2024屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)(荒野求生)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)1——脫險(xiǎn)篇（荒野求生）題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目再現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文OnSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingwithhisfatheratSugarloafMountaininMaine.TheyhadawonderfuldayanddecidedtodrivehometoMassachusettsafterafinalrun.Theytookachairlifttothetopofthemountain,wheretheysplituptogodownindifferenttrails.Whenthefatherfinishedhisrun,heheadedtotheparkinglottowaitforhisson.However,Nicholasnevershowedup.ItturnedoutthatafiercesnowstormhadsweptintotheareaasNicholaswasonhiswaydown.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoffthepathandventureddownthewestsideofthemountain.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslostandallalone.Hiswaybacktotheskitrailswasblocked.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.Thesunbegantosinkandhewasgettingcolderbytheminute.Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutBearGrylls'survivalshowManvs.WildthatheusedtowatchonTV.Intheshow,Gryllsisabandonedinawildareaandhastohelphimselfout.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.4續(xù)寫原文Hedecidedtostopmovingaround.Heneededtheenergy,andthewindsweren'tasstronginthevalleywherehestoodastheywereuponthemountain.Plus,therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastoseekshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.Wheneveningcame,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesomesnowanddranksomewaterfromnearbystreamsothathewouldn'tdehydrate(脫水）。Thenhereturnedtohiscaveandslept.5段首句Para1:WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Para2:Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.6Part2題目分析7已知短文內(nèi)容本文以人物為線索展開，十幾歲的尼古拉斯和父親去緬因州的SugarloafMountain滑雪，在下山的時(shí)候，古拉斯已經(jīng)迷失了方向，孤身一人。他想起了以前在電視上看的貝爾·格里爾斯(BearGrylls)的生存節(jié)目“荒野求生”，成功自救并最終獲救的故事。8點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫建議第一段：““當(dāng)尼古拉斯沒有出現(xiàn)時(shí)，他的父親意識(shí)到一定出了什么事”可知，第一段可描寫尼古拉斯的父親報(bào)了警，警察以及派出小分隊(duì)尋找尼古拉斯的過程。第二段：“第二天，尼古拉斯聽到了雪地摩托的聲音?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫尼古拉斯被救的過程以及尼古拉斯的狀況。10續(xù)寫線索：意識(shí)到出了什么事情——報(bào)警——救援隊(duì)出去搜索——發(fā)現(xiàn)尼古拉斯——狀況良好以及精神狀態(tài)——與家人團(tuán)聚Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Thefathercontactedthepolice,andasearchteamwasgatheredtolookforthemissingteenager.Althoughtheweatherconditionwaspoorandthewindwasstillfierce,theydidn'tlosehopeoffindingNicholasalive.However,theyknewtheclockwasticking,andNicholasstoodabetterchanceofsurvivaltheearliertheyfoundhim.Theteamsplitup,andoneofthesearcherswhoknewtheareabetterdecidedtosweepamountaintrailheusedtohikeup.12范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Hewentoutandfollowedthesoundtofindhelp.Hehadwalkedforaboutamilewhenheheardsomeonecallinghisname.Hemovedtowardsthesound,andsureenough,afewminuteslater,hecamefacetofacewiththesearcher.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbac