Unit1+Cultural+Heritage+倡議書寫作一輪復(fù)習(xí)課件-高考英語人教版（2019）必修第二冊

Unit1CulturalHeritage1.______3,000-year-oldrabbitrelicwent2.______displayrecentlyattheJinguoMuseuminLinfen,Shanxiprovince,inspiringmany3._______(get)closertorabbitcultureduringtheSpringFestivalperiodthisyear—theYearoftheRabbitinthe4.___________(China)zodiac.Thejaderabbitrelic,5.____________(date)totheShangDynasty(16thcenturyto11thcenturyBC),6.______(be)only0.9centimetersindiameterand2.1cmin7._________(high),8._________isaboutthesizeofajujubepit（棗核）.Therabbitwasprobablyusedasa9.________(decorate),or10.______(possible)asaritualvessel,accordingtoexperts.

AontogetChinesedatingisheightwhichdecorationpossiblyQuizwatchavideoLead-in:2.HowcanweprotectMogaoCaves?1.WhatproblemsareMogaoCavesfacing?watchavideoLead-in:2.HowcanweprotectMogaoCaves?1.WhatproblemsareMogaoCavesfacing?Theyaredisappearing.WecanmoveDunhuangartworksoutsideoftheMogaoCaves.夯實詞匯語基拓展01話題語塊1.one

of

the

wonders

of

the

world世界上的奇跡之一2.date

back

to

the

Tang

Dynasty

追溯至唐朝3.be

built

in

a

fancy

style

建筑風(fēng)格奇異4.be

decorated

with...

由……裝飾著5.build

such

a

great

architecture

建造如此偉大的建筑物6.traditional

crafts

傳統(tǒng)工藝品7.a

symbol

of

Chinese

culture

中國文化的象征8.world

heritage

site

世界遺產(chǎn)話題語塊Review話題句式Review話題句式1.__________________________,

the

castle

has_________

too

much

coming

and

going

in

history.這座城堡建于16世紀(jì)，它見證了太多的歷史沉浮。2._____________

for

its

extraordinary

quality,

beautiful

design

and

brilliant

color,______________________________________________________________________________________________.中國絲綢以其非凡的質(zhì)量、美麗的設(shè)計和明亮的色澤而聞名，已被認為是中國文化的象征。Built

in

the

16th

century

witnessedWell-knownChinese

silk

has

been

regarded

as

a

symbol

of

Chinese

culture.

Yoyo's

Efforts

for

the

Protection

of

Cultural

Heritage

In

order

to______________________（提高...的意識）of

keeping

balance

between

development

and

protection,

the

Cultural

Heritage

Protection

Committee

started____________(合作)Yoyo's

school.

A

department

was

established,__________(目的是)guide

students

to

investigate

the

condition

of

local

cultural

relics

and__________(提建議)to

the

committee,

which

will____________________(進行保護活動)to

make

sure

that

allthe

cultural

relics________________(被保護的很好).Yoyo

was

delighted

to

see

everyone_____________________________________

(積極參加保護活動).

In

conclusion,

Yoyo________________(堅信)that

it

is

worthwhile

to

do

so.

小試牛刀---話題詞塊應(yīng)用promote

students'

awareness

cooperating

with

aiming

to

make

proposalsconduct

protection

activities

are

well

preserved

take

an

active

part

in

the

preservation

activityis

firmly

convinced

Let’sreadthemagain.重點詞組PairworkWorkinpairsandfindoutsomewordsandexpressionsbasedonthefollowingtopicsbyreviewingthewholeunit.·culturalheritage·Thedamagescausedandmeasurestoprotectthem·Themeaningofprotectingthem

culturalheritageculturalrelics文化遺產(chǎn)ancientruins

古遺址paper-cutting剪紙stonecarvings

石刻artsandcrafts

藝術(shù)與工藝embroidery

刺繡TCM-traditionalChinesemedicine

中醫(yī)secretprescriptionhandeddownfromone’sancestors

祖?zhèn)髅胤?8152473culturalheritageculturalrelics文化遺產(chǎn)ancientruins

古遺址paper-cutting剪紙stonecarvings

石刻artsandcrafts

藝術(shù)與工藝embroidery

刺繡TCM-traditionalChinesemedicine

中醫(yī)secretprescriptionhandeddownfromone’sancestors

祖?zhèn)髅胤絛amageseconomicdevelopment

經(jīng)濟發(fā)展givewayto

給...讓路facethedangerofdisappearing面臨消失的危險causeseveredamageto

造成巨大傷害naturaldisasters

自然災(zāi)害rapiddevelopmentoftourism旅游業(yè)的快速發(fā)展lackofculturalawareness

缺乏文化意識6152473measurestoprotectthemeconomicdevelopment

經(jīng)濟發(fā)展givewayto

給...讓路facethedangerofdisappearing面臨消失的危險causeseveredamageto

造成巨大傷害naturaldisasters

自然災(zāi)害rapiddevelopmentoftourism旅游業(yè)的快速發(fā)展lackofculturalawareness

缺乏文化意識

measurestoprotectthemattachimportanceto/laystresson

著重，重視worktogethertoprotectculturalrelics共同努力保護文化遺產(chǎn)

culturalheritageprotection

文化遺產(chǎn)保護investigatetheissue

調(diào)查問題visitlocalplacesandtalktolocalpeople去當(dāng)?shù)貐⒂^并和當(dāng)?shù)厝私徽別stablish

acommitteeofexperts/professionals 成立專家委員會raisefunds/money 籌集資金

furthereducatepeopleabouttheimportanceof...

進一步教育大眾...的重要性keeptherightbalancebetweenprogressandtheprotectionofculturalsites在社會發(fā)展和文化遺址保護之間保持平衡681524739measurestoprotectthemattachimportanceto/laystresson

著重，重視worktogethertoprotectculturalrelics共同努力保護文化遺產(chǎn)

culturalheritageprotection

文化遺產(chǎn)保護investigatetheissue

調(diào)查問題visitlocalplacesandtalktolocalpeople去當(dāng)?shù)貐⒂^并和當(dāng)?shù)厝私徽別stablish

acommitteeofexperts/professionals 成立專家委員會raisefunds/money 籌集資金

furthereducatepeopleabouttheimportanceof...

進一步教育大眾...的重要性keeptherightbalancebetweenprogressandtheprotectionofculturalsites在社會發(fā)展和文化遺址保護之間保持平衡

Themeaningofprotectingthemfindapathtothefuture 找到通向未來的道路presentittothefuturegenerations

將它呈現(xiàn)給后代safeguardhistoricandculturalrelicsforfuturegenerations為子孫后代保護歷史文化遺產(chǎn)promote

widerinterestincultureandhistory 推動更廣泛的對文化和歷史的興趣furthereducatepeople 進一步教育民眾spirituallegacy 精神財富promoteinternationalcommunicationandunderstanding

促進國際交流和理解6152473haveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChineseculture更好地了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化letculturalimprint/spiritliveon讓文化印記/精神傳承下去

thespiritisstillalive精神永存ameetingpointfordifferentculture不同文化的交匯處1243Themeaningofprotectingthemfindapathtothefuture 找到通向未來的道路presentittothefuturegenerations

將它呈現(xiàn)給后代safeguardhistoricandculturalrelicsforfuturegenerations為子孫后代保護歷史文化遺產(chǎn)promote

widerinterestincultureandhistory 推動更廣泛的對文化和歷史的興趣furthereducatepeople 進一步教育民眾spirituallegacy 精神財富promoteinternationalcommunicationandunderstanding

促進國際交流和理解ThemeaningofprotectingthemhaveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChineseculture更好地了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化letculturalimprint/spiritliveon讓文化印記/精神傳承下去

thespiritisstillalive精神永存ameetingpointfordifferentculture不同文化的交匯處02主題引領(lǐng)·情境寫作〔大觀念之學(xué)科素養(yǎng)〕寫作一

應(yīng)用文寫作——保護民族文化遺產(chǎn)【話題呈現(xiàn)】

假定你是李華,你校英文報正在征稿,主題為“保護民族文化遺產(chǎn)”。請你寫一篇英語短文投稿?！緦崙?zhàn)演練】Step

1

要點提示（黑體部分請用本單元所學(xué)知識點）1.文化遺產(chǎn)是人類共同的財富,因此它不僅應(yīng)該受到某一個國家的保護,而且應(yīng)該受到全人類的保護。（not

only...but

also...）__________________

is

the

wealth

of

all

human

beings

and

thus

____________________________________________________________________________.Cultural

heritageit

should

be

preserved

not

only

by

one

country,

but

also

by

all

mankind2.任何破壞文化遺產(chǎn)的行為都應(yīng)該受到懲罰。Any

destruction

of

cultural

heritage

_____________________.should

be

punished3.我提議我們應(yīng)該為保護它貢獻一份力量。________________________________________________________________I

make

a

proposal

that

we

should

contribute

to

protecting

it.5.全世界的人們都應(yīng)該積極參與這項活動。People

all

over

the

world

___________________________________________.should

take

an

active

part

in

this

activity6.我相信我們推進人類文明發(fā)展的新時代到來了。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________I

am

convinced

that

a

time

when

we

promote

the

development

of

human

civilisation

comes.Step

2

升級句式7.用倒裝句改寫句6__________________________________________________________________________________I

am

convinced

that

there

comes

a

time

when

we

open

up

human

civilisation.

Cultural

heritage

is

the

wealth

of

all

human

beings

and

thus

it

should

be

preserved

not

only

by

one

country,

but

also

by

all

mankind.

Any

destruction

of

cultural

heritage

should

be

punished.

I

make

a

proposal

that

we

should

contribute

to

protecting

it.

However，

balancing

development

progress

and

the

protection

of

cultural

sites

will

be

a

big

challenge.

Therefore,

people

all

over

the

world

should

take

an

active

part

in

this

activity.

I

am

convinced

that

there

comes

a

time

when

we

promote

the

development

of

human

civilisation.Step

3

銜接成文（注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡銜接詞：however、therefore）假如你是李華,是校學(xué)生會主席。在中國文化遺產(chǎn)日到來之際,請根據(jù)下面的寫作提示,給同學(xué)們寫一封英語倡議書,內(nèi)容包括:1.保護文化遺產(chǎn)的重要性;2.可采取的措施;3.發(fā)出呼吁。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。HomeworkBeginning---發(fā)出倡議的目的和有關(guān)背景1.隨著……的臨近，我想號召大家……Withtheapproachingof...I’dliketocalloneveryoneto...As...isapproaching,I’mcallingonsb.todo2.采取措施做某事

takeaction/measurestodo.measuresshouldbetakentodo

倡議書屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，由標(biāo)題、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、落款五部分組成。首段點明發(fā)出倡議的目的和有關(guān)背景正文詳細說明倡議的內(nèi)容和具體措施結(jié)語倡議者的決心和希望

假如你是李華,是校學(xué)生會主席。在中國文化遺產(chǎn)日到來之際,請根據(jù)下面的寫作提示,給同學(xué)們寫一封英語倡議書,內(nèi)容包括:1.保護文化遺產(chǎn)的重要性;2.可采取的措施;3.發(fā)出呼吁。02Thinking話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時體裁:倡議書（呼吁學(xué)生保護文化遺產(chǎn)）Thinking(審題）Step1人稱:第一人稱話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時開頭正文結(jié)尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3

總結(jié)倡議，表達希望。要點1：背景原因+文化遺產(chǎn)現(xiàn)狀(what)

