讀后續(xù)寫之“親情+友情類”主題（課件）

親情+友情類主題

授課：×××PARTONECONTENTS目標(biāo)1親情、友情類續(xù)寫概述和寫作步驟目標(biāo)2沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)目標(biāo)3化解沖突和矛盾目標(biāo)4感情升華和領(lǐng)悟目標(biāo)5最新模擬目標(biāo)6真題感悟01親情+友情類概述PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

讀后續(xù)寫中常常會遇到人際關(guān)系及個人情感類的故事內(nèi)容。如：父子關(guān)系、母子關(guān)系、師生關(guān)系、同學(xué)友情、朋友關(guān)系等之間涉及家人、朋友、鄰居、親戚或他人之間的情感溝通或交流。

此類文章中重點涉及個人的喜、怒、哀、樂、害怕、緊張、孤單、驕傲、喜悅等細節(jié)描寫。

夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識02寫作步驟PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識生氣、震驚bedispleasedatone’sconduct對某人的行為感到不滿arouseone’sdispleasure引起某人的不快beeasilyannoyedattrifles容易為瑣事而惱火flamewithanger氣得滿臉通紅稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識生氣、震驚befilled/burstingwithanger怒不可遏getcross/madatsb.對某人勃然大怒bespeechlesswithindignation氣的說不出話來bedeeplyshockedatherbehaviour對她的行為深為震驚稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你1.

Iwasseizedbyanger.

我充滿了憤怒。2.

Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。3.

Filledwithanger/fury(狂怒)，Tomwasunabletoutterasingleword.

Tom氣得一句話也說不出。4.

Boilingwithrage，Tomshookhisfistatme.

Tom怒火中燒，對我揮舞拳頭。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你5.Seeingthis,hewasfilled/burstingwithanger.

看到這些，他怒不可遏。6.Feelingagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,

Jessicathrewthecanatthewoman.

Jessica感到一股強烈的嫉妒在心中升騰、奔涌，她把易拉罐扔向那個女人。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你7.

Whathesaidpiercedmyheart.

他說的話刺痛了我的心。8.

Hewasfilled/burstingwithangerandstormoutoftheroom.

他怒不可遏，氣沖沖地走出了房間。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你9.

FindingClark'snoteinamess,histeacherwasblueintheface.

發(fā)現(xiàn)Clark的筆記一團糟，他的老師臉氣得發(fā)青。10.MyjawdroppedwhenIsawmyphonebill.

當(dāng)看到電話賬單時，我極為驚訝。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你9.

FindingClark'snoteinamess,histeacherwasblueintheface.

發(fā)現(xiàn)Clark的筆記一團糟，他的老師臉氣得發(fā)青。10.MyjawdroppedwhenIsawmyphonebill.

當(dāng)看到電話賬單時，我極為驚訝。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你孤單、消極1.Hefeelsabandonedbytheworld.

他覺得自己被全世界拋棄了。2.Ihaveastrongsenseoflossaftermydivorce.

離婚后我感到有很強的失落感。3.Hefeltleftoutandwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.他感覺被遺棄了，孤獨使他感到絕望。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你4.Uponhearingthebadnews,hewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessand

sankintohopelessness.

聽到這個壞消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入絕望。5.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.

一聽到這個壞消息，她就被一股悲傷之感控制，忍不住哭泣。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你6.

Hesighedwithdisappointment.

他失望地嘆了口氣。7.Withaconfusedlookonhisface,hehadnoideawhattodo.他露出困惑的表情，不知道該做什么。8.Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.

當(dāng)她望過她三歲妹妹的桌子時，Amanda感覺她的心情像天空一樣灰暗。一沖突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你9.

Sheweptatonce,withsudden,wildabandonment,inhersister’sarms.

她突然縱情地在姐姐的懷抱里哭了起來。10.Enviously,Janewhispered,“Sheisn’tallthatprettyanyway.”

簡羨慕地小聲說：“反正她也不是那么漂亮?！币粵_突和矛盾糾結(jié)夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你回憶1.Neverwouldtheyforgetsuchathrillingsummerholidayintheirwholelife.

他們一生都不會忘記這么一個激動人心的暑假。2.Thevacationwithmymyforgetfulmotherwouldalwaysstandoutinmymemory.

