讀后續(xù)寫微技能對話描寫課件高三下學(xué)期英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

讀后續(xù)寫系列微技能--對話描寫

（DialogueinContinuationWriting）

對話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個故事中對彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f的話。它可以用來揭示人物的性格和個性，它也可以用來推動情節(jié)向前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過程。Whatisthefunctionofdialogueinastory？

對話描寫的原則：

①對話要為推動故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；②對話描寫必須反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫人物的性格；③不宜過長，側(cè)重口語化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；④盡可能結(jié)合動作描寫，明確對誰說。對話描寫存在的問題？？？標(biāo)點符號使用不夠規(guī)范xxxsaid對話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長堆砌成段標(biāo)點符號使用不夠規(guī)范對話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長堆砌成段LearningObjectives一、標(biāo)點符號的規(guī)范性Shesaid,“Ourbuswillarriveinfiveminutes.”①說話人在前

當(dāng)Sbsaid位于句首時，后面一般用逗號;引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫,句尾標(biāo)點符號放在引號內(nèi)。Sbsaid,“Xxxxx.”

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點符號的規(guī)范性“Ihopeyouwillbehere,”hesaid.“Idon'tcare!”hesaid.“Why”heasked.②說話人在后

當(dāng)sbsaid位于句末時，引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫,陳述句句末用逗號，疑問句用問號，感嘆句用感嘆號。引號外第一個字母小寫。“Xxxxx,

??？”sbsaid.

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點符號的規(guī)范性③說話人在中間當(dāng)sbsaid位于句中時,

前面引號內(nèi)句末用逗號，引號外第一個字母小寫；sbsaid后面一般用逗號，后面引號內(nèi)第一個字母小寫。“Xxxxxx,”

sbsaid,“xxxxxx.”

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩“That’scool,”hesaid,“canIhaveatry”【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點符號的規(guī)范性“Xxxxxx,

！？”

sbsaid.Sbsaid,

“Xxxxxx.”

“Xxxxxx,”

sbsaid,“xxxxxx.”①

說話人在前②

說話人在后③

說話人在中間

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩一、標(biāo)點符號的規(guī)范性1.“comeon！Youcandoit.Iwhisperedtohiminasoftvoice.2.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Heansweredfirmly.3.Irantohimandsaid:

“getupandrun!”

4.“Thankyousomuch,”Hesaidwithachokingvoice,“ButIdon'tknowhowtopayforyourkindness.”Come”he,Get改錯hebut注意標(biāo)點&大小寫標(biāo)點符號使用不夠規(guī)范對話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長堆砌成段規(guī)范表達LearningObjectives二、對話用詞的豐富性用詞---如果續(xù)寫中語言描寫較多，那么一定要避免通篇都是“said”，而要靈活多變地使用表示“說”的動詞換個詞唄用詞---不能只是said---換個詞

說道________回答道________問道_______拓展資料說______解釋道_______嘆氣地說______同意地說______大笑地說______請求_______尖叫道___________大聲地吼道___________承諾________抱怨道________說服________安慰________道歉________建議_______耳/低語____________

shout/yell/roarlaughsayreplyaskaddexplainsighagreescreamcomplaincomfortbegpromisewhisper/murmursuggestapologizepersuade各種各樣的“說”1.“Whydon’tyouwanttoacceptthiswonderfulopportunity”___________thebossonthephone.2.“Shallweleavenow”he___________tousandwelefttheroomveryquietly.3.“Help!Help!Ican’tswim,”___________thefrightenedboy.4.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”I___________.5.“Ididn’tlikethatmealatall,”________thecustomer.askedwhisperedscreamedscreamwhisperpromiseaskcomplainFillintheblankwiththerightverbform.用所給動詞的正確形式填空。promisedcomplained對話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長堆砌成段規(guī)范表達豐富表達LearningObjectivesHowtoexpress"say"morevividlyThink

(三)給各種“說”加點料加點料唄在直播節(jié)目中，李發(fā)出一聲驚人的喊叫，“我的媽呀，答應(yīng)我，買它！”Inalivestreaming,Lishoutedinasurprisingtone,“Oh,myGod!Promisemetobuyit”!skill1加語氣

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

in

a/anadj

tone(語氣，語調(diào))加點料---修飾動詞said加點料---修飾動詞saidskill1加語氣

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

inatone以一種溫柔的語氣in

a

tone以一種愉悅的語氣in

atone

以一種堅定的語氣in

a

tone

以一種粗魯?shù)恼Z氣in

a

tone

以一種悲傷的語氣inatone以一種好奇的的語氣inantone以一種不耐煩的語氣加點料唄

in

a/anadj

tone(語氣，語調(diào))soft/gentle/mildpleasantfirmsadrudeimpatientcurious“Ididn'tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說。skill2加嗓音

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:加點料---修飾動詞saidin

a/anadj

voice(聲音)skill2加嗓音

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

inavoice用一個高的聲音inavoice用一個低的聲音inavoice用一個響亮的聲音

inanvoice用一個惱火的的聲音inavoice用一個堅定的聲音inavoice用一個顫抖的聲音

inanvoice用一個局促不安的聲音加點料---修飾動詞said加點料唄in

a/anadj

voice(聲音)awkwardtremblinghigh

lowloud

firm

annoyed

特朗普是如此生氣，以致于他在辦公室大聲吼道，“這下完蛋了！”SoannoyedwasDonaldJohnTrumpthatheroaredloudlyintheoffice,“It'sover”!加點料---修飾動詞saidskill3加副詞

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:adv.大聲地難過地溫柔地不情愿地不耐煩地生氣地禮貌地

絕望地真誠地堅定地loudlypolitelysincerelygentlyfirmlyimpatientlysadlyunwillinglyangrilydesperately加點料---修飾動詞saidskill3加副詞

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:加點料唄adv.鞏固提升完成句子1.Shelookedathimwithanangryglanceand____________________“Leavemealone!”她生氣地看了他一眼，不耐煩地說：“別煩我！”2.Hestoppedmeand___________________,“Idomissyou!”他攔住我，輕輕地說：“我真想你！”3.“Whobroketheglass”theboy_________________________.男孩聲音顫抖地問道，“誰打碎的玻璃？”saidimpatientlyaddedinasofttoneaskedinatremblingvoice“說”動詞+副詞“說”動詞+語氣“說”動詞+嗓音注意標(biāo)點&動詞鞏固提升4..“Iwouldloveto,”_______________________________.“我很樂意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說。5.Ina_______________________he_____________________,“Okay,Iguess.”他用顫抖的、局促不安的聲音不情愿地回答說:“好吧，我想?！盓milysaidinapleasanttonetrembling,awkwardvoiceansweredunwillingly“說”動詞+語氣“說”動詞+嗓音注意標(biāo)點&動詞6.Thechildren_____________________,"HappyMother'sDay!"孩子們大聲說：“母親節(jié)快樂！”shoutedloudly“說”動詞+副詞“說”動詞+副詞復(fù)雜冗長堆砌成段規(guī)范表達豐富表達豐富表達LearningObjectives續(xù)寫微作文Lastweekatadinnerparty,thehostessaskedmetositnexttoMrs.Rumbold.Mrs.Rumboldwasalarge,unsmilingladyinatightblackdress.①_________________________________________________(當(dāng)我在她身邊坐下時，她甚至連頭都沒抬一下).②__________________（她的眼睛盯著自己的盤子，）andinashorttime,shewasbusyeating.Itriedtomakeaconversation.“Willyoubespendingyourholidaysabroadthisyear”③___________________________________(我微笑著禮貌地問道).Shedidn’tevenlookupwhenItookmyseatbesideherHereyeswerefixed/focusedonherplate鞏固提升____________________________________________________________________________________________Iaskedpolitelywithasmile“No,”④________________________________（她頭也不抬地回答，“說”）.“WillyoubestayinginEngland”⑤_________________________________(我繼續(xù)用溫和的語氣說）.“No,”sheshookherhead.⑥_____________________________________________________（我絕望地問她晚餐是否吃得好）.“Youngman,”⑦_____________________________________（她用一種惱火的聲音回答）,“ifyouatemoreandtalkedless,wewouldbothenjoyourdinner!”sheansweredwithoutlookingupIcontinuedinagentletoneDesperately,Iaskedherwhethershewasenjoyingherdinner鞏固提升sheansweredinanannoyedvoiceSummary①

規(guī)范標(biāo)點符號②

豐富對話用詞（詞）③

豐富語段內(nèi)容（句）Homework運用所學(xué)對話描寫技巧，把下面的語篇拓展資料完整。（2021

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