2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit1Natureinthebalance表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案含解析牛津譯林版必修第三冊(cè)

PAGEUnit1Natureinthebalance寫(xiě)一封建議信本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是建議信，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信的目的是向有關(guān)組織或個(gè)人提出建議，所提建議旨在針對(duì)某種事物或現(xiàn)象，提出一些改進(jìn)的措施。建議信一般實(shí)行三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭——提出寫(xiě)建議信的緣由。2．主體——寫(xiě)出建議的詳細(xì)內(nèi)容，并指出你所提出的建議可能會(huì)帶來(lái)的好處。3．結(jié)尾——表明希望自己的建議被接受。[常用詞塊]1．wildlife野生生物2．extinction滅亡3．indangerof處于……危急中4．withthedevelopmentof...隨著……的發(fā)展5．takemeasures/steps實(shí)行措施6．protect...from...愛(ài)護(hù)……免受……7．stopsb.fromdoingsth.阻擋某人做某事8．resultin導(dǎo)致9．payattentionto留意10．tomakemattersworse使事情更糟糕的是11．low-carbon低碳的12．polluted受污染的13．a(chǎn)rouseone'sawarenessof...喚起某人的……意識(shí)14．runout用完15．a(chǎn)djustto適應(yīng)[常用語(yǔ)句]精彩開(kāi)頭(1)I'mwritingtotellyouthat...(2)Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...(3)Manypeopleareworriedabout...(4)Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...豐滿主體(1)Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...(2)Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...(3)Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...(4)We'drathernot...butdo...(5)We'dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.余味結(jié)尾(1)Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.(2)Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.(3)Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.(4)Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.(5)Weneedyoursupporttomakemoreandmorepeople...假如你叫李華，你所生活的城市四周有很多動(dòng)植物正漸漸削減，對(duì)此你想向有關(guān)部門(mén)寫(xiě)一封信，分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的緣由，并依據(jù)實(shí)際狀況提出切實(shí)可行的幾條建議。以下幾條要點(diǎn)要包括在內(nèi)：1．野生動(dòng)植物的現(xiàn)狀；2．分析造成很多野生動(dòng)植物面臨滅亡的緣由；3．提出幾條愛(ài)護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的詳細(xì)措施。留意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.Yourssincerely，LiHua[參考范文]DearSir/Madam，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.Asweknow，manyspeciesofwildlifeareindangerofextinction.Thisisbecausetheenvironmentthattheyarelivinginhasbeendestroyedgreatly.Theynotonlyhavelittletoeat，butalsocanbekilledbyhumanbeings.Personally，moremeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectthemfrombeinghurt.Firstly，morelawsmustbemadetostoppeoplefromcuttingdowntrees.Secondly，allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewaterbeforeitispouredintoriversorlakes.