2024屆高三作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)：讀后續(xù)寫主題練習(xí)樂于助人課件

OnthebusGivethepassage：Givethepassage：第一步：搞清楚文章中的“5W1H”WhoWhenWhereWhyWhatHowI、ayoungguy（he/him）、manypassenagers（they/them）OnacoldDecembermoringin2020onabusgobacktomyhomwtownthebusbrokedownandIhadtogotoanotherbuswithfourbigbags.waitedfornextbusStorymountainconflictbuildupbeginningresolutionending雨很大，水打濕了我的筆記本電腦，他騰了一個(gè)塑料袋給我車壞了。我不得不挪到另外一個(gè)車，可是我行李很多，并且乘客也很多第二步：畫故事山，定主題（樂于助人）我坐車回家，遇到了一名男子，他和我交談這個(gè)男人幫助我成功地坐上了車因?yàn)槟腥说纳埔獗磉_(dá)感謝，對人生又充滿了希望catioussheeplish“thank”worried、helplesshappy、thankful第三步：開始推理，定主題句2.Thisunforgettableexperiencewascarvedintomyheartandnothingwouldbeabletoeraseit!Theme-kindness/help1.Itwashiskindnessthattaughtmethevalueofhelping,whichIcouldtreasureforever!3.Whathappenedtodaymademeperceivethathelpingisakindofvirtueandonlyalittlekindnesscanlightsomethingshiningmakingtheworldmorebeautifulandharmonious!4.Sometimes,asmallactionofkindnessmaybehelpfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.第四步：開始推理，推理出第一段的最后一句Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫第五步：開始推理，推理出第一段的內(nèi)容Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫1.沒上車時(shí)的情緒？2.怎么上的車？3.這個(gè)男人起了什么作用？第六步：開始推理，推理出第二段的內(nèi)容Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.1.我上車了2.上了車的情緒描寫1.沒上車時(shí)的情緒？2.怎么上的車？3.這個(gè)男人起了什么作用？1.找到了嗎？2.在車?yán)镞€是車外？1.在車?yán)锏脑?？面對面對?.在車外的話，對著他大聲說情緒帶入第七步：作文展示第七步：作文展示第七步：作文展示第八步：范文展示W(wǎng)henthebusfinallyarrived,ithadmanypassengersalready.IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgoonthebuswiththesefourbigbags.Itseemedthattherewasn’tenoughspaceforus.Hopelessandfrustrated,Isignedheavily,tookadeepbreathandwaitedforthecomingbus.Seeingthat,theguywalkedtomeandsaid,”Don’tworry,Iwillhelpyougetonit.”Hearinghiswords,Iwascuriousabouthowhemadeit.Whenthedooropened,herushedintothebus,andopenedthewindowsimmediately,yellingtomeloudly,”Handmethebags!”Withouteventhinking,IgavehimmybagsandIrushedintothebusquickly.Itwascrowdedonthebus,butatleastIgotonit.Asthebusleftformyhometown,Ilookedaroundfortheguy.Hedidmesuchafavor,and!shouldsaythankstohim.However,remindedbyanotherpassenger,Ifoundthathewasonthesideoftheroad,wavinggoodbyetome.Icametothewindowandshoutedtohim,"What'syourname?"Theguysmiledbutdidn'treply.Thebusbumpeditswayslowlydowntheroadwhilehisfigure