和媽媽一起的旅行總是會讓我記憶猶新。3.Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim.他內(nèi)心涌起一陣陣悲傷。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你4.Hereyesmistedoverassheimmersedherselfintheirgoodmemories.

當(dāng)她沉浸在他們之間的美好回憶時，雙眼蒙上了一層水霧。5.Shethoughtoftheflowersglitteringinthesunshineandthemountainsturningrosyinthesettingsun.Andeverynightshecriedintoherpillowasthoughherheartwouldbreakintopieces.她想起了陽光里閃耀的花兒，落日下慢慢變成玫瑰色的山脈。每一個夜晚，她把頭埋在枕頭里哭，肝腸寸斷。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你反省/道歉1.“I'msosorry.”hesaid,gentlypettingJackson'shead?！皩Σ黄?，”他說到，輕輕的摸Jackson的頭。2.

“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.“我想給你一個驚喜!”他指向一個包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.Havingrealizedtheproblem,Arthurmadeuphismindthathewantedachange.Insteadoflitteringlikebefore,hespentnearlyanhourinputtingthetoysaway,andevenputtinghissocksintothehamper.意識到這個問題后，亞瑟決定他想要一個改變一下。他沒有像以前那樣亂扔垃圾，而是花了將近一個小時把玩具放起來，甚至把襪子放進籃子里。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你4.Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.在這時，毫無預(yù)料地，Carter突然想起B(yǎng)illy躺在地上哭的回憶，一直在他腦海回旋，提醒著他一些事情。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你5.

Iturnedtoherandsaid,“Sorry,let’sgotoseemore‘bib-bibs’!”Shewassoexcitedthatshesmiledthroughtears.Iheldherhandaswewalkedoutside.

我轉(zhuǎn)向她說：“對不起，讓我們?nèi)タ锤嗟摹畤臁?！”她非常激動，她哭?/p>

起來。當(dāng)我們走出去時，我握著她的手。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你7.“Sorrytokeepyourcatforaweek,butIhadnoideawheretoreturnhim.Ihopeyoushouldtakebettercareofhiminthefuture.”Tearsofregretsrolleddownhercheeksatthewords.Sheheldthecattighterandclosertoherheart.很抱歉把你的貓養(yǎng)了一個星期，我不知道把它還給哪里。我希望你將來能好好照顧好他?！甭牭竭@些話，遺憾的眼淚從臉頰上流下來。她把貓抱得更緊，更靠近她的心。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你愧疚1.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.一想到我對他所做的一切，遺憾和內(nèi)疚就像沒休止的潮水一樣向我襲來。2.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧極了，血液直往臉上涌。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.Shewenthomeashamed,chokingwithangerandconfusion.

她羞愧地回了家，哽咽著，內(nèi)心充滿憤怒和不解。4.WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.

看著雪莉的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。二

化解沖突和矛盾夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你親情1.ItwasHenry'skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.

正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了來自我們家人的溫暖。我會非常珍惜它的。2.ButforJason'stimelyandselflesshelp,Iwouldn'thavefinishedmy

performancesmoothly.

如果沒有Jason及時的和無私的的幫助,我就不會順利地完成我的演出了。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你親情1.ItwasHenry'skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.

正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了來自我們家人的溫暖。我會非常珍惜它的。2.ButforJason'stimelyandselflesshelp,Iwouldn'thavefinishedmy

performancesmoothly.

如果沒有Jason及時的和無私的的幫助,我就不會順利地完成我的演出了。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.Itisatourmother'skneethatweacquireournoblestandtruestandhighest,butthereisseldomanymoneyinthem.

就是在我們母親的膝上，我們獲得了我們的最高尚、最真誠和最遠大的理想，但里面很少有任何金錢。

4.Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.

我跑向父親，伸出手，緊緊抱住他。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你5.Whereweloveishome,homethatourfeetmayleave,butnotourhearts.

家是我們所愛的地方，雙腳可以離開，心卻不能。6.Nottomeanagreeting,nottoshyahug,getclosetoourfamilies,cherishthisextraordinaryandnobleaffection.

不要吝嗇一個問候，不要害羞一個擁抱，親近我們的家人，珍視這平凡而又高貴的親情，那是生世最真最切的永恒。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你7.

