聚焦人教版2024年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作-話題寫(xiě)作三安全健康與防護(hù)

聚焦人教版2024中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題寫(xiě)作三安全健康與防護(hù)一、教材話題鏈接急救措施心理健康安全防護(hù)二、話題詞句拓展◎必備短語(yǔ)和句型1.askfor請(qǐng)求2.breakout(戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)、火災(zāi)等)突然發(fā)生，爆發(fā)3.byaccident/chance偶然地4.catch/haveacold感冒5.falldown突然倒下；跌倒6.getintotrouble陷入困境7.givesb.ahand幫助某人8.help…out幫助……解決難題、分擔(dān)工作9.intime及時(shí)；來(lái)得及10.keep…awayfrom避免接近；遠(yuǎn)離11.knockintosb.撞上某人12.lookout留神，當(dāng)心13.putonweight發(fā)胖；增加(體重)14.putout撲滅，熄滅15.saveone'slife挽救某人的生命16.sendfor派人去叫；請(qǐng)(某人)來(lái)17.stay/keepfit保持健康18.takeone'stemperature量體溫19.thanksto由于……,多虧……20.It'sbadfor…對(duì)……有害。21.It'sgoodfor…對(duì)……有好處。22.Thereissomethingwrongwith………出問(wèn)題了。23.see/watch/hearsb.dosth.看到/聽(tīng)到某人做某事24.see/watch/hearsb.doingsth.看到/聽(tīng)到某人正在做某事25.warnsb.nottodosth.警告某人不要做某事◎基礎(chǔ)句型寫(xiě)作1.人生的成功不是偶然發(fā)生的，而是需要努力和實(shí)踐。(byaccident)2.如果有人遇到麻煩，你應(yīng)該主動(dòng)提供幫助。(getintotrouble)3.他的右肩膀出了點(diǎn)兒?jiǎn)栴}。(Thereissomethingwrongwith…)4.良好的飲食習(xí)慣幫助你保持健康。(keepfit)5.警察經(jīng)常警告我們?cè)诮煌ㄐ盘?hào)燈變綠之前不要過(guò)馬路。(warnsb.nottodosth.)6.多虧你的有用的建議，我們制定了一個(gè)完美的計(jì)劃。(thanksto)三、滿分作文五步法典/例/分/析為了增強(qiáng)同學(xué)們的安全意識(shí)，學(xué)校發(fā)出了“做自己的首席安全官——平安校園行”的倡議。你校的EnglishNewsletter正以“KeepSafetyinMind”為題舉行征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖示，從食物、運(yùn)動(dòng)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)等方面著手寫(xiě)一篇征文。1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。KeepSafetyinMindSafetyisveryimportantinourlife,_____________________________.Ihopeallthestudentsshouldpayattentiontotheirsafetyandkeepsafetyinmind.Step1審——審清題意人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)：功能：要點(diǎn)：1.2.(1)(2)(3)3.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮……Step2搭——列提綱，搭好框架Step3連——連詞成句1.引入主題：①Safetyisvery__________________________inourlife.Weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.②Howcanwekeepsafe?Hereare__________________________.2.具體做法：①Weshouldeat__________________________insteadofjunkfood.②Wecan__________________________andmakesurewearesafewhenwearedoingsports.③Weshould__________________________whenwesurftheInternet.3.提出倡議：Ihopeallthestudentshavea__________________________lifealltheway.Step4組——組句成篇KeepSafetyinMindSafetyisveryimportantinourlife.①Weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldeathealthyfoodinsteadofjunkfood.Forexample,weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Second,wecandomoreexerciseandmakesurewearesafewhenwearedoingsports.②Finally,weshouldbecarefulwhenwesurftheInternet.Don'ttellyourrealnameandaddresstothepersonyoudon'tknowontheInternet.③Inaword,weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsinourdailylife.④Ihopeallthestudentshaveasafeandhealthylifealltheway.Step5修——修飾美化①擴(kuò)寫(xiě)本句，建議人們盡量遠(yuǎn)離各種危險(xiǎn)：Ithinkweshould_______________tokeepourselvesawayfrom__________________________andkeepsafetyinmind.②變換句型，采用高級(jí)表達(dá)的短語(yǔ)：__________________________,we__________________________becarefulwhensurfingtheInternet.③用sothat擴(kuò)寫(xiě)本句，說(shuō)明養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣的益處：Inaword,we'dbetterdevelopgoodhabitsinourdailylife__________________________wecankeepsafeandhealthy.④添加if從句，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)安全健康生活的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：Ifeachofusiscarefulenoughandhasahealthylifestyle,Ithinkwe'llbe____________________.◎小小加油站[開(kāi)頭句]1.Asstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.2.It'sveryimportant/necessaryforustokeepsafeduringthevacations.3.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromeverypossibledanger.4.Selfprotectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.5.Ifyouareillandhaveafever,youmustgotothedoctoratonce.[發(fā)展句]1.Weshouldalwaysobeythetrafficrulesonthewaytoschool.2.We'renotallowedtogoswimmingalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.3.Wemustrememberit'sdangerousforustohangoutatnight.4.First,weshouldkeepcalmandfindtheexitquickly.5.Ifweareindanger,wecanaskourparentsorteachersforhelp,eventhepolice.[結(jié)尾句]1.Inaword,followingthesesafetyrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace.2.Learntoprotectourselvessothatwecangrowupsafelyandenjoyourwonderfullife.3.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecangiveahandtomakestudentsgrowhealthily.4.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldpayattentiontotheirownsafety.5.Weshouldkeepawayfromsmartphonesandworkhard.話題佳篇?jiǎng)?chuàng)作 健康對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)如何保持健康。請(qǐng)以“Howtokeephealthy”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向?qū)W校?？陡?。要求：1.文章必須包含表格中的至少4個(gè)要點(diǎn)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名，校名和人名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右；文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。正稿：HowtokeephealthyNowadays,peoplepaymuchmoreattentiontohealth.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnsomewaystokeephealthy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,ifwefollowtheseways,eachofuswillhaveahealthybody.自評(píng)(亮點(diǎn)與困難)：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________