2025屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)好題專題07書面表達(dá)-應(yīng)用文寫作第03期含解析

書面表達(dá)--應(yīng)用文寫作【2025屆湖北省六校第一次聯(lián)考英語試題】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。你校新來一批美國溝通生，學(xué)校要組織迎新晚會請你用英文給他們的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Tom寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：時(shí)間：本周六晚上6點(diǎn)到8點(diǎn)；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂；活動：表演節(jié)目，中美學(xué)生互動。留意：詞數(shù)100左右，可合理添加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)；開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTom,Welcometoourschool!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’UnionLiHua【答案】DearTom,Welcometoourschool!Incelebrationofyourarrival,agrandpartyistobeheldintheschoolhall.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutoparticipateinit.Asscheduled,thepartyfallsonthisSaturday,lastingfrom6pmto8pm,duringwhichtimeawidevarietyofwonderfulperformanceswillbeputon.Students,blessedwithatalentformusic,cross-talk,ordancewillshowthemselvesconfidently.Moreimportantly,wecanhaveface-to-facetalksintheactivitiessothatwewillhaveabetterunderstandingofeachother.Hopefully,youcansparetimetojoinus.Shouldyouhaveanyquestion,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Mayyouhaveagoodtimeinourschool.Students’UnionLiHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類寫作。第1步：依據(jù)提示可知，假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。你校新來一批美國溝通生，學(xué)校要組織迎新晚會請你用英文給他們的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Tom寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：時(shí)間：本周六晚上6點(diǎn)到8點(diǎn)；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂；活動：表演節(jié)目，中美學(xué)生互動。第2步：依據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：incelebrationof(為慶?！?；wouldliketo(想要)；performances(表演)；sparetime(抽時(shí)間)等。第3步：依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如Asscheduled,thepartyfallsonthisSaturday,lastingfrom6pmto8pm,duringwhichtimeawidevarietyofwonderfulperformanceswillbeputon.運(yùn)用了非限制性定語從句；Moreimportantly,wecanhaveface-to-facetalksintheactivitiessothatwewillhaveabetterunderstandingofeachother.運(yùn)用目的狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。另外文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！舅拇ㄊ〕啥际?025屆高三中學(xué)畢業(yè)班摸底】假定你是李華。你原定下個(gè)月去英國參與筆友Kevin的中學(xué)畢業(yè)典禮，現(xiàn)因故無法成行。請給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.深表歉意；2.說明緣由；3.誠心祝愿。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearKevin，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearKevin，I

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thatIcan'tgotoyourgraduationceremony.Hearingthatyouwouldgraduatefromhighschool,Ihadintendedtoattendyourgraduationceremony.However,mylittlebrothersuddenlyfellillandneededtostayinhospitalforaweek.What’sworse,myparentsaresobusythattheydon’thavetimetolookafterhim,soIhavetotakecareofhimthere.Therefore,Ican’tmeetyouinBritain.Ihopeyouwon’tbeangrywithme.AssoonasI’mfree,Iwillpayavisittoyou.Ihopeyouhaveagoodtimeatthegraduationceremonyandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封電子郵件給即將中學(xué)畢業(yè)的英國筆友Kevin，告知他你不能參與他的中學(xué)畢業(yè)典禮，表達(dá)歉意。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法?總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式支配所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.深表歉意；2.說明緣由；3.誠心祝愿。其次步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）graduationceremony；hadintendedtodosth.；stayinhospital；lookafter；takecareof；beangrywithsb.；payavisittosb.第三步：連詞成句1.Hearingthatyouwouldgraduatefromhighschool,Ihadintendedtoattendyourgraduationceremony.2.mylittlebrothersuddenlyfellillandneededtostayinhospitalforaweek.3.myparentsaresobusythattheydon’thavetimetolookafterhim,soIhavetotakecareofhimthere.4.Ihopeyouwon’tbeangrywithme.5.AssoonasI’mfree,Iwillpayavisittoyou.(依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)依次：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表換一種方式表達(dá)：Inotherwords,thatistosay,6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表選擇：either…or…，or連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚。第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了主從復(fù)合句，如Hearingthatyouwouldgraduatefromhighschool這句話中用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；What’sworse,myparentsaresobusythattheydon’thavetimetolookafterhim,soIhavetotakecareofhimthere.so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。運(yùn)用了特別好的短語，如hadintendedtodosth.，stayinhospital，takecareof，payavisittosb.等，為文章增色不少；并留意了句子的連接，如However，What’sworse，Therefore。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?025屆湖南省教化聯(lián)合體高三7月聯(lián)考】假定你是李華，你所在的城市將有一場面對外國留學(xué)生的講座。Mike是你的留學(xué)生摯友，你確定給他寫封郵件，告知該講座的有關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容包括：1.講座的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.講座內(nèi)容：中國的名勝；3.建議他去聽這個(gè)講座。留意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,Goodnewsforyou.Therewillbealectureforforeignstudentsat9onSaturdaymorninginthecitytrainingcenter.ThelectureisaboutplacesofinterestinChina.Sowhydon’tyouattendit?It’sreallyagoodopportunityforyou,asyouaresointerestedintravellinginChina.NotonlywillyoulearnmoreaboutfamousplacesinChina,butyouwillalsogetabetterunderstandingofChinesecultureandhistory.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類寫作。第1步：依據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你所在的城市將有一場面對外國留學(xué)生的講座。Mike是你的留學(xué)生摯友，你確定給他寫封郵件，告知該講座的有關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容包括：1.講座的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.講座內(nèi)容：中國的名勝；3.建議他去聽這個(gè)講座。第2步：依據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：placesofinterest(名勝古跡)；attend(出席，參與)；opportunity(機(jī)會)；getabetterunderstandingof(更好地理解)等。第3步：依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般將來時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如It’sreallyagoodopportunityforyou,asyouaresointerestedintravellinginChina.運(yùn)用緣由狀語從句；NotonlywillyoulearnmoreaboutfamousplacesinChina,butyouwillalsogetabetterunderstandingofChinesecultureandhistory.運(yùn)用倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。另外文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?025屆江蘇省徐州市第一中學(xué)新高考全國卷第一次適應(yīng)性考試】假定你是李華，你們學(xué)校要舉辦傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)講座，你的留學(xué)生摯友Chris對中國傳統(tǒng)文化有深厚的愛好，因此，你想邀請他參與該講座。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．講座的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2．講座的內(nèi)容。留意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：傳統(tǒng)中醫(yī)講座alectureontraditionalChinesemedicineDearChris,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】OnePossibleVersion：DearChris,KnowingyouhaveakeeninterestintraditionalChineseCulture,Ican’twaittoinviteyoutoalectureontraditionalChinesemedicinewhichwillbehostinmyschool.Thelecturewillbeginat3p.m.thisSundayintheschoolhall.AnexpertisgoingtonarratethedevelopmenthistoryoftraditionalChinesemedicineandsharesomesignificantworldwideachievementswithus.AsfarasIcansee,itcanenrichyourunderstandingoftraditionalChinesemedicineandmakeyourealizehowmuchdifferencetraditionalChineseculturehasmadeinthepresentworld.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文依據(jù)文章所給的信息提示寫一封邀請信。寫作要點(diǎn)包括向Chris發(fā)出邀請，介紹講座的相關(guān)信息：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容以及活動支配等．寫作時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。本題對于考生的綜合實(shí)力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的實(shí)力和組織要點(diǎn)的實(shí)力。須要留意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都須要包括。寫作時(shí)留意精確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量運(yùn)用自己熟識的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要留意運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)睛】本書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)齊全，上下文連貫，運(yùn)用肯定數(shù)量的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，讓句子更加生動豐滿，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了很多高級詞匯和固定短語，提高文章的檔次，體現(xiàn)了對英語的嫻熟的駕馭實(shí)力。重要短語如：alectureontraditionalChinesemedicine（一場關(guān)于中醫(yī)的講座）；haveakeeninterestin（對…感愛好）；share…with…（共享）；lookforwardto（期盼，盼望）；AsfarasIcansee（依我來看）等等。高級句型結(jié)構(gòu)如：KnowingyouhaveakeeninterestintraditionalChineseCulture,Ican’twaittoinviteyoutoalectureontraditionalChinesemedicinewhichwillbehostinmyschool.本句用現(xiàn)在分詞短語Knowing…作狀語，還有賓語從句…youhaveakeeninterestintraditionalChineseCulture和一個(gè)以which引導(dǎo)的定語從句whichwillbehostinmyschool，另外該定語從句中運(yùn)用了被動語態(tài)。