要點2具體措施和作用(howandwhy)Outlining（列出提綱）Step2交代背景、原因和目的。

寫明倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求。要點3發(fā)出倡議(acallforaction)第一人稱、第二人稱為主一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時常用語塊1.導(dǎo)致2.對…有積極（消極）的影響3.全力以赴做某事4.采取措施做某事5.提高……的意識6.呼吁某人做某事7.對…負責(zé)；是…的原因8.保護……免受傷害9.對……有害10.環(huán)境友好的contributeto/leadto/resultin/giverisetohaveapositive/negativeeffectonsparenoeffortstodosth.adopt/takemeasurestodosthenhancetheawarenessofappealtosbtodosthberesponsibleforenvironmentallyfriendly/environment-friendlyprotect…from…beharmfultoPara1:倡議的背景和目的。Recently,thereexists/isaproblemthat…(問題內(nèi)容)，leadingtomanybadeffects.Therefore,wecallonpeopletodo…(最近，存在一個關(guān)于…的問題，導(dǎo)致了不良后果，因此，我們號召人們…)We

arenowfacedwiththeproblemthat…(問題內(nèi)容)，soonbehalfof…,Icallonyoutodo…(目前，我們面臨…的問題，代表…,我號召大家…)Dueto/Becauseofsth,…is/arenowunderthreat.（因為…原因，…正受到威脅。）句子，leaving(使得)…underthreat/indanger.（因為…原因，…正處于危險中。）Thereexistsaphenomenon（現(xiàn)象）that....Therefore,itishightimeforustomakeeffortsto...

(存在一個關(guān)于…的現(xiàn)象，因此，我們號召人們…)時間+haswitnessedsth/that+從句（現(xiàn)象）

Thepastdecadeshaswitnessedthatmanymarineanimalsaredyingout.With...activityheldin...Withsbdoing.../Withsthdone/+Withsthcoming/approaching/inthecorner隨著...活動/事情舉辦/發(fā)生，...越來越受到關(guān)注/變得越來越流行/日益嚴(yán)重。peoplecaresmoreabout.../...becomemoreandmorepopular/serious...hasbecomeaheatedtopic.隨著……的臨近，我想號召大家……Withtheapproachingof...I’dliketocalloneveryoneto...As...isapproaching,I’mcallingonsb.todoPara2:倡議的具體內(nèi)容（建議或好處）

Ithinkweshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.

First,weshouldkeeptheenvironmentoftheculturalheritagesitesclean.Forinstance,throwrubbishintoadustbininsteadoflitteringeverywhere.Besides,

itisalsoveryimportantforustoobeytherulesofvisitingaculturalheritagesite.Onlyifwedothis,canwekeepitgoodenoughforourfuturegeneration.引起下文（主題句）：1)Ithinkweshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.2）Inanefforttodosth,Ithinkweshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.Para2:倡議的具體內(nèi)容（建議或好處）Inordertodo…,weareencouraged/supposed/required/expectedtodosth.(為了達成…目的，我們被鼓勵做…)Itissuggestedthatwe(should)do…(倡議我們做…)It

would

bebetterifwecoulddo…（如果我們做…,結(jié)果會更好。）Itishighlyrecommendedthat…,whichaimstodo/enablesustodo(使我們能)....（強烈推薦…,目的使為例讓我們能夠…）It’sbeneficialforsbtodoIt'shighlyrecommended/requiredthatsbshoulddo...到應(yīng)該做...的時候了It’sofgreatimportance/significanceto…bydoingso,notonlycanwe...,butwecanalso....注意：1）倡議后面可適當(dāng)拓展（原因、好處、舉例等）；

2）多個倡議之間可適當(dāng)使用

過渡詞：firstandforemost/inaddition/besides/what’smore/furthermore/moreover

3)句式多樣化

4)提供具體、多方面、可操作性的建議；非原則一、套用模板Dear

,

I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentsUnion.Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblem

（具體問題）,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Inorderto

(引出倡議目的),I'dliketocallonallthestudentsto_________.

Facedwiththeproblem,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.Ontheonehand,

________（解決措施一+理由）.

Ontheotherhand,

（解決措施二+理由）.Moreimportantly,

（解決措施三+理由）.

倡議后面可適當(dāng)拓展（原因、好處、舉例等）

Itishightimethatweshould_____(號召人們解決這一問題）.Onlywithoureffortscanweexpectabrilliantfuture.

