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PAGE第四講增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，錦上添花在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中，增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不行少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生肯定不能簡(jiǎn)潔地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充溢、詞數(shù)要求不達(dá)標(biāo)或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫等問(wèn)題。適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。eq\a\vs4\al(技能一列舉詳細(xì)的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明)1.(2024年全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))另外，你最好帶一些小禮物。Besides,you'dbetterbringsomelittlegifts.→Besides,you'dbetterbringsomelittlegifts,suchasaspecialfoodordrinkfromyourcountry．2．我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境、挽救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy．3．我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework．4．我是一個(gè)充溢活力的健康男孩，我特別喜愛(ài)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。IamahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch,especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates．5．我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜愛(ài)旅行的筆友。I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences．技能二增加與所寫信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容1.(2024年全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))它講解并描述了一所學(xué)校的發(fā)展歷程。Ittellsthestoryofaschoolgrowingup.→Ittellsthestoryofaschoolgrowingup,fromsmalltolarge,fromweaktostrong.(背景渲染)2．我有時(shí)去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相關(guān)背景)3．旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbutveryhappy.(心理描寫)技能三增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容1.(2024年全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))歡迎任何對(duì)這部電影感愛(ài)好的人來(lái)學(xué)校報(bào)告廳觀看。Anyonewhoshowsinterestinthefilmiswelcometoschool'slecturehalltoenjoyit.→Anyonewhoshowsinterestinthefilmiswelcometoschool'slecturehall,locatedonthefirstfloorofthethirdteachingbuilding,toenjoyit.(增加地點(diǎn))2．我被這個(gè)城市的漂亮所吸引。Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecity.→IwasattractedbythebeautyofthecityassoonasIarrivedhereat6o'clockinthemorningbyplane.(增加時(shí)間)技能四適當(dāng)增加與所給信息相關(guān)的緣由、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容1．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你高考后的暑假支配。請(qǐng)依據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫一封回信，說(shuō)明你的支配，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。①休息；讀書；②參與社會(huì)活動(dòng)(1)Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears．Ofcourse,I'lldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.(因果關(guān)系)(2)I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime,I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語(yǔ))→Ifpossible,I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語(yǔ))→I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(目的狀語(yǔ))2．Tracy來(lái)電話說(shuō)在咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)的見(jiàn)面取消了。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehassomethingimportanttodo.(緣由狀語(yǔ))3．我也幫助鄰里的孩子補(bǔ)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增加結(jié)果)技能五結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望、愿景、倡議等1.(2024年全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))I'mlookingforwardtoyourarrivalandjoiningmeinexperiencingitinthenearfuture.(希望)2．AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個(gè)人感受)3．Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評(píng)價(jià))4．Asastudent，it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議)‖即學(xué)即練‖Ⅰ.按要求對(duì)下列句子進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充1．每天要努力學(xué)習(xí)，為每一次考試做出細(xì)致的支配。(增加條件狀語(yǔ))Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.______________.答案：Ifweareprepared,wewillnotfeelworried2．復(fù)旦高校位于上海。(增加which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai,_____________________________.答案：whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience3．不管我將面對(duì)什么樣的困難，我都不會(huì)屈服。(增加目的狀語(yǔ))_____________________________，whateverchallengeIwillface,Iwillnevergivein.答案：Torealizemydream4．我們應(yīng)當(dāng)學(xué)會(huì)如何與他人相處。(增加詳細(xì)實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers._____________________．答案：Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlytoourclassmates5．一些學(xué)生特別擔(dān)憂考試以至于晚上無(wú)法入睡。(增加結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycan'tfallasleepatnight._______________________________________________________________．答案：Asaresult,theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcan'tconcentrateinclassⅡ.請(qǐng)為下面的短文適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)DearSam，TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSam，Thankyouforyourconcern.NowI'lltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination.Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.