HavingreadtheletterfromDad,Ifeltawarmcurrentwellingupinmyheartandsurgingthroughme.

看完爸爸的來信，我感到一股暖流涌上心頭，在我身上涌動。8.Ifthewholeworldbetrayedyou,atleastyourmotherwillnotgiveup.Stillrememberchildhoodmother'sembraceisthemostbeautifulparadise.

如果整個世界都拋棄了你，至少還有母親不會放棄你。還記得兒時母親的懷抱就是我最美的天堂。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你9.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.這家人相擁在一起，透過含淚的眼睛露出了笑容，而后大笑起來。10.Thefamilyisshapingexcellentpersonalitylifetextbook,istostimulatethespiritofpowersource,istheemotionalrainnourishesthesoul.親情是塑造優(yōu)秀人格的人生教科書，是激發(fā)力量的精神源泉，是滋養(yǎng)心靈的情感雨露。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你11.Agoodmotherisworthahundredschoolmasters.

一個好母親相當(dāng)于一百個好老師。12.Whenitcomestofamily,weareallstillchildrenatheart.Nomatterhowoldweget,wealwaysneedaplacetocallhome.面對家人的時候，在我們內(nèi)心深處我們始終覺得自己還是孩子。不管我們年齡多大了，我們還需要一個稱之為家的地方。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你13.Struckbythescene/hermom'swords,Dorafeltamixtureofshameandexcitementwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.Onlythendidsherealizethatfailureisreallynothing.朵拉被現(xiàn)場/她媽媽的話所震撼，她感到一種羞愧和興奮在她的心中涌涌起來，在她心中涌動。直到那時，她才意識到失敗其實什么都不是。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你友情、師生情1.Takingfriendshipfromlifeisliketakingsunshinefromlife.從人生中拿走友誼，猶如從生活中移走陽光。2.Letgoofyourself,don'thide,throwoutallthefeelings,thepoweroffriendshipletyoubereleased.放出自己，不要隱藏，拋出所有的情感，友誼的力量讓你得到釋放。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.Anyonewhowantsassistanceintimesofdistressshouldbelenientonweekdays.

誰若想在困厄時得到援助，就應(yīng)在平日待人以寬。4.Friendshipcanpromotecompetition:whenthereiscompetitionamongfriends,theyshouldhelpeachotherandmakeprogresstogether,whichistheembodimentoftruefriendship.

友誼可以促進競爭：當(dāng)朋友間存在競爭時，應(yīng)互幫互助，共同進步，這才是真正友誼地體現(xiàn)。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你5.Truefriendsdon'ttalkaboutfriendship,theydon'taskforanythingbecauseoffriendship,buttheydoeverythingforeachother.真正的朋友不會把友誼掛在嘴巴上，不會因為友誼而要求什么，但是相互會為對方做一切辦得到事。

6.Friendsarelikeanumbrella.Whetherit'ssunnyorrainy,theywillalwaysbethereforyou.朋友就像一把雨傘，無論晴天或雨天，都會永遠陪伴在你身旁。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你7.Lifeisaboutknowingeachother,andknowingeachotherisabouthardship.Friendshipandfriendshipwilllastforever.人生貴在相知，相知在急難；患難識朋友，誼長情永在。8.Themostcommonnounintheworldisfriend,butthemostrareoneisalsofriend.

世界上用的最普通的名詞是朋友，但是最難得的也是朋友。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你9.

Livinginthiscolorfulworld,nooneisisolated,everyonehasfriends.生活在這個多彩的世界，任何一個人決不是孤立的，每一個人都擁有朋友。10.Withfriends,thepainsharedishalfthepain,andthehappinesssharedisdoublethehappiness.與朋友在一起，分擔(dān)的痛苦是減半的痛苦，分享的快樂是加倍的快樂。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你11.Youarenotonlyagoodteacherbutourclosefriend.Thankyouforhelpingusmakesomethingofourlives.您不僅是一位好老師，也是我們親密的朋友，謝謝您幫助我們奮發(fā)有為。12.Thewholesecretoftheteacher’sforceliesintheconvictionthatmenareconvertible.教師力量的全部秘密，就在于深信人是可以改變的。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你13.Asmallsmilemaymakeabigdifference.一個小小的微笑可能有很大的不同。14.Noticingthelittlegirl’sunhappiness,Jamessecretlysuggestedmakingacrownwithflowersinthegardentopleaseher.詹姆斯注意到了小女孩的不開心，偷偷地建議用花園里的花做一頂皇冠來取悅她。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你15.

