闹屑群ε掠制诖?。這是她第一次獨(dú)自出門(mén)乘坐公交，對(duì)未知的恐懼讓她的心跳急劇加速，但想起丈夫馬克的鼓勵(lì)和自己想要獨(dú)立的決心，她深吸一口氣，努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)，繼續(xù)朝著公交站的方向前進(jìn)。終于，她聽(tīng)到了公交站那熟悉的嘈雜聲，知道自己快到了，腳步也稍微加快了一些。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”蘇珊上了車，找了個(gè)座位坐下后，便聽(tīng)到司機(jī)笑著對(duì)她說(shuō)：“姑娘，你可真是個(gè)幸運(yùn)的人。”蘇珊不禁疑惑，自己失明后生活充滿了艱辛，怎么會(huì)是幸運(yùn)的呢？于是，她忍不住問(wèn)道：“為什么您說(shuō)我很幸運(yùn)呢？”司機(jī)從后視鏡里看了看她，眼神中透露出一絲溫暖，說(shuō)道：“我每天在這路上開(kāi)車，見(jiàn)過(guò)太多行色匆匆、滿臉疲憊的人，他們雖然看得見(jiàn)，卻好像對(duì)周圍的一切都視而不見(jiàn)，被生活的壓力壓得喘不過(guò)氣。而你，雖然看不見(jiàn)，但你卻比他們更懂得感受生活。你能聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)兒的歌聲，能聞到花兒的芬芳，而且……”司機(jī)停頓了一下，接著說(shuō)，“你還有一個(gè)默默守護(hù)著你的愛(ài)人。這幾天，有個(gè)男士總是悄悄地跟在你后面，眼神里滿是關(guān)切，我猜那一定是你丈夫吧。有這樣一個(gè)人在身邊，你難道不幸運(yùn)嗎？”蘇珊聽(tīng)后，心中涌起一股暖流，眼眶也微微濕潤(rùn)了，原來(lái)自己一直被愛(ài)包圍著，也許自己真的是幸運(yùn)的。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Themorningairwascrisp,carryingwithitthefaintscentofbloomingflowersfromanearbygarden,whichshecouldfaintlydetect.Asshestoodthere,thetipofhersticktappinggentlyontheground,shelistenedintentlytothesoundsaroundher.Thehustleandbustleofpeoplegoingabouttheirdailylivesfilledherears-hurriedfootsteps,snippetsofconversations,andtheoccasionalhonkingofacarinthedistance.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmthebutterfliesinherstomach.Herheartpoundedwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Thiswasherfirsttimeattemptingthisjourneyalone,andeverylittlenoiseseemedamplified.ButshewasdeterminedtoprovetoherselfandtoMarkthatshecoulddothis.Shestraightenedherback,adjustedhergriponthestick,andwaitedpatientlyforthebustoarrive,hersensesonhighalertforanysignofitsapproach.14范文呈現(xiàn)Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanwithakindfaceandawarmsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashepulledawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hebegan,hisvoicefilledwithgenuinekindness,“mostdays,Iseepeoplerushingaround,alwaysinahurry,butneverreallytakingthetimetoappreciatethesimplethings.Butyou,youseemtobelivinginthemoment,relyingonyourothersensestoexperiencetheworldinawaythatmanyofusforgetto.Youhaveastrengthaboutyouthat'srare.Andontopofthat,”hepausedforamoment,chucklingsoftly,“youhavesomeonewholovesyousomuchthathe'sbeensecretlywatchingoveryoueverystepoftheway.That'sakindoflucknoteveryonehas.”Susanwastakenabackbyhiswords.Shesatbackinherseat,asmallsmileplayingonherlipsasshethoughtaboutMark.Maybeshewaslucky,inmorewaysthanshehadrealized.Asthebusrumbledalongtheroad,shefeltanewsenseofpeaceandgratitudewashoverher.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withtheindispensableaidofherwalkingstick,Susanpainstakinglymadeherwaytothebusstop.Thegentlemorningbreeze,carryingwithitthedelicatefragranceofthebloomingflowersfromtheadjacentgarden,caressedherfaceeversosoftly.Standingthere,thetipofherstickrhythmicallytappingontheground,shelistenedattentivelytothesymphonyofsoundsthatenvelopedher.Thehurriedfootstepsofthepassers-by,thefragmentedconversationsthatfloatedby,andtheintermittenthonkingofcarsinthedistanceallreachedherears.Nervousnessandanticipationintertwinedwithinher,causingherhearttopoundvigorously.Thisbeinghermaidensoloattemptatthisjourney,everytriflingnoiseseemedmagnified.Yet,withunwaveringdetermination,sheresolvedtoproveherselfandMarkwrong.Straighteningherpostureandtighteninghergriponthestick,sheawaitedthearrivalofthebuswithbatedbreath,hersensessharpenedtodetectanysignofitsimpendingarrival.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Sheinquiredofthedriver,“WhydoyouassertthatIamextremelylucky?”Thedriver,amiddle-agedmanpossessingabenevolentcountenanceandagenialsmile,glancedatherthroughtherearviewmirrorashemaneuveredthebusawayfromthestop.“Well,miss,”hecommenced,hisvoiceimbuedwithsincerekindness,“onmostoccasions,Iwitnesspeoplescurryingabout,invariablyinarush,yetseldomtakingthetimetocherishthesimplepleasures.However,you,byre