StudentUnionPara3:倡議者的決心和希望（提出號召、動員）

Let'stakeactiontogethertoprotectculturalheritagefromnowon!

Para3:倡議者的決心和希望（提出號召、動員）結(jié)尾相關(guān)句型:

1.Suchmeasurescandefinitelymakearemarkableimprovementin...(在什么方面提高).Wewouldlikeallofyouto

attachimportanceto...(主題)!2.Itishightimethatwe...(解決這一問題）.Inaword,onlywithourjointeffortscanweexpectabrilliantfuture.3.Allinall,pleasedon'thesitateto....Let'stakeactiontogetherfromnowon!(總之，請不要猶豫去做...。讓我們從現(xiàn)在開始，一起行動起來!)4.Let'stakeactionto...!讓我們行動起來，......5.Pleaserememberthateverylittleeffortdoesmatter.Therefore,let’ssparenoeffortsto...fromnowon!

請記住，每一份小小的努力都很重要。所以，現(xiàn)在請讓我們不遺余力去......1.

為了引起人們節(jié)約用水的意識，我們學(xué)生應(yīng)該做……Toraisepeople’sawarenessofsavingwater,westudentsarerequiredthat/westudentsaresupposedto...2.

為了……，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列措施。

Withtheaimof...,wearesupposedtocarryoutaseriesofmeasures.3.

我認為有必要強調(diào)的是……Ithinkitnecessarytolaystresson...4.

我們該做點什么……

It’shightimethatweshoulddosomethingto...

5.

我們的環(huán)境正在被嚴(yán)重破壞，為了保護環(huán)境，我們學(xué)生應(yīng)該從我們自己做起，從小事做起。Toprotecttheenvironment,whichisbeingseriouslydamaged,westudentsaresupposedtostartfromourselvesanddooutbits.6.

現(xiàn)在，越來越多的人意識到，那些災(zāi)害與我們對地球的所作所為有很大的關(guān)系。Nowmoreandmorepeoplebecomeawarethatthosedisastershavemuchtodowithwhatwehavedonetotheearth.7.

眾人拾柴火焰高。讓我們共同努力保護我們的地球。Together,individualscanmakeagreatdifference.

Let’smakejointeffortstoprotectourearth.8.

總之，如果我們能在生活方式上做出微小的改變，我們就能給地球帶來巨大的影響！Inaword,ifwecanmakesmallchangesinourwayoflife,wecanmakeabigdifferencetotheearth!一、套用模板Dear

,

I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentsUnion.Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblemof/that

（具體問題）,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Inorderto______(引出倡議目的),I'dliketocallonallthestudentsto_________.

Facedwiththeproblem,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.firstandforemost,

________（解決措施一）.Additionally,

（解決措施二）.Moreimportantly,

（解決措施三）.

Inmyopinion,I'mconvincedthat（我的解決措施）.Meanwhile,itishightime__________(號召人們解決這一問題）.Inaword,onlywithoureffortscanweexpectabrilliantfuture.

StudentUnionDearfellowstudents,I'mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentsUnion.Inrecentyears,wehavetofacetheproblemofthedestructionofourculturalheritage,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Inordertopreserveourpreciousculturallegacy,I'dliketocallonallthestudentstogetinvolvedintheinitiativetosafeguardourhistoricaltreasures.Culturalheritageisaextremelyimportantresource.Itisanimportantwayforpeopletounderstandtheancientcivilization.However,someculturalrelicsinourcountryareindangerofdisappearing.

Facedwiththispressingissue,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.firstandforemost,

raisingpublicawarenessabouttheimportanceofculturalheritageiscrucial,whichwillhelptofosterasenseofresponsibilityamongindividualstoprotecttheseinvaluableheritage.Additionally,thegovernmentshouldertheresponsibilitytoimplementpoliciesandregulationsthatprotectourculturalrelics.Moreimportantly,weasstudentscancontributebyorganizingfund-raisingeventstosupporttheconservationofourculturalheritage.Bydoingso,notonlycanwe

promotewiderinterestincultureandhistory,butalsoensurethatfuturegenerationscanlearnfromandappreciateourrichhistory.