ItoldhimthatIwasgoingtolookforhelp.Iknewtheneighborswell,andtheyallsharedasenseofneighborliness,willingtogiveahand.我告訴他，我要去尋求幫助。我很了解這些鄰居，他們都有一種睦鄰友好的感覺，都愿意幫忙。三情感升華領(lǐng)悟夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識03最新模擬PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

APaintingJustLikeHome

Lisawasn’tsohappywhenthebellwentforbreak.Atheroldschool,sheusedtoplaywithherfriends.Nowshesataloneinthecornerofthefieldandwatchedtheotherkidsplay.TheonlythingLisalikedabouthernewschoolwasart.Shehadn’thadartclassesatheroldschool,butheretheylastedawholehour.Duringtheartclasses,Lisaforgotthatshedidn’thavefriendshere.1.（2023年江蘇·揚州中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Whenclearinghertable,Lisanoticedaboxofchalkbythewindow.Sheputitinherpocket.Thenshetookherusualplaceattheendoftheline.Assheandherclassmateswalkeddownthehallandoutintotheplayground,Lisarememberedhowsheandhermotherusedtodrawchalkdesignsonthelongdrivewayleadingtotheiroldapartment.Thepatternsarecalledrangoli,atraditionalIndiandecoration,andtheylooklikestarsandroses.Lisa’smothersaidthedrawingsweretowelcomegueststotheirhome.Lisamissedthetimes.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Lisawalkedtothebasketballcourtandsatonthesidelines.Shetookthechalkoutandbegantodrawherfavoriterangolipatternwithhugepetalsandstarswitheightpoints.“That’spretty,”avoicesaid.SheturnedaroundandsawthatEric,aboyinherclass,waswatchingher.“It’scalledrangoli,”shesaid.“Thefloorofmygrandmother’shousehaspattenslikethat,”Eriesaid.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

“Whatdoyoumean?”Lisaasked.“Handmeapieceofchalk,”Ericsaid.Ericsatdownandbegantodraw.HedrewflowersthatweremoredetailedthanLisa’s,butstillhadhugepetals.Thenhedrewcirclesinsidecircles,andsurroundedthemwithsmalldiamonds.Lisakeptdrawingtoo.

“Whatareyouguysdoing?”avoiceasked.LisaandErichadbeensoabsorbedindrawingthatthehadn’tnoticedtheirclassmateEmmahadbeenwatchingthem.“Hey,’Emmasaid,sittingdownbesidethem,“thatlooksliketherugsinmyhouse.Exceptontherugs,theshapesarebiggerandflatter.”提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癝howus,”saidEric,handingEmmaapieceofchalk.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearingtheteacher’spraise,manystudentsgatheredaround.__________________________________________________________________提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你【答案】

“Showus,”saidEric,handingEmmaapieceofchalk.Emmatookthechalkandbegandrawing.Shedrewshapesthatwerefullofstraightlinesandbrightcolors.TheywerebiggerthantheshapesLisaandErichaddrawn,coveringeachothertoformnewshapes.Shecoloredthedrawingspurple,blue,andwhite.“Wow!”theartteachershowedupandsaid.“It’sbeautiful.”Thethreestudentsstoodupandlookedatwhattheyhaddone,theirheartswellingwithpride.續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Hearingtheteacher’spraise,manystudentsgatheredaround.Theymadevariouscomments,varyingfromtheuniversewithplanetsandstarstoacoralreeffulloffish.FinallytheteacheraskedforLisa’sopinion.GlancingatEricandEmma,whoseknees,elbows,andfingerswerecoveredincolorfulchalkdust,shebeamedsweetlyandsaid,“Itlookslikehome.”“Ithinkso.Whydon’tyouenlargethehometogether?”Attheirteacher’swords,thestudentsjoinedinthepaintingcheerfully,joypermeatingtheairofthecourt.續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了麗莎在新學(xué)校感到孤獨，對新學(xué)校唯一喜歡的就是藝術(shù)。在美術(shù)課上，麗莎忘記了她在這里沒有朋友。某天，她走到籃球場，坐在場邊。她拿出粉筆，開始畫她最喜歡的rangoli圖案，男孩埃里克被吸引，兩人也成為了朋友。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘給我們看看?！＠锟苏f著，遞給艾瑪一支粉筆”可知，第一段可描寫艾瑪作畫的經(jīng)過，三人一起畫畫吸引了老師。續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“聽到老師的表揚，許多學(xué)生圍了過來”可知，第二段可描寫圍過來圍觀的學(xué)生的反應(yīng)以及評價。2.續(xù)寫線索：艾瑪作畫——三人自豪—老師表揚—同學(xué)圍觀—氣氛歡樂3.詞匯激活行為類充滿：befullof/befilledwith出現(xiàn)：showup/appear看：glanceat/stareat續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你情緒類美麗：beautiful/pretty快樂：joy/happiness[高分句型1]TheywerebiggerthantheshapesLisaandErichaddrawn,coveringeachothertoformnewshapes.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]GlancingatEricandEmma,whoseknees,elbows,andfingerswerecoveredincolorfulchalkdust,shebeamedsweetlyandsaid,“Itlookslikehome.”(運用了whose引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Mymother’sgift

Adandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.

WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakingly(費力地)practisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.2.（2023·山西·臨汾第一中學(xué)校聯(lián)考)提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.

Itwasalovelyspringdayandtheroseleaveswereturninggreen.Wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithalittlebitofgold.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”

“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.

“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”shesaid,remindingmeofhowmuchIlovedtoreadstoriesaloudtoher.“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.”

Overthenextfewweeks,withherconstantencouragement,Ilearnedtotakeprideintherole.LunchtimeswerespentreadingovermylinesandtalkingaboutwhatIwouldwear.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.__________________________________________________________________Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.____________________________________________________________________________________________提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你【答案】

Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.AtfirstIwasatalosswhattodo,butitwasatthatverymomentthatIfoundadandelioninmypocket.Iknewmymompassedtheflowertome,whichmeanttobeincompanywithme.Icalmeddownassoonaspossible.Iknewthatthenarratorpartwasofvitalsignificance.Iperformedsowellthattheaudiencestoodupandburstintothunderousapplause.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.Momcarefullygazedatthedandelion,gentlypresseditintothedictionaryandgrinnedhappilyasshedid.“Wewereperhapstheonlypeoplewhowouldpresssuchasorry-lookingweed.”Thoughdecadeshavepassed,Iconstantlyrecallourpreciouslunchtimesbeingtogether,grateful,becausesmilesonMother’sfaceandherkindactfosteramanlikemenow!Andallthoseinspiringwordslike“Ceasetostruggleandyouceasetolive.”havebeenechoinginmymindasfreshasadaisy.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者三年級時被選中在學(xué)校的戲劇中扮演公主，但總是在舞臺上表現(xiàn)不佳。被老師替換成了敘述者的角色，在媽媽的啟發(fā)和鼓勵下學(xué)會了為這個角色感到驕傲并努力背誦臺詞，認真做準備?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“演出當(dāng)晚的后臺，我感到很緊張?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者是如何克服緊張以及完美完成表演的。提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“演出結(jié)束后，我把放在口袋里的花帶回家?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者把花收藏起來，對母親心存感激。2.續(xù)寫線索：感到緊張——發(fā)現(xiàn)蒲公英——恢復(fù)平靜——完成演出——保存蒲公英——感謝母親3.詞匯激活行為類①不知所措：ataloss/allatsea提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你②時間過去：pass/goby③盯著：gazeat/stareat情緒類①緊張：nervous/anxious②高興：happily/delightedly提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你[高分句型1]AtfirstIwasatalosswhattodo,butitwasatthatverymomentthatIfoundadandelioninmypocket.(運用了強調(diào)句)[高分句型2]Iknewthatthenarratorpartwasofvitalsignificance.(運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)提升·必備題型歸納04真題感悟PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.1.（2023年新高考I卷高考真題）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.1.（2023年新高考I卷高考真題）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.1.（2023年新高考I卷高考真題）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.1.（2023年新高考I卷高考真題）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.___________