Unit1Whatsthematter？八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（教師版）

Unit1What’sthematter？單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度“健康和急救”描述某人存在的健康問題及給出合理建議本單元的寫作任務(wù)是會寫針對健康問題提出合理化建議的短文。在寫作過程中，要求同學(xué)們熟悉人體部位的表述，掌握描述人體的不適等健康問題。要注意關(guān)鍵詞語的正確使用，并能夠針對健康問題運用情態(tài)動詞should和shouldn’t提出更加正確、具體和深入的合理化建議。寫作目標能表達生活中存在的健康問題，并就這些提出建議；能描述意外傷害事故，并給出合理的應(yīng)對措施。1.1.能用＂have...＂表達健康問題及意外事故。2.能描述健康問題的狀況或意外事故發(fā)生的過程及病情或受傷的程度。3.能用＂should/shouldn’t＂提建議。4.寫作微技能：不同句式的表達。寫作步驟◆步驟一：1.描述問題；◆步驟二：給出合理化的建議；◆步驟三：表達祝愿，希望對方走出困境。真題感知（2023·遼寧鞍山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長時間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時間過長。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息給對方一些建議，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹對方近視的原因；第二步，針對朋友的問題給出相應(yīng)的建議；第三步，表達自己的希望。[亮點詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor對……有好處③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(動名詞作主語)【詞匯積累】1.牙痛haveatoothache 2感到惡心feelsick3.肚子痛haveastomachache 4.流鼻血haveanosebleed5.感冒haveacold 6.摔倒falldown 7.膝蓋受傷hurtone’sknee8.割傷cutoneself9.撞到頭gethitonthehead 10.躺下來休息liedownandrest 11.喝熱的蜂蜜水drinkhotteawithhoney12.看牙醫(yī)gotothedentist 10.休息幾天restforafewdays11.去看醫(yī)生gotoadoctor 12.量體溫takeone’stemperature 13.在……敷藥putsomemedicineon.....14.用綁帶包扎putabandageon... 15.在水下沖rununderthewater16.去醫(yī)院gotothehospital 【句式積累】1.Asisknowntoall，health/playingsports/eatinghealthily/havingenoughsleep/washinghandsbeforemealsisofgreatimportancetous.2.It'simportantforustoliveahealthylife/drinkplentyofwater/haveahealthydiet.3.Firstly,earlytobedandearlytorise/goingtobedearlyandgettingupearly/gettingenoughsleepcanmakeusfeelfullofenergy.4.Secondly,eatinghabitsalsoplayanimportantpartinourlife.Weshouldeatasmanykindsoffoodaspossible/eatmorefruitandvegetables/eatlessfastfood/drinkwaterinsteadofsoftdrinks.5.Lastbutnotleast,sportshelpmaketeenagershealthierandstronger.Throughtheseactivities,wecanimproveoursleepandgetagoodrest.6.Inaword,ifwestickto/followtheadvice(given)above，wewillhave/live/leadahealthylife.7.Followtheadvice,andwewillbehealthy.8.Doingeyeexercisesatbreakwillsurelybenefitusalot.Ireallyhopeourschoolcanorganizemoresuchactivities.【俗語諺語】①Healthisnotvaluedtillsicknesses.病時方知健康可貴。②Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。③Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起讓人健康、富有和明智。（一）健康問題類短語1.牙痛___________________ 2.頭痛___________________3.肚子痛___________________ 4.背痛___________________5.喉嚨痛___________________ 6.流鼻血___________________7.感冒___________________ 8.發(fā)燒___________________9.咳嗽___________________ 10.感到惡心___________________（二）意外事故短語1.摔倒_____________________ 2.割傷_____________________3.撞到頭_____________________ 4.膝蓋受傷_____________________5.背受傷_____________________ 6.手臂受傷_____________________（三）措施短語1.躺下來休息_____________________ 2.喝熱的蜂蜜水_____________________3.看牙醫(yī)_____________________ 4.拍X光_____________________5.量體溫_____________________ 6.在……敷藥_____________________7.用綁帶包扎_____________________ 8.在水下沖_____________________9.去醫(yī)院_____________________ 10.休息幾天_____________________11.去看醫(yī)生_____________________ 12.切除_____________________（四）其他短語1.怎么了_____________________ 2.下車_____________________3.使……驚訝_____________________ 4.同意做某事_____________________5.造成麻煩_____________________ 6.習(xí)慣于……_____________________7.冒險_____________________ 8.用盡；耗盡_____________________9.離開，從……出來_____________________10.掌管；管理_____________________11.堅持做某事_____________________ 12.放棄_____________________13.做決定_____________________ 14.考慮做某事_____________________二、句子積累（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.Isatinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Thebusdriverstoppedthebuswithoutthinkingtwice.（withoutdoingsth沒有做某事）我一直在做作業(yè)沒有休息。___________________________________________________________________________________2.Buttohissurprise,theyallagreedtogowithhim.（toone’ssurprise使……驚訝；出乎……意料）讓我感到驚訝的是，他能獨自穿越這片森林。___________________________________________________________________________________3.ThankstoMr.Wangandthepassengers,thedoctorssavedthemanintime.（thanksto多虧；由于；intime及時）多虧了黃老師，快速送我到醫(yī)院，我才及時得到治療(receivetreatment)。___________________________________________________________________________________4.Hebandagedhimselfsothathewouldnotlosetoomuchblood.（sothat因此）我早起是為了趕上早班車。___________________________________________________________________________________5.Hisloveformountainclimbingissogreatthathekeptonclimbingmountainsevenafterhisexperience.（so...that...如此……以至于……）這蛋糕是如此美味，以至于我吃了好多，肚子痛了。___________________________________________________________________________________6.Aronisusedtotakingrisks.（beusedtodoingsth習(xí)慣于做某事）我習(xí)慣于早上喝一杯水。___________________________________________________________________________________（二）根據(jù)健康問題或生活中的傷害事故，提出建議。（提建議的句式有should，shouldn’t，Whynot...?Whydon’tyou...?What/Howabout...?等）1.Tinafelldownfromherbikeandhurtherknee.___________________________________________________________________________________2.Steveatetoomuchatthepartysothathehadastomachache.___________________________________________________________________________________3.MrSmithgothitbyaballwhenhewaswalking.___________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：（一）1.haveatoothache2.haveaheadache3.haveastomachache4.haveasoreback5.haveasorethroat6.haveanosebleed7.haveacold8.haveafever9.haveacough10.feelsick（二）1.falldown2.cutoneself3.gethitonthehead4.hurtone’sknee5.hurtone’sback6.hurtone’sarm（三）1.liedownandrest2.drinkhotteawithhoney3.gotothedentist4.getanXray5.takeone’stemperature6.putsomemedicineon...7.putabandageon...8.rununderthewater9.gotothehospital10.restforafewdays11.gotoadoctor12.cutoff（四）1.what’sthematter2.getoff3.toone’ssurprise4.agreetodosth5.getintotrouble6.beusedto7.takerisks8.runout(of)9.getoutof10.beincontrolof11.keepondoingsth12.giveup13.makedecisions14.thinkaboutdoingsth二、句子積累（一）1.Ididmyhomeworkallthetimewithouthavingarest.2.Tomysurprise,hecouldgothroughtheforesthimself.3.ThankstoMrHuang,hesentmetothehospitalquicklyandIreceivedtreatmentintime.4.IgetupearlysothatIcancatchtheearlybus.5.ThecakewassodeliciousthatIatetoomuchandhadastomachache.6.Iamusedtodrinkingaglassofwaterinthemorning.（一）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長時間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時間過長。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息給對方一些建議，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹對方近視的原因；第二步，針對朋友的問題給出相應(yīng)的建議；第三步，表達自己的希望。[亮點詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor對……有好處③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(動名詞作主語)（二）你的朋友Jim非常喜歡玩游戲。由于長時間玩電腦游戲，現(xiàn)在頭痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且晚上睡不好覺。請你寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下他的情況，并指出你對他的建議。具體要求：1.內(nèi)容包含上述所提供的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.書寫認真，句子通順，語法正確；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Jimismyfriend.Helikesplayingputergamesverymuch.Heoftensitsinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Nowhehasaheadache,soreeyesandasoreback.Hedoesn’tsleepwellatnight,sohefeelstiredeveryday.

Ithinkheshouldtakebreaksawayfromtheputer.Heshouldn’tusetheputerforalongtime.Heshoulddoeyeexercisestorelaxhiseyesandgotobedearlyatnight.

Ithinkifhehasagoodrest,hewillfeelwellsoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹Jim的基本情況；第二步，闡述自己給出的建議。[亮點詞匯]①likedoingsth喜歡做某事②inthesameway以同樣的方式③doeyeexercises做眼保健操[高分句型]①Ithinkheshouldtakebreaksawayfromtheputer.（省略that的賓語從句）②Ithinkifhehasagoodrest,hewillfeelwellsoon.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）（三）假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友Peter打籃球時意外受傷，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容是示，用英語給Peter寫一封電子郵件。提示：1.詢問病情并提出建議；2.介紹一下你學(xué)校的近期活動；3.表達祝愿。要求：80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,I’msorrytohearthatyougotinjuredwhileplayingbasketball.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llgetbetter，andbebacktoyourschoolassoonaspossible.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,I’msorrytohearthatyougotinjuredwhileplayingbasketball.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ithinkyoushouldhaveagoodrestathome.Andyou’dbettertakecareofyourselfwhenyoudosports.Everythinggoeswellhere!Ienjoygreatchangesinmyschool.Now,theteachersmaketheirteachingstylescolorful.Inmyscienceclass,myteacheralwaysencouragesustothink,andcultivatesourabilitytostudyindependently.Inaddition,wehaveplentyoftimetotrywhatwewanttodo.WehadourSchoolDaylastweek.Thereweredifferentkindsofactivities,suchasthespeechcontest,thetalentshow,volunteering…ItookpartintheEnglishspeechcontest,andIwonthefirstprize.IwillsendyousomephotosaboutmySchoolDayifyoulike.Hopeyou’llgetbetter,andbebacktoyourschoolassoonaspossible.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，詢問病情并給出建議；第二步，介紹一下你學(xué)校的近期活動。[亮點詞匯]①encouragesbtodosth鼓勵某人做某事②inaddition另外③plentyof許多④suchas例如⑤winthefirstprize獲得了一等獎[高分句型]①Ithinkyoushouldhaveagoodrestathome（省略that的賓語從句）②Thereweredifferentkindsofactivities,suchasthespeechcontest,thetalentshow,volunteering（therebe句型）（四）許多孩子喜歡吃零食，這是導(dǎo)致他們肥胖的主要原因之一。英語課上，老師引導(dǎo)學(xué)生就吃零食這一問題展開討論。請你參考以下提示寫一篇英語短文，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?.吃零食是一種壞習(xí)慣；2.科學(xué)家們說有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人們攝取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易發(fā)胖。要求：1.80詞左右；2.可適當補充細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：snackn.零食takein攝取overweightadj.肥胖的；超重的___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Mostofthestudentsinourclasslikeeatingsnacks.Ithinkit’sabadhabit.Snacksaredelicious,buttheyarebadforourhealthifweeatlotsofthem.Doyouknowwhy?Scientistssaysomesnackshavetoomuchfatandsugar.Themorefatandsugarwetakein,themoreeasilywewillbeefat.Beingoverweightcancausealotofhealthproblemsandevenillnesses.Soinordertokeephealthy,weshouldn’teatlotsofsnacks.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為議論文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏作文提示里的要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“大多數(shù)學(xué)生都吃零食”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“吃零食有害健康、科學(xué)家論證等”幾個方面介紹具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。[亮點詞匯]①badhabit壞習(xí)慣②delicious美味③bebadfor對……有害④overweight超重⑤healthproblems健康問題[高分句型]①themorefatandsugarwetakein,themoreeasilywewillbeefat.(“the+比較級，the+比較”句型）②Soinordertokeephealthy,weshouldn’teatlotsofsnacks.(“inorderto”引導(dǎo)目的狀語)（五）暑假中，Leo喜歡玩游戲，最近他的脖子有點難受。假如你是Leo的朋友Denny，請你寫一封信，幫Leo分析一下他的問題，并就此提出幾點建議。提示：（1）久坐不動有害健康；（2）注意休息；（3）適當增加鍛煉。詞數(shù)：不少于80；開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求：語句通順，不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearLeo,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyoufollowallthesetips,you’llbebettersoon!Yourstruly,Denny【答案】【參考范文】DearLeo,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Asweknow,healthisveryimportanttoallofus.Youshouldn’tplaythemobilephonegamesallthetime.Itisharmfultositinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Sinceyouhavesomeproblemswithyourneck,youshouldstopplayingthemobilephonegamesfirst.Thenyoushouldtakebreaksafteryouplaywithyourphone.Besides,exercisecanhelpyoukeephealthy.Sotrytotakemoreexercise.Ifyoustillhaveabadne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It’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.Doingexercisecannotonlyhelpuskeepfit,butalsohelptotrainaperson’scharacter.What’smore,doingexercisehelpsustostudybetter.Wecandoexercisewheneverwewant.Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,wecandoallkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,wecanclimbmountainsorgoswimmingwithourfriends.Also,wecangohikingduringvacations.Let’sdoexerciseandhaveahealthylifestyletogether!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，題干要求以“Let’sDoExerciseTogether”為題結(jié)合所給材料寫一篇倡導(dǎo)運動以及提建議的一篇文章。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱主要采用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作內(nèi)容圍繞運動的重要性以及針對運動的時間和方式提出相關(guān)建議。寫作時注意主謂一致，無語法和標點錯誤。（九）健康是高質(zhì)量生活的根本，是人類一個永恒的話題。如何在高度緊張的學(xué)習(xí)生活中保持健康的體魄尤其重要。請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示以“HealthyLifestyle”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的作文。短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。1.擁有良好的健康可以更好地工作和學(xué)習(xí)，迎接更多挑戰(zhàn)（challenge）；2.保持健康有很多種方式，如健康均衡的飲食習(xí)慣，多吃蔬菜水果；多鍛煉，擺脫不良生活習(xí)慣；保持快樂積極的心情，緩解來自學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力等。HealthyLifestyleLivingahealthylifestylecanhaveaneffectonbothourworkandlife.Wecanhavemoreenergytofacechallenges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文HealthyLifestyleLivingahealthylifestylecanhaveaneffectonbothourworkandlife.Wecanhavemoreenergytofacechallenges.Althougheveryonehopestohaveastrongbody,somepeopledon’tknowhowtostayhealthy.Herearesometipstokeephealthy.Goodeatinghabitsplayanimportantpartinstayinghealthy.Fruitandvegetablesarenecessary,becausetheyaregoodforyourhealth.Atthesametime,keepingabalancedandregulardietisalsoimportant.Besides,exercisingisalsoausefulwaytokeephealthy.Lastbutnotleast,beinginagoodmoodisagoodwaytodealwiththepressurefromstudyandwork.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。需要根據(jù)所給要點談?wù)摻】档闹匾砸约叭绾伪３纸】怠?.寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱使用第三人稱；時態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作內(nèi)容要包含所有的提示要點，在提出建議時，多使用情態(tài)動詞should。寫作目的明確，注意語句之間的銜接。（2023·江蘇淮安·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英語社團將開展以“體育鍛煉，健康你我”為主題的英語演講比賽。請以“BetterExercise,BetterLife”為題，根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語演講稿。我的日常鍛煉1.最喜歡的鍛煉方式2.鍛煉時長3.帶來益處（不少于兩點)給同學(xué)的建議1.校內(nèi)鍛煉方式（不少于兩點）2.校外鍛煉方式（不少于兩點）號召1.希望大家多鍛煉2.…參考詞匯：做早操domorningexercises上體育課havePElessons壓力減輕feellessstressed合理鍛煉exerciseproperly注意：1.詞數(shù)在80—100之間，已給出的文字不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。BetterExercise,BetterLifeDearclassmates,I’mgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“BetterExercise,BetterLife”._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening.【答案】例文Dearclassmates,I’mgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“BetterEx