Unit4AGlimpseoftheFutureWriting課件高二下學(xué)期英語(yǔ)選擇性

Unit

4

A

glimpse

of

the

futureWriting寫作技法·情景演練續(xù)寫科幻故事Ⅰ.技能指導(dǎo)1.寫作指南：本單元的寫作任務(wù)為續(xù)寫科幻故事，屬于讀后續(xù)寫。讀后續(xù)寫需要將閱讀與寫作緊密結(jié)合，同學(xué)們?cè)谧鲱}時(shí)需要閱讀一篇文章，然后為文章續(xù)寫一個(gè)合理的結(jié)尾。這就要求同學(xué)們首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅要讀懂字面含義，還要理清文章的脈絡(luò)，了解故事的發(fā)展進(jìn)程、前因后果和人物的情感變化等。科幻故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展多以時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)的轉(zhuǎn)移為線索。續(xù)寫故事時(shí)，要展開豐富的想象，適當(dāng)構(gòu)思情節(jié)，并把故事情節(jié)寫得生動(dòng)有趣，同時(shí)要合乎邏輯。此外，續(xù)寫時(shí)，要注意續(xù)寫內(nèi)容和原文的銜接。讀后續(xù)寫的寫作步驟：（1）仔細(xì)審題，了解文章大意，明確寫作任務(wù)；（2）細(xì)讀全文，確定文章線索，以便高效快捷地梳理故事情節(jié)；（3）精心謀篇，研讀續(xù)寫部分所給出的兩段的段首文字，構(gòu)思段落大意；（4）撰寫初稿，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q、時(shí)態(tài)，并盡可能確保句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性和語(yǔ)言的豐富性，但要注意整體語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格需與前文保持一致，如對(duì)話的使用、動(dòng)作和心理描寫等；（5）潤(rùn)色升級(jí)，用亮點(diǎn)詞匯代替一般詞匯，用高級(jí)句式代替一般句式；（6）復(fù)查定稿，檢查語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，謄寫時(shí)，務(wù)必做到字跡工整清晰。2.常用表達(dá)：（1）To

find

out

what

it

was,

I

stepped

out

of

the

house

and

headed

into

the

dark.為了弄清楚那是什么，我走出屋子，走向黑暗。（2）It

was

then

that

I

realized

I

had

flown

into

space.就在那時(shí)，我意識(shí)到我飛進(jìn)了太空。（3）They

spoke

to

me

in

a

language

that

I

couldn't

understand

at

all.他們用一種我完全聽不懂的語(yǔ)言對(duì)我說(shuō)話。（4）What

amazed

me

most

was

that...最令我驚訝的是……（5）He

couldn't

believe

his

eyes

when

he

saw

this

miracle.當(dāng)他看到這個(gè)奇跡時(shí)，他簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信自己的眼睛。（6）When

James

came

out

and

spotted

the

box,

his

eyes

widened

in

surprise.當(dāng)詹姆斯出來(lái)看到盒子時(shí)，他驚訝地瞪大了眼睛。Ⅱ.情景再現(xiàn)

“Acknowledged,

Detective.

This

is

my...”

He

hung

up

and

told

the

driverless

UNATS

Robotics

car

to

take

him

to

the

railway

station

as

fast

as

it

could,

angry

with

himself

and

with

Ada—whose

middle

name

was

Trouble,

after

all—for

making

him

deal

with

a

robot

before

he'd

had

his

breakfast.

The

name

had

been

his

ex-wife's

idea,something

she'd

insisted

on.

He

hadn't

thought

of

his

ex-wife

in

years.

Well,

months...weeks,

certainly.

She'd

been

a

brilliant

computer

scientist

at

the

UNATS

Robotics

School

at

the

University

of

Toronto.

Now

she

settled

in

Beijing,

where

her

own

research

lab

was

located,

providing

the

kinds

of

software

solutions

for

robot

applications.Hedesiredtowiretap（竊聽）her,toreadheremailorlisteninonherphoneconversations.Hecouldhavedonethatwhentheywerestilltogether,butheneverhad.Ifhehad,hewouldhavefoundoutwhatshewasplanning.Hecouldhavetalkedheroutofit.“Andthenwhat,Artie”saidthenagging（嘮叨的）voiceinhishead.Hecouldn'tstopherfromchasingherowndream—makingthesmartestrobotintheworld,especiallywiththeirlittledaughterinherbelly.“Shutup!”hetoldthenaggingvoice.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Inafewminutes,hewasatthefrontgateoftherailwaystation.___Thereshewas,standingbyateenagegirlwhohadthesameblueeyesashis.____【審題謀篇】主題科幻故事體裁記敘文人稱以第三人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主布局1.提取原文關(guān)鍵信息Para.

1-2

Artie

was

going

to

the

railway

station.?angryPara.

3-5

He

hadn't

thought

of

his

ex-wife

for

weeks

and

wanted

to

know

something

about

her.?regretfulPara.

6

He

couldn't

stop

his

ex-wife

from

chasing

her

dream.?upset;

having

mixed

feelings2.分析原文中要解決的矛盾主人公對(duì)待前妻夢(mèng)想的態(tài)度。布局3.讀續(xù)寫的段首句，思考續(xù)寫思路（倒推法）根據(jù)第一段首句可知，主人公已到達(dá)火車站，

根據(jù)原文第三段中的Now

she

settled

in

Beijing,

where

her

own

research

lab

was

located可知，主人公去火車站是要坐火車去北京看望前妻，下一段已經(jīng)見到了前妻，故第一段應(yīng)寫發(fā)生在火車上的故事。依據(jù)原文中主人公矛盾的心理，第一段可以圍繞主人公的心理描寫展開。根據(jù)第二段首句可知，第二段應(yīng)寫見面之后的事情。根據(jù)原文with

their

little

daughter

in

her

belly并結(jié)合第二段首句There

she

was,

standing

by

a

teenage

girl

who

had

the

same

blue

eyes

as

his.可推測(cè)這個(gè)女孩是主人公的女兒，接下來(lái)應(yīng)主要描寫主人公與前妻和女兒見面的場(chǎng)景。續(xù)表【詞匯儲(chǔ)備】1.

___________從……走出來(lái)step

out

of2.

_____________________說(shuō)服某人做某事persuade

sb.

to

do

sth.3.

__________________讓某人陷入困境get

sb.

into

trouble4.

______v.追逐，追求chase5.

_______（火車）進(jìn)站停靠pull

in6.

________（開車）接（某人）pick

up【句型運(yùn)用】1.

Ada為他打開了門。他急忙走出UNATS機(jī)器人車，去趕開往北京的高速列車。___________________________.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing.Ada

opened

the

door

for

him2.

他的前妻就住在那里。______________________His

ex-wife

lived

there.3.

在旅途中，他不斷考慮如何說(shuō)服前妻放棄她的研究，不過(guò)這可能會(huì)讓她陷入麻煩。During

the

journey,

__________________________________________________________________

but

this

could

get

her

into

trouble.

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research4.

顯然，這不是一項(xiàng)容易的任務(wù)，因?yàn)樗非笏膲?mèng)想已經(jīng)很久了。_____________________________________________________________________Clearly,

it

was

not

an

easy

task,

because

she

had

chased

her

dream

for

ages.5.

火車進(jìn)站了。他開始尋找他的前妻，她答應(yīng)過(guò)要來(lái)接他。The

train

pulled

in.

_________________________________________________________________.

He

began

to

look

for

his

ex-wife,

who

had

promised

to

pick

him

up6.

他立刻就意識(shí)到了那個(gè)女孩是他的女兒。____________________________________________________He

immediately

recognised

that

the

girl

was

his

daughter.7.

Artie慢慢地走向她們。有那么多話要說(shuō)，他感到喉嚨哽住了。Artie

walked

up

to

them

slowly.

__________________________,

he

felt

a

knot

in

his

throat.With

so

many

words

to

say8.

他看著女兒的眼睛說(shuō):“嗨，我可愛的女兒!”

他的聲音有些顫抖。_________________________________

and

said,

“Hi,

my

lovely

girl!”

His

voice

was

trembling

slightly.He

looked

into

their

daughter's

eyes9.

爸爸，媽媽什么都告訴我了。你不用再擔(dān)心我們了。昨天，她成功地制造出了最聰明的機(jī)器人。______________________________________________________________________________.

Yesterday,

she

made

the

smartest

robot

successfully.Daddy,

Mommy

has

told

me

everything.

You

don't

need

to

worry

about

us

anymore10.

Artie難以置信地轉(zhuǎn)向前妻。她點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭:“沒有你們的支持，我永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想?！盇rtie

turned

to

his

ex-wife

in

disbelief.

She

nodded,

“_________________________________________________.”I

could

never

achieve

my

dream

without

your

support11.

Artie擁抱了她們兩個(gè)人，心想:“永遠(yuǎn)不要阻止追夢(mèng)者!”_________________________,

thinking

to

himself,“Never

stop

a

dream-chaser!”Artie

hugged

both

of

them【句式升級(jí)】1.

用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句合并句1和句2。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ada

opened

the

door

for

him.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing,

where

his

ex-wife

lived.2.

用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句改寫句3。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________During

the

journey,

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research,

which

could

get

her

into

trouble.【連句成篇】

將以上句子連成一篇語(yǔ)言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確、邏輯嚴(yán)密的短文。

In

a

few

minutes,he

was

at

the

front

gate

of

the

railway

station._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ada

opened

the

door

for

him.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing,

where

his

ex-wife

lived.

During

the

journey,

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research,

which

could

get

her

into

trouble.

Clearly,

it

was

not

an

easy

task,

because

she

had

chased

her

dream

for

ages.

The

train

pulled

in.

He

began

to

look

for

his

ex-wife,

who

had

promised

to

pick

him

up.

There

she

was,standing

by

a

teenage

girl

who

had

the

same

blue

eyes

as

his._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________