高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+舉辦派對幫助感化女兒學校的小惡霸+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習舉辦派對，幫助感化女兒學校的”小惡霸“1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thereareallkindsofenemies,andoneoftheartsoflivingistolearntotellthemapart.Butconsiderthekindwhonevermeanttobeanenemyatall,anddoesn’twanttobeanenemy,really.He’snotmadatyou;he’smadattheworld,andifyouarewanderingaroundonhislonelybattlefield,yougetshot,whichisnotmeantforyouatall.4續(xù)寫原文Letmetellyouaboutoneofthem.Shewasthedark-eyeddaughterofourtownbarber:abig,stormyGinaLollobrigida.Yearsago,IbroughtmytwolittlegirlshomefromSouthAmericaandputtheminschooldowntheroad.TheytalkedaverypeculiarlanguagethatwasneitherEnglishnorSpanish,andtheirclassmatesgavethemahardtime.EspeciallyGina,whowasolderandtheringleader(元兇)oftheterrorofthetinykids.Shehadanairofangerwithherfieryeyes,whichseemedtopiercethroughanyonewhodaredtocrossherpath.Herwordswerehurtful,andeveninmomentsofsilence,thetensionsurroundingherwasevident,likeathickwallbuiltbetweenherandtherestoftheworld.Whenmydaughtersweremisunderstoodandteasedbecauseofanunfamiliarlanguage,Ginaprovedtobethemosttroublesomeamongallthestudents,dominatingtheyoungerchildrenandcausingchaoswhenevershepleased.5續(xù)寫原文PatandPeggycamehomecryingalmosteveryday,soIdecidedtocheerthemup.“Let’shaveaparty,”Isaid.Pat’sandPeggy’stearsdriedmagically.Rightawaytheygotcreative:“Icecream!Cake,bigredballoons!”“Andfriends?”Isaid.Thetearsstartedagain.“Wehaven’tgotanyfriends,”Patcried.Peggyhowled,“Nothingbutenemies.”ThenIhadoneofmyrareinspirations.“Let’shaveanenemyparty.Let’sinviteallyourenemies–andwe’llfillthemupwithicecreamandcakeandgivethemredballoonstotakehome.LittlePatandPeggyexchangedknowinglooks,andoneofthemsaidinSpanish,“QuépassaalViejo?”(“Whatiswrongwithdad?”)6段首句Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.

Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以人物為線索展開，文章主要講述了幾年前作者帶著兩個女兒搬家，她們到了新學校，新學校的同學不是很友好，特別是吉娜，一個脾氣不好的小惡霸，經(jīng)常隨心所欲地制造混亂。女兒們受到同學們的嘲笑，很難過，經(jīng)?？拗丶?。作者看到這種情況，決定通過舉辦一個“敵對聚會”來解決。這事一個化敵為友的故事，這其中的經(jīng)歷更是讓作者受益良多。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“事實證明，“敵對派對”取得了瘋狂而愉快的成功?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫派對的成功氣氛，作者的感悟，吉娜的反應(yīng)以及女兒們的改變，變得快樂并且自信，與同學們成了朋友。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這次聚會的另一個好處是，吉娜在聚會結(jié)束后似乎變了一個人?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫通過活動吉娜的改變，吉娜感謝帕特邀請自己參加派對，以及作者的感悟。12續(xù)寫思路分析派對氣氛——關(guān)系融洽——派對成功——女兒們快樂并自信——成為朋友——吉娜改變——感激——感悟13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①超出：exceed/gobeyond②參加：engagein/involvein/takepartin③討厭：hate/dislike/befedupwith情緒類①高興：withdelight/delightedly/gladly/joyfully②困惑：inconfusion/confused/puzzled14續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.（運用了固定句型itseemedthat，who引導定語從句，that引導賓語從句，it作形式賓語）[高分句型2]Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.（運用了全部倒裝，過去分詞作狀語，that引導定語從句）15Part3范文呈現(xiàn)16范文呈現(xiàn)Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.Theeventexceededourexpectationsaslaughterfilledtheairandjoyradiatedfromeverycorner.Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.Andalltheother“enemies”alsoshedtheirenmityandembracedthesheerblissofthemoment.Asaresult,PatandPeggynevercamehomecryingfromschoolanymore.Instead,theyeffortlesslymingledwiththeirclassmates,engaginginplayfulconversationsandschoolactivitieswithinfectiousenthusiasm.Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.17范文呈現(xiàn)AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.Thebiggestenemyandformerbullyhadturnedintomydaughters’staunchestchampionsandshewouldneverliftafingeragainstanyoneorthreatenthelittlekids.Theotherday,Gian

askedPatinconfusion,“Whydidyouinvitemetothepartyinthefirstplace?”“Youlikeicecream,cakeandbigredballoons,justlikeanyothergirl.Right?”Patsmiled.Gina’sexpressionsoftened,sharingarevelationwithPat,“Butdoyouknowsomething?Nobodyeveraskedmetoapartybefore.”WhathadhappenedtoGinamademethink:Arethe“Ginas”leftoutbecausetheyareenemies,ordotheybecomeenemiesbecausetheyareleftout?Manytheoriesexist,butwhenyouloveyour“enemies”anddogoodtothosewhohateyou,miraclescanhappen.18范文譯文事實證明，“敵人黨”取得了瘋狂而快樂的成功?；顒映隽宋覀兊念A(yù)期，空氣中充滿了笑聲，歡樂從每個角落散發(fā)出來。似乎那些專門負責照看兒童聚會的天使們一定確保所有參與者都玩得開心，而最好的時光是由最大的敵人吉娜度過的，她在地板上滾來滾去，高興地尖叫起來。所有其他“敵人”也擺脫了敵意，擁抱了當下的純粹幸福。結(jié)果，帕特和佩吉再也沒有哭著放學回家。相反，他們毫不費力地與同學們交往，以富有感染力的熱情進行有趣的對話和學?；顒?。他們的自憐消失了，取而代之的是從內(nèi)心散發(fā)出來的新的自信。19范文譯文聚會的另一個好處是，吉娜后來似乎變了一個人。最大的敵人和前欺負者已經(jīng)變成了我女兒們最堅定的擁護者，她永遠不會對任何人動一根手指，也不會威脅小孩子。前幾天，吉安困惑地問帕