讀后續(xù)寫人與動(dòng)物救助困住的駱駝講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

I’mfromthefishingtownofKinsale,inIreland.Lifeisprettygoodthere,butDubaicaughtmyattentionwhenIwas18.Imovedtheremyself10yearsagoasa30yearoldfilmmaker.It’sbeenawildride,fullofchaosandwonder.

Mywife,Christine,livesherewithme;whenhersisterAngelacametovisitinAprilthisyear,thethreeofussetoffinmypickuptruck.Itwasacloudlessday,touching40℃.Theheatandhumiditywereviolent,sowehadtosightseefromthecar.

WetookthescenicroutebetweenDubaiandRasalKhaimah,acharmingcityinthenorth.Ayearearlier,whileoffroadingwithafriend,Igotstuckatawatercrossingthere,attheonlyinletonthecoast,wheretheseaflowsintoaswampylagoon(咸水湖).Ihadtoberescued,andlearnedhowquicklythetide(潮水)couldein.

ChristinespottedwhatlookedliketheLochNessmonsterstuckinthesand.Wedecidedtoinvestigateanddroveuptowherethesandmetthelagoon.Itwasacamel,notmoving.

Sincerelocatinghere,Ihavealwayskeptashovel,rope,torchesandknivesinmycar—gettingstuckinthedesertcanbedebilitating(耗費(fèi)體力).

Igotoutmyshovelandapproachedthecamel.Itwasafemale;wenicknamedherStucky.Itlookedasifshehadbeentrappedforhours—shewasinquitedeep.I’vebeenaroundcamelsalotinDubai;theyaremassive.Theycanbefriendly,buttheycanalsobefierce.IapproachedStuckyslowlyandstartedtogentlydigawaythesandaroundher.Ikeptpattingher.Iknewifsheswungherheadaroundquickly,shecouldinjureherself,orme.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocialmedia.

Paragraph2:

Luckily,atthatpoint,apickuparrivedcarrying7guyswithallsortsofapparatus(裝備).話題——救助動(dòng)物我和妻子、妻妹三人在沙漠旅行途中遇見一只被困的大駱駝。我用工具想把它從沙子里救出來，但是作用不大。我的妻子把我救助的照片發(fā)到了社交媒體上，在附近的人看到了社交媒體的信息，前來救助。續(xù)寫注意事項(xiàng)：1.續(xù)寫第一段中應(yīng)描寫"我"和妻子，以及同行的妻子的姐姐如何嘗試救助被卡住的駱駝Stucky；但是救援過程應(yīng)該是不太順利；2.續(xù)寫第二段中應(yīng)描寫多虧有人看到了妻子發(fā)布在網(wǎng)上的救援照片，來為我們提供了援助；眾人齊心協(xié)力使得駱駝Stucky成功獲救，并描寫Stucky獲救后的身體狀況；3.文章結(jié)尾應(yīng)該積極向上，體現(xiàn)真善美；4.如書寫較差，以至于影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。語塊積累1.Lifeisprettygood.

生活很美好。2.catchone’sattention

吸引某人的注意3.It’sbeenawildride,fullofchaosandwonder.

我們?nèi)サ氖且巴猓猛炯瘸錆M了混亂又充滿了奇跡。4.etovisit前來參觀5.setoff出發(fā)6.Itwasacloudlessday,touching

40℃.

那天萬里無云，氣溫高達(dá)40℃。7.gosightseeing觀光，游覽8.charming迷人的，充滿魅力的9.be/getstuck+介詞短語被困住，陷入困境10.spot看到，認(rèn)出，注意到11.

Wedecidedtoinvestigateanddroveuptowherethesandmetthelagoon.

我們決定去探查一番，開車前往沙湖交接的地方。12.approach接近13.Itlooksasif+句子看起來好像14.betrapped被困住15.Ikeptpattingher.

我不停地輕輕拍著它。16.

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocialmedia.

Christine拍下我救援的過程，把照片發(fā)到了社交媒體上。17.focusondoingsth.專注于，專心于18.wipethesweatfrommyeyes擦掉眼上的汗19.make(much)progress取得（很大）進(jìn)展20.And

themoreshestruggledtogetfree,themorestuckshebecame.

她越掙扎著出來，陷得越深。21.Itwouldgetdark.天快黑了。22.wordspreadstosb.aboutsth.關(guān)于……消息在……中傳開了參考范文:

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocialmedia.

Angela

fed

Stucky

with

water.Ifocusedondiggingoutherbacklegs.WhenItriedtowipethesweatfrommyeyes,Iwouldgetsandinthem.Anhourlater,westillweren'tmakingmuchprogress—wheneverwenearlyfreedaleg,whichtookabout20minutes,shewouldgetsuckedbackintothesand.Andthemoreshestruggledtogetfree,

themorestuckshebecame.Wewereworrieditwouldgetdarkandthetidewouldein.

Luckily,atthatpoint,apickuparrivedcarrying7guyswithallsortsofapparatus

(裝備).

Someone

musthaveseen

the

postedphotosofthecamelrescueon

socialmedia.Wordthenquicklyspreadtothesmallfarmsafewkilometresaway.Theyjoined

us

andworkedsuper

hard.Everyonewasworkingonallfourofthecamel'slegsatthe

sametime,usingdifferenttechniques.Whenwefinallygot

Stuckyout,

her

legswereeffectivelydead.

Then

we

massagedherlegstogetthebloodflowing.Ittookabout20minutesforhertostand

up.

She

turned,stretchedandgaveusawink

asifsaying

goodbye.

下水作文1：

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocialmedia.

“Hey,stopdoingthesillythingandlendmeahand.Stuckyisthirsty.Pleasefetchhersomewater,”

Ishoutedwithimpatience.

“Alright.I’llbeingbacksoon.”

Christinesaidwithapoutinalowvoice,asifmumblingtoherself.Shebroughtbacksomethingmorearopeandtorcheslyinginthetrunkofmycar.

“Goodidea!”

Iexclaimed.

“Wemaytietheropetothelegofthemassivecamelandletthecarpullherout.”

Wetriedwithhopebutstillinvain.

(91)

Luckily,atthatpoint,apickuparrivedcarrying7guyswithallsortsofapparatus(裝備).

Theywerethelocalpeoplewhohadwatched

Christine’suploadedfilmofmyrescueattemptonTwitter.Amongthemwasayoungmanfromtheprofessionalrescueteam.

Christine

andIseemedlikeasinkingshippulledoutofthewaterbyamysteriousstrength.Wefollowedhisinstructionsandcooperatedwell.Allourapparatusworked.Beforedarknessfell,Stuckyhadthankfullywithdrawnhisfourlegsfromthesand,lookingtired,though.Weleftourfoodwithher,andweresoononourseparatewayshome.(86)

下水作文2：Christine

filmed

my

rescue

attempt

and

posted

photos

on

social

media.

AngelafedStuckywaterincaseitmightbedehydrated（脫水）.Then,thethreeofusdugStucky’sheels(腳后跟)fromthetwofeetsand,Iscooping（用鏟子鏟）withashovelandthesistersworkingwiththeirbarefists.However,bynomeansdidthisproveeasyforhardlyhadwefreedoneofStucky’slegswhenanotherwasfirmlystranded(被困住)byevenmoresand.Tiredandbreathless,thethreeofusexchangedafewanxiouslooks:bynow,thesunwasbeginningtosinkandthesaltytidewouldsoonfloodeverything.

Luckily,

at

that

point,

a

pickup

arrived

carrying

7