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讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)------寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)ByNo.75MiddleSchoolZhuQianyin

第1頁(yè)第1頁(yè)預(yù)測(cè)：閱讀材料體裁能夠是闡明文如實(shí)地闡明一個(gè)現(xiàn)象，能夠是一個(gè)記敘文，如用一個(gè)故事引出一個(gè)話題或道理，能夠是一個(gè)新聞報(bào)道引起一場(chǎng)爭(zhēng)論，還能夠是旗幟鮮明、說(shuō)理性很強(qiáng)文章?？傊?，讓大家“有話想說(shuō)，并且有話能說(shuō)”。第2頁(yè)第2頁(yè)“讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)”寫(xiě)作過(guò)程：1）把握閱讀材料結(jié)構(gòu)、思緒、觀點(diǎn)與意圖；2）概括閱讀材料觀點(diǎn)（論證過(guò)程）3）在“寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容”引導(dǎo)下寫(xiě)作。

第3頁(yè)第3頁(yè)第一步：分析閱讀材料結(jié)構(gòu)、思緒、觀點(diǎn)與意圖。以樣題為例：所給短文說(shuō)理思緒下列：

論點(diǎn):論據(jù):

結(jié)論:

（2）--（6）正面論據(jù)（8）--（11）反面論據(jù)（12）--（13）（1）第4頁(yè)第4頁(yè)概括作者說(shuō)理過(guò)程：

閱讀材料觀點(diǎn)是（1）能夠概括為Somepeoplethinkthatteachersshouldnotcorrectstudents’mistakesforthem.

其正面論據(jù)（2）--（6）能夠概括為Childrenlearnbycomparinghisbehaviors,includinglanguage,withthoseofmoreskilledpeople.

閱讀材料反面論據(jù)（7）--（11）能夠概括為T(mén)eachers’frequentcorrectionofstudents’mistakesmakesstudentsunabletojudgetheirownwork.

閱讀材料結(jié)論（12）--（13）

能夠概括為Sothosepeopleencouragestudentstolearnbycorrectingtheirownmistakesinsteadofhavingtheirmistakescorrectedbytheirteachers.

第5頁(yè)第5頁(yè)用自己語(yǔ)言整理下列：

1。Theauthortellsustheimportanceofself-learningforchildren.Notonlyshouldtheteacherhelpthestudentstocorrecttheirmistakes,butalsotheyshoulddependthemselvestocorrecttheirownmistakes.(33)2。Thispassagediscussestheimportanceofself-learningforchildren.Studentsshouldhavethechancetocorrecttheirownmistakes,learn-by-doingandlearnfromeachother,notjusttheteacher.(29words)第6頁(yè)第6頁(yè)3）Thearticlegivestheviewthatteachersshouldletstudentscorrecttheirmistakesbythemselves.Studentsareabletocorrecttheirownmistakesandteachers’frequentcorrectionwillmakechildrenunabletojudgetheirownwork.(35words)4）Somepeoplethinkstudents’mistakesshouldbecorrectedbythemselvesanditiswrongfortheteacherstodoitforthemtooofteninschool.Itwillmakethechildrendependentontheteachers.(35words)第7頁(yè)第7頁(yè)Theauthor(Thepassage)discussedthebenefitofextracurricularactivitiesincludingbeingawaytoimprovestudents’health,widentheirsocialcircleandintroducethemtonewideasandpeople.(30words)第8頁(yè)第8頁(yè)reviewsthemostimportantpointsofthetext.Itshouldbebrief(short).Furthermore,thesummaryshouldbewrittenasmuchaspossibleinyourownwords.Itcontainsonlythemainideasandwhattheauthortalksaboutthetopicbutnotincludemuchexplanationorexamples.Asummary第9頁(yè)第9頁(yè)Howtowriteasummary

Beforeyoubeginyoursummary,youshouldidentifythemainpointsofthetext.2.Underline/highlightand/ortakenotesonthetext.3.ThenWriteasummarywhichincludestheauthor’smainideaorpurposeforwritingthetext,thetopicandthenwhattheauthorsaysaboutthetopic.Omittingspecificdetails,examples,description,andunnecessaryexplanations.4.Trytouseyourownwords.5.Don’tputyouropinioninthesummary6.Beconciseandcoherent第10頁(yè)第10頁(yè)議論性或論說(shuō)文，概括時(shí)則要盡也許客觀簡(jiǎn)明地轉(zhuǎn)述閱讀材料觀點(diǎn)。

概括對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)首先是要轉(zhuǎn)換視角，即以“第三人稱(chēng)”或“無(wú)人稱(chēng)”來(lái)概括。注意第11頁(yè)第11頁(yè)eg：

1。Theauthortellsus

theimportanceofself-learningforchildren.Notonlyshouldtheteacherhelpthestudentstocorrecttheirmistakes,butalsotheyshoulddependthemselvestocorrecttheirownmistakes.(33)2。Thispassagediscusses

theimportanceofself-learningforchildren.Studentsshouldhavethechancetocorrecttheirownmistakes,learn-by-doingandlearnfromeachother,notjusttheteacher.(29words)第12頁(yè)第12頁(yè)3）Thearticlegivestheviewthatteachersshouldletstudentscorrecttheirmistakesbythemselves.Studentsareabletocorrecttheirownmistakesandteachers’frequentcorrectionwillmakechildrenunabletojudgetheirownwork.(35words)4）Somepeoplethinkstudents’mistakesshouldbecorrectedbythemselvesanditiswrongfortheteacherstodoitforthemtooofteninschool.Itwillmakethechildrendependentontheteachers.(35words)第13頁(yè)第13頁(yè)

假如給定閱讀材料是一則故事，應(yīng)當(dāng)用最簡(jiǎn)練語(yǔ)言來(lái)闡明故事講述了什么，不能拖泥帶水講細(xì)節(jié)，并且最好講出故事給你啟示或其中一個(gè)道理。比如說(shuō)，Thisstorytellshowateacher’swordsavedashyandunconfidentchildandhelpedhimfindhimselfandholdontohisdreams.Ittellsusthatteachers’wordscanmakedifferencetoachild’slife.

假如是闡明性或描述性短文，就必須用概括性文字闡明一現(xiàn)象。比如能夠概括下列Thisarticlepointoutthecommonphenomenon——rareanimalscannotescapebeinghurtand