【2025屆廣西欽州市第一中學(xué)高三開學(xué)摸底】假定你是李華，你的好友Taylor今日上午來你家找你陪她練習(xí)漢語口語。你因臨時(shí)有急事外出，讓她撲了個(gè)空。請依據(jù)以上情景，給Taylor寫一封信。內(nèi)容如下：1.表示歉意；2.說明詳細(xì)緣由，并希望他能諒解；3.告知他下次練習(xí)活動的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和話題。DearTaylor,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTaylor,IamterriblysorrythatIcouldn’tpracticespokenChinesewithyouthistime.Ishouldhavetoldyouinadvance,butsomethinghappenedbeyondmyexpectation.Myteachercalledmetosendhiscomputertohisoffice.Unfortunately,mymobilephonegotaflatbatteryafterIreceivedthecall.Worstofall,Iwascaughtinatrafficjamonmywayback.NextSaturdayafternoon,I’dliketomeetyouatthreeo’clockatthegateintheparknearourcollege.WewilltalkaboutChinesetablemanners.Ifpossible,wouldyoupleasebefamiliarwiththetopicbeforeourpractice?Onceagain,I’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopetoseeyousoon.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。假定你是李華，你的好友Taylor今日上午來你家找你陪她練習(xí)漢語口語。你因臨時(shí)有急事外出，讓她撲了個(gè)空。請依據(jù)以上情景，給Taylor寫一封信。第一步：審題。體裁：應(yīng)用文。時(shí)態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。要點(diǎn)：1.表示歉意；2.說明詳細(xì)緣由，并希望他能諒解；3.告知他下次練習(xí)活動的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和話題其次步：列重點(diǎn)詞語，詞組（留意好詞的運(yùn)用）。如inadvance；beyondmyexpectation；getaflatbattery；worstofall；becaughtin；onmywayback；ifpossible等第三步：連詞成句（留意好句型的運(yùn)用，如非謂語動詞，復(fù)合句，留意拼法和時(shí)態(tài)問題）第四步：連句成篇（留意連接詞的運(yùn)用）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)依次：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…,Finally,Intheend,Atlast;2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also);3.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡。第五步：潤色修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，語言規(guī)范，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，段落分布合理。作者在文中較多運(yùn)用主從復(fù)合句，如Unfortunately,mymobilephonegotaflatbatteryafterIreceivedthecall.運(yùn)用了狀語從句；Onceagain,I’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.運(yùn)用了過去分詞。主從復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用，使得文章的句式敏捷多變，為文章增加了色調(diào)。【2025屆江西省景德鎮(zhèn)一中高三8月月考】假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)依據(jù)英語課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.劇情簡介;2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容;3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearMissEvans,IamLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavor.We’dliketoadapttheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,wesavedascaredboy.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類寫作。第1步：依據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)依據(jù)英語課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.劇情簡介;2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容;3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。第2步：依據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：sincerity(真誠)；askyouafavor(懇求你的幫助)；adapt(改編)；sparesometime(抽時(shí)間)等。第3步：依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?這句話運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！竞鲜°枇_2025屆高三入學(xué)考試】某英文雜志正在以“Fancyyourselfasaninterviewer”為主題的征文活動，請你以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.采訪的對象；2.采訪的緣由；3.想提的問題。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.短文的標(biāo)題已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterviewThepersonIwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei.IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.IhavelongbeeninterestedinspaceexplorationandIbelieveIcouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit.IfIcouldinterviewhim,Iwouldaskhimwhatmadehimanastronautandhowhewastrained.IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生參與“Fancyyourselfasaninterviewer”為主題的征文活動，以“AFamousChineseIWouldLiketoInterview”為題，寫一篇英語短文。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式支配所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.采訪的對象2.采訪的緣由3.想提的問題1）成為宇航員的緣由。（thereasonsofbeinganastronaut）2）如何接受訓(xùn)練。（howhewasbetrained）3)在太空的感受。（thefeelinginspace）4)個(gè)人生活。