Itishightimethatweshouldacttogethertoprotectourculturalheritage.Onlywithourcollectiveeffortscanweexpectabrilliantfuturewhereoursplendidancientcivilizationcontinuestothriveandinspire.StudentUnionDearfellowstudents,AsChineseCultureHeritageDayisapproaching,I’mcallingonallofyoutotakeactiontoprotectculturalheritage.【引入話題】

Culturalheritageisaveryimportantresource.Itisanimportantwayforpeopletounderstandtheancientcivilization.【1】However,someculturalrelicsinourcountryareindangerofdisappearing(有消失的危險).Sohowtoprotectthemhasbecomeanurgentneed.Inmyopinion,firstly,people'sawarenessofprotectingculturalrelicsshouldbeimproved.Secondly,thegovernmentshouldshoulderthemainresponsibilitytoprotectthem(承擔(dān)起保護它們的主要責(zé)任).【2】Ifnecessary，lawsshouldbemadetopunishthosewhodestroythemonpurpose.Moreover,asstudents,wecanhelptoraisemoneyfor(為……籌款)protectingculturalrelics.【保護文化遺產(chǎn)的重要性及措施】Letusjoinhandstogethertoprotectoursplendidancientcivilization.【發(fā)出呼吁】

假如你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來之際，請你向報社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：1.環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。Anexampleofproposal題型解讀：倡議書由個人或集體發(fā)出，作用是倡導(dǎo)某項活動。03同類型作文潤色LookatthepicturesbelowLead-in:Thedevelopmentofindustryhascausedseriousairpollution.Globalwarminghasledtomeltingglaciersanddrought.Risingsealevelandextremeweatherarealsosevereproblemsofourenvironment.Whatcanwedotoprotectourenvironment?Givenalltheseseriousenvironmentalproblems?TalkwithyourpartnerTopic-basedchunkCheckyourmemory1.空氣污染______________2.全球氣候變暖__________3.冰川融化______________4.干旱__________________5.海平面上升____________6.極端天氣______________7.棲息地減少_____________1.makesomerules_________________2.publicizerelevantknowledge________________________________3.callonsb.todo..._________________4.keepecologicalbalance________________________________5.improvepeople'sunderstandingof...

________________________________6.takeactions______________________7.liveinharmonywith...______________8.tryone'sbesttodo..._______________airpollutionglobalwarmingmeltingglaciersdroughtrisingsealevelextremeweatherhabitatloss制定規(guī)則宣傳相關(guān)知識呼吁某人做...維持生態(tài)平衡提高人們對...的認識采取行動與...和諧共處竭盡全力做...

假如你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來之際，請你向報社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：1.環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。Anexampleofproposal題型解讀：倡議書由個人或集體發(fā)出，作用是倡導(dǎo)某項活動。StepsofWritingaCompositionThinking(審題）01

Outlining（列提綱,寫要點）02

Expanding（擴詞成句）03

Linking（連句成篇）04

Polishing（潤色）05

假如你是某國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來之際，請你給報社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。02Thinking話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時體裁:倡議書（呼吁學(xué)生保護環(huán)境）Thinking(審題）Step1人稱:第一人稱話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時開頭正文結(jié)尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3

總結(jié)倡議，表達希望。要點1環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀(what)

要點2具體措施和作用(howandwhy)Outlining（列出提綱）Step2交代背景、原因和目的。

寫明倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求。要點3發(fā)出倡議(acallforaction)

Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3...iscomingseriousproblemsgettingworseandworseleadtoaswellasurgesb.todosth.1.WorldEnvironmentDayiscoming,manypeoplehaverealizedtheseriousproblemsoftheenvironment.2.Globalwarmingisgettingworseandworse，it

alsoleadsto

extremeweather.3.Meltingglaciersaswellashabitatlossareurgingusto

protecttheenvironment.世界環(huán)境日即將到來，很多人已經(jīng)意識到了環(huán)境的嚴(yán)重問題。全球變暖正在日益惡化，這也導(dǎo)致了極端天氣。冰川融化和棲息地減少都在敦促我們?nèi)ケＷo環(huán)境。makesomelawsdrawpeople'sattentiontakeonresponsibilitiestodo...dolessharmto...improveone'sunderstandingof...liveagreenlifestyle1.Governmentshouldmakesomelawstodrawpeople'sattentiononenvironmentalprotection.2.Companiesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilitiessoastodolessharmtonature.3.Asindividuals，wecanimproveourunderstandingof

environmentalprotectionandliveagreenlifestyle.Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3Para2（Body）政府應(yīng)該制定相關(guān)的法律來吸引人們的關(guān)注。企業(yè)應(yīng)該承擔(dān)他們的職責(zé)以便減少對自然的傷害。作為個人，我們可以提高環(huán)保意識，過綠色生活。

para3（Ending）

Itishightimethat...tryone'sbestto...withourjointeffortspayoffExpanding(擴詞成句）Step31.It'shightimethatweshouldtryourbestto

protectourownplanet.2.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatwithourjointefforts,ourhardworkwillfinallypayoff.是時候竭盡全力來保護我們的地球了。我堅信在我們的努力下，我們的辛苦付出終會獲得回報。Linking(連句成篇）Step4添加合適的過渡詞：1.表順序：首先：Initially,...Tobeginwith,…Firstandforemost,…Inthefirstplace,…Whatcomesfirstisthat...其次：Inaddition,...Additionally,...What'smore,..Moreover,...

Whatcomesnextisthat...Asidefromthat,...最后：Ultimately,...Lastbutnotleast,...2.表邏輯：表原因：since...as...because...dueto...owingto...onaccountof...表目的：inorderto...soasto...inorderthat...sothat...Step5makesomelaws

laydownrelevantlawsimprovepeople'sunderstandingof...enhancepeople'sawarenessof...

0203getworseandworse

getincreasinglybad01Polishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5tryone'sbestto...sparenoeffortto.../gotoone'slengthsto...0506keepecologicalbalance

maintain/sustainecologicalbanlance04

rememberbearinmindPolishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5TheWorldEnvironmentDayiscoming...Theairpollution

isgettingworse...01WithWorldEnvironmentDay

coming...with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):with+賓語+賓補With

theairpollution

gettingworse...approaching...Polishing(錘煉句式1-非謂語動詞）Step5Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad.Italsoleadstoextremeweather.Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

Itcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.02Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad,whichalsoleadstoextremeweather.定語從句合并簡單句Polishing(錘煉句式2-定語從句）Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,whichcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.Step5Governmentshouldlaydownrelevantlawsandcompaniesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.Maintainingecologicalbalanceissocrucialforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnature.03Notonlyshouldgovernmentlaydownrelevantlaws,companiesalsoneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.1.notonly...,(but)also...2.so+adj.位于句首3.否定詞位于句首4.only+狀語位于句首Polishing(錘煉句式3-部分倒裝）SocrucialismaintaningecologicalbalanceforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnatureStep5Manymarineanimalsaredyingoutduringthepastdecades.Ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamagedinthepastfewcenturies.04Thepastdecadeshaswitnessedthatmanymarineanimalsaredyingout.時間+haswitnessedthat...Polishing(錘煉句式4-巧用witness）Thepastfewcenturieshaswitnessedthat

ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamaged.

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5

Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurgent.Toprotectourenvironment,weshouldworktogether.Firstly,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoraisepeople'sunderstandingofenvironmentalprotection.Secondly,companiesshouldneverpourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisimportantforkeepingthetheecologicalbalance.Thirdly,ourgovernmentshouldalsomakesomerulestobananyillegalbehaviors.It'shightimethatwetriedourbesttoprotectourplanetfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Rememberthatwecanliveahappierandhealthierlifebyprotectingourenvironment!Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurg