Unit3Fitforlife讀后續(xù)寫專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練之對(duì)話描寫課件高中英語譯林版（2020）選擇性

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話對(duì)話描寫簡(jiǎn)述對(duì)話描寫是推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)發(fā)展、塑造人物形象的手段，用好了會(huì)錦上添花，用不好則適得其反。通常對(duì)推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物性格有幫助時(shí)使用對(duì)話描寫。例如，描述比賽中選手遇到困境，可用對(duì)話體現(xiàn)主人公對(duì)選手的鼓勵(lì)，突出刻畫主人公團(tuán)結(jié)友愛、有集體榮譽(yù)感的形象，從而推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展：“Comeon!Youcanmakeit!

Weareproudofyou!”Georgeshoutedenthusiastically.

切忌為了湊字?jǐn)?shù),廢話連篇?！癏ey,howareyou?”“I'mfine,howareyou?”“Howistheweather?”“Terrifc!

Nicedayforawalk,

isn'tit?”這樣的對(duì)話在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中很真實(shí)，但是故事小說畢竟是藝術(shù)加工，無助于推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展的,不能刻畫人物性格的日常寒暄和偏離文章主線的對(duì)話不宜使用。在讀后續(xù)寫中，對(duì)話描寫只需要一到兩句即可。可以通過以下三種方式，生動(dòng)對(duì)話。不同“說”+狀語方式一01避免重復(fù)使用"said",

根據(jù)說話內(nèi)容選擇合適的表示"說"的動(dòng)詞，之后再加狀語(介詞短語或副詞)。不同"說”tell告訴ask問answer回答add補(bǔ)充說shout喊reply回答sate陳述whisper小聲說argue爭(zhēng)論interrupt插嘴repeat重復(fù)claim聲稱complain抱怨explain解釋insist堅(jiān)持order/command命令request請(qǐng)求demand強(qiáng)烈要求suggest建議recommend推薦announce宣布beg懇求mock嘲笑apologize道歉murmur低語wam警告joke開玩笑continue繼續(xù)說recall回憶conclude推斷出smile微笑著說cry哭泣狀

語①ina/an+形容詞+tone,

表示“用……的語氣”。

也可以用inatoneof

+名詞的搭配。例:“Iwould

loveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone

“我很樂意這樣做,”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說inatoneofsurprise用驚訝的語氣inatoneofcuriosity用好奇的語氣inatoneofpatience用耐心的語氣inatoneofimpatience用不耐煩的語氣inasoft/gentle/mildtone用柔和的/溫柔的/溫和的語氣ina(an)friendly/anxioustone用友好/焦慮的語氣inatoneofcommand用命令的語氣inafattone用平淡的語氣狀

語②

ina/an+形容詞+voice,

表示“用……的聲音”。例:

“Ididn'tmeanto,”

shemormuredinalow

voice.“我不是故意的,”她低聲說。inahigh/low/sweet/

loud

/

soft/weakvoice用高/低/甜美/響亮/柔和/虛弱的聲音inanexcitedvoice用激動(dòng)的聲音inapleasantvoice用友善的聲音inagentlevoice用溫柔的聲音inanangryvoice用生氣的聲音ina(n)cold/icyvoice用冰冷的聲音inaboredvoice用厭煩的聲音inanannoyedvoice用惱火的聲音狀

語③

with+情感名詞。例:

“I...I...don'tthinkI'mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我……我……認(rèn)為我不適合這個(gè)角色，”我尷尬地回答。withexcitement激動(dòng)地withdelight/satisfaction/asmile高興/滿意/面帶笑容地withhorror/sadness/sorrow/grief恐懼/悲傷/悲哀/悲痛地withastonishment/surprise驚訝地withanger/relief生氣/如釋重負(fù)地withembarrassment/awkwardness尷尬地狀

語④

加副詞。常用的修飾不同“說”的副詞有：loudly/guietly大聲/低聲地;

impatiently/angrily/bitterly.absently/rudely不耐煩/憤怒/痛苦/心不在焉/粗魯?shù)?sincerely/honestly/earestly/politely真誠/誠實(shí)/認(rèn)真/禮貌地;cheerfully/happily/proudly高興/快樂/自豪地;definitely/decidedly/firmly明確/堅(jiān)決/堅(jiān)定地?！纠俊癐willneverdothatagain,”I

answeredfirmly.

“我再也不會(huì)那樣做了,”我堅(jiān)定地回答。這句話也可將副詞提到句首:

Firmly,

Ianswered,“Iwillneverdothatagain.”典

例

①【對(duì)話情境】“Watchout!”shesaid.“小心!”她說。不同“說”：“小心!”是說話的內(nèi)容,

shout(大喊)比said或

murmured

(小聲說)

等更合適。加狀語：她說“小心!”的時(shí)候應(yīng)該是焦急地：

inananxious

/

urgentlytone。生動(dòng)對(duì)話:

“Watchout!”sheshoutedinananxioustone.

→焦急地喊道“Watchout!”sheshoutedurgently.

→

急切地喊道典

例

【對(duì)話情境】“YoucangoanyplaceyouwantbutIthinkyou'llfindwhatyouneedhere,”said

Dad.“你可以去任何你想去的地方,但我認(rèn)為你會(huì)在這里找到你需要的東西?！卑职终f。不同說：對(duì)話內(nèi)容是“你可以去任何你想去的地方,但我認(rèn)為你會(huì)在這里找到你需要的東西”。這是爸爸的建議,可以用動(dòng)詞suggest。加狀語：對(duì)話內(nèi)容是爸爸對(duì)孩子的建議,

語氣應(yīng)該是溫和的,

或者笑著說--in

a

toneofgendleness/withasmile.②典

例

生動(dòng)對(duì)話：Dadsuggestedinatoneofgentleness,

“YoucangoanyplaceyouwantbutIthink

you'll

findwhatyouneedhere.”“Youcangoanyplaceyouwant,”

suggested

Dadwithasmile,“butIthinkyou’llfindwhatyou

needhere.”②溫和地建議道笑著建議道動(dòng)作鏈

/動(dòng)作面+對(duì)話方式

二02第二章標(biāo)題1.動(dòng)作鏈+對(duì)話結(jié)構(gòu):

A,

Bandsaid?！镜淅?】對(duì)話情境:

Hesaid,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”

他說:“有志者事竟成?！眲?dòng)作鏈+對(duì)話:

思考他說這句話的時(shí)候有哪些動(dòng)作,

拆解動(dòng)作鏈。

生動(dòng)對(duì)話:

Hesteppedforward,pattedmeontheshoulder,andsaidgently,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”andsaid

他走向前,

拍著我的肩膀,

溫柔地說:“有志者事竟成?！盇Bandsaid第二章標(biāo)題2.動(dòng)作面+對(duì)話結(jié)構(gòu):

常用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)+對(duì)話(With...doing,

sb.said

/

explained/...)或非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)+對(duì)話(

Doing...,

sb.said

/

shouted/...)?！镜淅?】

對(duì)話情境:

Hesmiled,“Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

他笑著說：“你的努力才是最重要的。”動(dòng)作面+對(duì)話:

思考他說這句話的時(shí)候,

正在做什么動(dòng)作。生動(dòng)對(duì)話:

Pattingmyshoulder,hesmiled,“Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

他拍著我的肩膀,

笑著說：“你的努力才是最重要的”。非謂語對(duì)話情緒+對(duì)話方式三03考慮某人說話的時(shí)候情緒是什么樣的,結(jié)合情緒描寫常用的幾種句式生動(dòng)對(duì)話。方式三：情緒+對(duì)話【典例】對(duì)話情境:

Isaidtohim,“Iwouldliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourtimelyhelp.”我對(duì)他說:“我想要表達(dá)我對(duì)你的及時(shí)幫助的感激”。情緒+對(duì)話:

思考“我”說這句話的時(shí)候,

情緒是怎么樣的。生動(dòng)對(duì)話:

Withtearsinmyeyes,Isaidtohim,“Iwouldliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyou!”

“眼睛里含滿淚水,

我對(duì)他說：“我想要表達(dá)我對(duì)你的及時(shí)幫助的感激?！鼻?/p>

緒對(duì)

話即時(shí)練習(xí)04選詞填空。根據(jù)對(duì)話內(nèi)容將合適的狀語對(duì)應(yīng)的選項(xiàng)填在橫線上，每個(gè)短語用一次。A.withasmile

B.inashamefacedtone

C.withanger

D.inafirmvoice

E.gratefully1."Surely.Iwill!”Johnanswered__________________2."Thankyou,sir,"whisperedPaul

__________________3."Oh!You'rehere!Morning,Ms.Li!'mCathy,"shesaid______4."Iwillbealoserandotherswilllaughatme,"hemurmured______5."Whydidyoucookbyyourselves?Don'tyouknowit'sdangerous?"shoutedthefather________________________.D

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單句寫作:根據(jù)漢語提示完成句子1.湯姆用顫抖的聲音回答:“我被狼襲擊了,我以為我再也見不到你了”“IwasattackedbyawolfandIthoughtIwouldneverseeyouagain,”______________________.2.

他用感激的語氣繼續(xù)說:“沒有你的鼓勵(lì),我就不可能把風(fēng)箏放得如此高”“Withoutyourencouragement,Icouldn'thaveflownthekitesohigh,”________________________3.

我擦掉眼淚,轉(zhuǎn)身,握住女兒的手,說:“我不應(yīng)該不聽你的解釋就生你的氣”。

________________________________________________________________“Ishouldn'tbemadatyouwithoutlisteningtoyourexplanation."respondedTominatremblingvoicehecontinuedinagratefultone.Iwipedmyeyes,trunedaround,tookmydaughter’shandandsaid.單句寫作:根據(jù)漢語提示完成句子4.

臉上掛著笑容,她溫柔地問:“你為什么總是把自己藏在后排?你是天生的舞蹈家”_______________________________________________,"Whydoyoualwayshideyourselfinthebackrow?You'reaborn

dancer."5.直視我的眼睛,

她說:“你是對(duì)的,我不應(yīng)該讓這個(gè)事情阻止我”____________________________________________,"You'reright.Ishouldn'tletthisstopme."Withasmileonherface,sheaskedgentlyLookingdirectlyintomyeyes,shesaid段落寫作:根據(jù)提示補(bǔ)全短文。場(chǎng)景：Jim所在的足球隊(duì)在比賽中不幸落敗，他非常沮喪。在好友的勸說下，他決定繼續(xù)觀看比賽Withacar'