2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit4Friendsforever表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊

PAGEUnit4Friendsforever為故事續(xù)寫一個(gè)結(jié)尾本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是為故事寫一個(gè)結(jié)尾，所設(shè)計(jì)的結(jié)尾可以是出乎意料的，也可以是符合常規(guī)的。寫作中，時(shí)態(tài)通常運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)。[寫作步驟]1．閱讀——了解故事；快速閱讀故事，了解故事是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索綻開的，這樣有利于“順藤摸瓜”，分清晰人物關(guān)系和事務(wù)的脈絡(luò)。2．續(xù)寫——完成故事；細(xì)致審題，明確續(xù)寫要求，如詞數(shù)限制等確定續(xù)寫結(jié)尾的內(nèi)容。[常用詞塊]1．findouttherealreasonwhyhewaslateforclass找出他上課遲到的真實(shí)緣由2．walkuptomeandshakehandswithme走向我和我握了握手3．shakehandswithalmosteveryonepresent幾乎和在場的每一個(gè)人握手4．insteadoftellingmethetruth反而沒有告知我真相5．keepcalmandstaysilent保持冷靜并且不要講話6．takewhattheoldmansaidseriouslyandlistenattentively細(xì)致對待老人的話并細(xì)致聽講7．expecteveryoneofustokeepapositiveattitudetowardslife期盼我們每個(gè)人對生活保持主動(dòng)的看法8．honestlyacceptourcriticism醇厚地接受了我們的指責(zé)9．givehimahighfiveandawarmhug給他了一個(gè)擊掌激勵(lì)和熱忱的擁抱10．gototheusualbarinpersontomeethim親自去了通常到的酒吧去見他[經(jīng)典結(jié)尾句]1．It'sfunny.Don'tevertellanybodyanything.Ifyoudo，youstartmissingeverybody.說來好笑。你千萬別跟任何人談任何事情。你只要一談起，就會(huì)惦念起每一個(gè)人?！尔溙锢锏氖赝摺?．Thecreaturesoutsidelookedfrompigtoman，andfrommantopig，andfrompigtomanagain；butalreadyitwasimpossibletosaywhichwaswhich.外面的生靈是從豬看到人，又從人看到豬，再從豬看到人；但他們已經(jīng)分不清誰是豬，誰是人了?！秳?dòng)物農(nóng)場》3．Uptheroad，inhisshack，theoldmanwassleepingagain.Hewasstillsleepingonhisfaceandtheboywassittingbyhimwatchinghim.Theoldmanwasdreamingaboutthelions.在大路另一頭老人的窩棚里，他又睡著了。他照舊臉朝下躺著，孩子坐在他身邊，守著他。老人又一次夢見了獅子?！独先伺c?！?．Itisafar，farbetterthingthatIdo，thanIhaveeverdone；itisafar，farbetterrestthatIgoto，thanIhaveeverknown.我今日所做的事遠(yuǎn)比我往日的所作所為更好，更好；我今日將享受的安眠遠(yuǎn)比我所知的一切更好，更好?！峨p城記》5．ItturnedoutthelightandwentintoJem'sroom.Hewouldbethereallnight，andhewouldbetherewhenJemwakedupinthemorning.他關(guān)了燈，回到杰姆的房間去了。整個(gè)晚上他都會(huì)在杰姆身邊。早上杰姆醒來時(shí)，他也會(huì)在杰姆身邊?！稓⑺酪恢恢B》6．Ifthisshouldhappen，pleasecomfortme.Sendmewordthathehascomeback.假如發(fā)生了這一切，請剛好告知我，好讓我得到勸慰。請給我捎個(gè)話，就說他已經(jīng)回來了?！缎⊥踝印废旅媸且粋€(gè)不完整的故事，請為它續(xù)寫80詞左右的結(jié)尾。Thesea'ssurpriseJimandAndywalkedalongthebeach，lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaythoughwasdifferent.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks.Uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn'tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenJimsawafish.Itwasstranded(擱淺)onthebeach，justfloppingaround.“Canittalk？”Andyasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish，”Jimsaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgiveusanywishes？”Andylaughed.Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime.”Jimsmiled.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacork(木塞)inthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamapinsideoraspirit？”jokedAndy.Andyreacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthespiritiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure，”Jimsaid.Andypushedagainonthecork.Hedraggeditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Andyshookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn'tseeanything.Jimlookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It'sjustanoldwinebottle，”Jimcomplained.Hegrabbedthebottleandthrewitbackontothesand.Thebottlehitarockandbrokeintomanypieces.BothAndyandJimgaspedastheysawalong，silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thentheylookedateachother.Whydidn'titmakeanynoisewhentheyshookthebottle？Whydidn'ttheyseeit？Andybentovertopickupthekey.Suddenlytheglasspiecescametogethertoformabottleagain.Thekeywasmysteriouslybackinside！Andthebottlebeganrollingslowlytowardthesea.[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Twoboysranafterit.Whentheyenteredthesea，theyfoundthemselveswalkingonthesurfaceoftheseawater.Atlast，theyarrivedatanislandandfoundalotoftreasurethere.Theyweresoexcitedthattheyforgotthefairywhotookthemhere.Whentheycalmeddown，theyfoundthefairynowhere.Theybegantomakeaboatbythemselvesandfinallytheycamebackwithalotofmoney.名師點(diǎn)評：1．故事的結(jié)尾過于平鋪直敘；2．故事的結(jié)尾與前面的描述出入較大，從“獲救的小魚知恩圖報(bào)”這個(gè)角度去寫。[升格作文]Twoboysranafterit.Whentheyenteredthesea，astonishinglytheydidn'tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofit.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewaslotsoftreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasmuchaspossible，”avoicecamefromthecoastwhereatalkingfishwasswimming.ItwasthestrandedfishthatJimsavedandputbackintothewater.下面是一個(gè)不完整的故事，請為它續(xù)寫80詞左右的結(jié)尾。Abouttenyearsago，mywifeandIlefthomeandtookatriptotheGrandCanyoninArizona.Ididn'tliketocarryallmykeysinmypocketduringalongwalksoItookoffthecarkeyandlefttherestinthecar.Wecameback，andIputthekeysomewhereinthecarwithouttyingittothekeyring.WemadeafireandwenttosleepinthebackoftheSUV.Thenextmorning，wewerecleaningupourcampsitewhenIsawamagpie(喜鵲)insidemycar.ItwastheonlytimeIhadeverseenabirdofanykindinsidethecar.Iwalkedover，anditflewaway.Whenwegotinthecartogohome，Icouldn'tfindthekey.Wesearchedandsearched，evenemptyingoutthecarcompletely，butitwasgone.Thenithitme.Themagpiemusthavetakenit.Aft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