英語讀后續(xù)寫之情緒表達(dá)課件高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫貳零壹玖目錄/讀后續(xù)寫“八步走”壹/高分素材句貳壹讀后續(xù)寫“八步走”1.情緒------情緒描寫。從原材料中體會(huì)作者相應(yīng)情緒，借助情緒的延續(xù)，以此為銜接，續(xù)寫。2.細(xì)節(jié)-----進(jìn)一步描述。3.轉(zhuǎn)折----個(gè)人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折。4.轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)-----事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，讓人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。5.失望----問題仍然沒有解決或者又出現(xiàn)了新的問題。6.想法----面對(duì)沒有解決的問題或者新問題，突然有了想法或感觸。7.結(jié)局-----在想法或感觸的影響下，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折/轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。8.點(diǎn)題-----呼應(yīng)前文備注：這八步不是固定的，可以根據(jù)自己的想法打亂部分順序，也可以略寫個(gè)別環(huán)節(jié)。此步驟，可讓續(xù)寫有話可說，讓情節(jié)續(xù)寫跌宕起伏，前提是要讀懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脈絡(luò)。貳高分素材句悲傷1.Alumpcametohisthroat.2.Hereyeswereredfromcrying.3.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.4.Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.害怕1.Shewastoofrightenedtotellherfamilywhathadhappened.2.Hisheartwaspounding,asifhewerefrightened.3.Lizawassofrightenedthatshecouldn'tmakeasound.4.Ibowedmyheadtimidlyanddarednotlookatmyfather'scloudyface.5.Mybrainisblank.Ijustwanttoleavethishorribleplace.高興1.Whensheknew...shefeltexcited/thrilled.2.Whensheknew...hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.3.Whensheknew...herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.4.Whensheknew...awildexcitementtookholdofher.5.Knowing...shefeltasurgeofexcitement.傷心1.Asadnesscameoverher.2.Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.3.Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.4.Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.5.Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.生氣1.Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.2.Hefeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.3.Boilingwithrage,heshookhisfistatme.4.Filledwithfury,shewasunabletoutterasingleword.鼓起勇氣1.Hesummoneduphiscourageandlodgedaprotestwithhisfather.2.Ifinallypluckedupthecouragetoaskherfor..毫不猶豫1.Shecouldhardlywaitto...2.Hardlythinking/Withouteventhinking,heranto...失望1.Butbadluckforme,Ifailedinmyattempttopersuadeher.2.Sheclosedhereyestightlyinavainattempttoholdbackthetears.3.Alloureffortswereinvain.4.Shekeptpacing,wonderingwhattodonext.5.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shedidn'tknowwhattodonext.6.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shewasunsureofwhattodonext.7.Shewasatalosswhattodo.8.Hewasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.結(jié)局1.