高考英語寫作讀后續(xù)寫人與自我講義

2024年新高考英語寫作讀后續(xù)寫人與自我范文人與自我：成長過程中的心事和故事戰(zhàn)勝困難、自我成長類（勇氣、堅(jiān)持、自信、獨(dú)立、自律、耐心、謙虛、合作、樂觀、熱心、幫助、感恩、追求夢想、珍視此刻、責(zé)任心、勞動可貴等）

（2）自我認(rèn)知、自我突破類（身體、心智、思維等，如：從消極變積極；從掩飾逃避到勇于面對現(xiàn)實(shí)；從自我否認(rèn)到接納自我，坦誠面對優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；從膽小從眾到勇敢為正義發(fā)聲；從微小中看到偉大，從平凡中看到不平凡等）

主題結(jié)尾句：1.追求夢想（條件句）It’snevertoo________to__________(追求）yourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityand__________________(充分利用它）,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdream.

2.追求夢想（比喻句）Lifewithoutdreamsislikeabird____________________.

3.克服困難（使用意象詞匯）Whenlifegivesyoulemons,makea______________.

4.親情友情（比喻、類比）Familyandfriendsare____________.(隱藏的寶藏）Friendshipistous_______wateristofish.

Familyistous________harboristoships.

5.戰(zhàn)勝自卑（對比）IsmiledasIeventuallyrealizedthereal________(來源）ofconfidence.NowIam____________(更加舒適、輕松）aboutwhatIlooklikeandmuchhappierbecauseIknowitismyqualitythatdecideswhoItrulyam.

6.助人為樂(名言）Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeoneinneedofhelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hoping___________(傳遞）theloveandkindnesstoothers.Justasasayinggoes,

“______________”(贈人玫瑰，手有余香）

Sometimesasmallactofloveandkindnesscanbepowerfulenoughto________________(產(chǎn)生巨大影響）.Sonever____________(低估）thevalueofouractions.

答案：1.late;gofor;takefulladvantageofit2.without

wings;withbrokenwings

3.lemonade4.hiddentreasures;what;what

5.source;more

fortable

6.topasson;Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.makeabigdifference;

underestimate

人與自我續(xù)寫范文欣賞1：TheGirlwithFrecklesonHerFaceWhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles.IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasunderwhelmed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.

IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawlesspeachesandcreamplexion.Icouldn'thelpparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.

Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckleremovercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies,seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.

Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckleremovercream,begantosaythingslike,

“I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.

Para1:Mymothercalledmetodinnertable,butIignoredher.________________________________Para2:Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor._____________________________

答案：WhenshecametothebathroomdooranddemandedthatIeoutandhaveameal,Iburstoutofthedoor,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Beforeshestoppedme,Istormedintomyroomandslammedthedoorshutbehindme.Lookingintothemirror,Isawagirlwithmoreanddarkerfrecklesonthefaceinsteadofpeachesandcreamplexion(白里透紅的膚色）.OnlythendidIrealizethatthecreamhadareverseeffectwhenwearingitinthesun.Ithrewmyselfdownonthebedandsobbed.

Hesitatingforamoment,withpuffy（腫脹的）

eyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffled（穿梭）

acrosstheroomtoopenthedoor.AtthedoorstoodmymotherandJanettewithabigbunchoftigerlilies,whichwerecoveredwithblackspotsbutamazinglybeautiful.Istaredattheminstunnedsurprise,notknowingwhattosay.Mymotherheldmeinherwarmembrace.

“Thereareallkindsofflowers,andtheyarealluniqueinbeautyandfragrance,”saidshe.Hearingthisandsmellingtheenchantingodor（迷人的氣味）ofthetigerlilies,thefrecklesonmyfaceseemedtohavemagicallyfaded.

人與自我續(xù)寫范文欣賞2：OutsidetheBox

TheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirselfmadecostumes

andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.

“DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?"Aliceasked."I'mgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek.”

“Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedforhisdadtopickhimup.“Butit'sboring.”

“Why?Whatisit?”Aliceasked.

“MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordanshookhishead.“That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.

Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小貨車).

“Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”

“ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed.“It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”

“Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems."Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolatebarcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.

Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk,

“Whatdoyouthink?”

Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,

"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”________________________________________Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.__________________________________________________

答案：Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”

Hearingwhathesaid,momaskedwithapuzzledlook,

“Whatdoyoumean?”Jordanexplainedthewholethingtomom.Mom

clappedherhands

inexcitement

andreplied,

“Let’sdoitnow!”Theycutaholeonthetopofthebox,fixeditonthewheelchairanddecorateditwiththeMaxMagcostume.（動作描寫）Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,they

were

tooe