（personallife）其次步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）wouldliketo;oneofthe;intheworld;havelongbeeninterestedin;inspace第三步：連詞成句1.ThepersonIwouldliketointerviewisYangLiwei.2.IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.3.Ihavelongbeeninterestedinspaceexploration4.IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)依次：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了一些固定詞組和高級句式。如wouldliketo;oneofthe;intheworld等。賓語從句IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.緣由狀語從句IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?025屆四川省成都附屬試驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期入學(xué)考試】前段時(shí)間，受新冠肺炎疫情影響，大家都自我隔離在家。你校英國外教Simon從英國購買5萬只口罩捐贈給市人民醫(yī)院，自愿在社區(qū)做志愿者，為社區(qū)居民服務(wù)。校學(xué)生會得知狀況后，請你以校學(xué)生會的名義給Simon寫一封感謝信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.表達(dá)對他的謝意；2.闡明其行為的意義和影響；3.提示他留意自身防護(hù)。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：COVID-19新冠肺炎DearSimon,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union【答案】DearSimon,Hearingofyourgenerousdonationofmasksandselflessvoluntaryservice,we’requitetouched.OnbehalfoftheStudents’UnionIamwritingtoexpressourdeepestgratitude.Affectedbythenewcoronarypneumonia,ourcitywasinurgentneedofprotectivearticlessuchasmasksafewdaysearlier.Withoutthe50,000masksyoudonated,medicalworkerswouldstillbeinadilemma.Inaddition,weespeciallyappreciateyourgivingupthewholeSpringFestivalholidayandvolunteeringtoservepeopleinthecommunity.Itreallyreducesthevolunteers’workloadandmakesresidents’lifeeasier.Pleaseacceptoursincerethanksforyourtimelyandselflesshelpanddotakegreatcareofyourownsafetyduringthisspecialperiod.Bestwishes!Students’Union【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封感謝信。第一步：明確要求。本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生給外教老師Simon寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對Simon老師在疫情期間捐贈口罩、做志愿者的感謝。依據(jù)題目中的三條要點(diǎn)：1.表達(dá)對他的謝意；2.闡明其行為的意義和影響；3.提示他留意自身防護(hù)，寫作分成三段。第一段：說明寫信來意，表達(dá)感謝。其次段：闡明其行為的意義和影響。第三段：提示他留意自身防護(hù)。其次步：列關(guān)鍵詞。如：selfless，expressgratitude，inurgentneedof，donate，beinadilemma，workload，takegreatcareof等。第三步：連詞成句。依據(jù)列出的關(guān)鍵詞造句，留意主謂一樣，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)等語法。第四步：連句成文。留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，如：Inaddition等。書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】此范文表達(dá)流暢，內(nèi)容全面，符合要求。其中值得學(xué)習(xí)的句型有：非謂語動詞作狀語Affectedbythenewcoronarypneumonia,ourcitywasinurgentneedofprotectivearticlessuchasmasksafewdaysearlier.虛擬語氣Withoutthe50,000masksyoudonated,medicalworkerswouldstillbeinadilemma.【2025屆（全國I卷）高三入學(xué)調(diào)研試】假定你是李華，你最近讀了一篇主題為"TheTrueMeaningofHappiness"的文章。請給你的英國摯友Jack發(fā)一封郵件，與他共享你對歡樂的理解，內(nèi)容包括：1.歡樂的真正意義；2.獲得歡樂的途徑。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJack，Recently,1readapassage----TheTrueMeaningofHappiness.I'mgladtosharemyviewswithyou.Undoubtedly,allofuslookforhappiness,butwhatisthetruemeaningofhappiness?Personally,workinghardandbeingcommittedtowhateverwearedoingcanmakeusfeelhappy.Inreality,nothingcanreplacethesenseofachievementonefeelsaftermuchdevotion.Mybestwaytogainhappinessisasfollows.Firstly,I'mburiedinmystudies.OnlywhenItrymybestcanIgainasenseofhappiness.Secondly,I'mwillingtosharemyhappinesswithothers.Sharingcanreleasemysorrowanddoublemypleasure.What'syouropinion?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。第1步：依據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，你最近讀了一篇主題為"TheTrueMeaningofHappiness"的文章。請給你的英國摯友Jack發(fā)一封郵件，與他共享你對歡樂的理解，內(nèi)容包括：1.歡樂的真正意義；2.獲得歡樂的途徑。第2步：依據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：sharemyviewswithyou（和你共享我的觀點(diǎn)）；lookforhappiness（找尋華蜜）；beingcommittedto（決心從事）；gainasenseofhappiness（獲得一種華蜜感）；等。第3步：依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實(shí)力。文中運(yùn)用高級句子。workinghardandbeingcommittedtowhateverwearedoingcanmakeusfeelhappy.句中運(yùn)用動名詞做主語和whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；OnlywhenItrymybestcanIgainasenseofhappiness.部分倒裝句用在句中?！?025屆四川成都經(jīng)開區(qū)試驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期入學(xué)考試】假定你是李華。你的英國摯友George來信，詢問你的近況及上高校打算報(bào)考什么專業(yè)。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.正在仔細(xì)備考；2.學(xué)醫(yī)學(xué)專業(yè)；3.報(bào)考理由。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【答案】DearGeorge,Ihopeyou’redoingwell.ReceivingyourletterissucharefreshsinceI’mfullyengagedinpreparingfortheexam.