Unit3EnvironmentalProtectionUsingLanguage寫作課件高中英語人教版選擇性

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REDUCINGWATERPOLLUTIONINTHELIRIVERWriteareportonanenvironmentalissueUsingLanguageItisoneofthemostwell-knowntouristdestinationsinChina’sGuangxiZhuangAutonomousRegion.

LiRiverLeadin1.Whatriverisit?Pollution2.Nowlet’slookatsomepicturesofLiRiver.Whatdoyouthinkofthem?3.WhatdoyouthinkmighthavecausedwaterpollutionintheLiriver?Thewastefromalargenumberoftouristsandenterpirses.Reading章節(jié)副標(biāo)題壹What’sthemainideaofthetext?ThetextmainlytalksaboutLiRiver’s_________and_____________________________.problemsmeasurestakentoprotecttheriverSkimming1.Itattractsmillionsofdomesticandforeignvisitorseachyear.2.Kitchensonboardwereusinglotsoffood，whichwasoftenthrownintothewater.3.Thecollectionandtransportofindustrialwastewasalsoimproved.4.Thelocalgovernmentsetupstrictregulationsregardingfurtherindustrialdevelopment.5.Withsuchcampaignsineffect.China’swaterwaysareheadingtowardsacleanandsustainablefuture.TFoilFhouseholdTTReadthetextanddecidewhetherthefollowingsentencesaretrue(T)orfalse(F).AnalysingStudythelanguagestructure.貳Para.1IntroducingthetopicPara.2Describingthe_______problemPara.3Presentingsome_______measuresPara.4Presentingfurther_______solutionsmeasures1.Readthetextandcompletetheparagraphsummaries.P333Studytheorganisationandlanguagefeatures.measures3.Drawamindmaptoshowthemeasuresthatdealwiththepollution.wastewatertreatmentfacilitiesRiverChiefSystem...mediaWritingUsewhatyouhavelearnttowriteareportonanenvironmentalissue1.MasterthestructureofthiskindofreportPart1：Introducethe_______Whatistheissue?Whydoesitneedtobedealtwith?Part2：Describethe_________Wheredoestheissueoccur?Whatareitscauses?Whateffectsdoesithave?Part3：Presentthe.Whatactionshavebeentakensofar?Whatfutureactionsareplanned?topic;problem；solution(s)2.Howtomakethearticlelogically表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but、however、despite、although/though/while…表因果關(guān)系：dueto/owingto/becauseof、thanksto、asaresultof、becausetherefore/thus、asaresult、so…that…表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：notonly…but，moreover/besides,inaddition表總結(jié)關(guān)系：inaword、tosumup、allinallTense時態(tài)：以simplepasttense（一般過去時）、simplepresenttense（一般現(xiàn)在時）、presentperfecttense（現(xiàn)在完成時）為主。personalreference（人稱）以thirdperson（第三人稱）為主。3.TenseandpersonalreferenceTense時態(tài)：以simplepasttense（一般過去時）、simplepresenttense（一般現(xiàn)在時）、presentperfecttense（現(xiàn)在完成時）為主。personalreference（人稱）以thirdperson（第三人稱）為主。3.Tenseandpersonalreference把垃圾扔進(jìn)對...有負(fù)面有負(fù)面影響導(dǎo)致這個問題造成嚴(yán)重的水問題throwgarbageintohaveanegativeeffectoncontributetotheproblemleadtoseverewaterqualityissues4.Usefulexpressionsfromthepassagepassage破壞自然環(huán)境改善水質(zhì)制定嚴(yán)格規(guī)定宣傳環(huán)保意識damagethenaturalenvironmentimprovethewaterqualitysetupstrictregulationsspreadenvironmentalawareness一項綜合倡議實施定期檢查解決水污染隨著這些運動的展開acomprehensiveinitiativecarryoutinspectionsregularlytacklewaterpollutionwithsuchcampaignsineffectItisreportedthat…據(jù)報道Dozensofpeoplehavecometorealize…許多人意識到…Sthusedtobe…butuptonowithasbeen…某物過去…但到目前為止它…Therefore,itisessentialthat…因此，很重要…Moreover，peopleareexpectedto…而且，人們應(yīng)該…5.Usefulsentencepatterns東湖曾經(jīng)是一處旅游勝地，假設(shè)你是李華，根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇報道并呼吁社會關(guān)注當(dāng)?shù)卣卫頄|湖污染問題。1.曾經(jīng)的情景（景美、水清、魚兒嬉戲、游客多）；2.后來的狀況（生活廢水污染、游客亂扔垃圾）；3.當(dāng)?shù)卣呀?jīng)采取措施來拯救西湖，情況有所好轉(zhuǎn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4Usewhatyouhavelearnttowriteareportonanenvironmentalissue.

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Writingsteps1Studythetaskcarefully1.Theme：WhatcausedthepollutionoftheEastLakeandhowtoreduceit2.Typeofwriting：areport3.Tense：Thesimplepresenttenseandthesimplepasttense4.Person：thethirdperson(it,they、people、government)2StructureParagraph1：TheEastLakeinthepastandnow（引出東湖受污染的主題）Paragraph2:HowtheEastLakewaspolluted（描述東湖受污染的因素，使用分層類表達(dá)方式）Paragraph3:Thesolutionstoreducingthepollution（可以以描述政府的做法收尾）優(yōu)點：語言結(jié)構(gòu)流暢，靈活使用從句，錯誤較少，三段式覆蓋了要點。缺點：第一段太長，造成頭重腳輕，部分語句可以調(diào)整到第二段，效果會更好。范文點評優(yōu)點：按照三段式完成了寫作，同時融合了報告的模板，內(nèi)容詳實。缺點：本文單詞的大小寫（粗心）、謂語動詞的錯誤較大，修改后文章會很好很多。范文點評本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，且語言結(jié)構(gòu)流暢多樣性，如果第二段能擴大措施句就更好。范文點評精彩范文

EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace,wherethewaterwasclearandfishesswamhappily.Travellerscamefromalloverthenationtovisitit,enjoyingitsbeauty.However,thewaterhassufferedfrompollutiongreatly.

Millionsoftonsofwastewaterfromfactoriesaroundhavebeenkeptpouringintoitdayandnight.Moreover,rubbishisoftenthrownintoitbythevisitors,whichhaspollutedthelakebadly.

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