2024屆湖南師大附中高三月考七英語讀后續(xù)寫-Snowflake Bentley 講義素材

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫二段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完成的短文。SnowflakeBentley

Inthe

dayswhenVermontfarmersworkedthelandandspenttimewithlivestock,therelived

aboyWillie

Bentleywho

loved

snow

morethan

anythingintheworld.VermontisnostrangertosnowandBentley'shappiestdaysweresnowstormdays.Hewatchedsnowflakes(雪花)onhisglove,onthevastfarm

fields,andonthedarkmetalhandleofthebarn(谷倉)door.HesaidsnowwastheblessingsofNature.However,hecouldnotsharesnowflakesbecausehecouldnotsavethem.

Later,whenhismothergavehimanoldmicroscope,he

mainlyusedittolookatsnow.Whilekidsofhisneighborschasedhensandhadsnowballfights,Williewascatchingsnowflakes.Dayafterstormydayhestudiedtheicycrystals(冰晶).

Theirdelicatepatternswereevenmorebeautifulthanhehadimagined.Williedecidedhemustfindawaytosavesnowflakessootherscould

see

their

wonderful

designs.For

threewintershetried

drawingsnowcrystals.Theyalwaysmeltedintheblacktray(托盤)thatheusedtocatchthembeforehecouldfinishthedrawings.

Whenhewassixteen,Williereadofacamerawithitsownmicroscope."IfIhadthatcameraIcould

photograph

snowflakes,”hetoldhismother.Willie'smotherknewthathewouldnotbehappyuntilhecouldsharewhathehadseen.

“Spendingtimeonsnowisjustfoolishness,”hismothersaid.Still,shelovedhisson.WhenWilliewasseventeen

hisparentsspenttheirsavingsandboughtthecamera.Itcostasmuchastencows.Williewassureitwasthebestofallcameras.

Evenso,hisfirstpictureswerefailures—nobetterthanshadows.Yethewouldnotquit.Mistakebymistake,snowflakebysnowflake,Willieworkedthrougheverystorm.Winterended,thesnowmelted,andhehadno

goodpictures.Hewaitedforanotherseasonofsnow.One

day,inthesecondwinter,hetriedanewexperiment.Anditworked!Williehadfiguredouthowtophotographsnowflakes!"Noweveryonecanseethegreatbeautyinatiny

crystal,"he

said.

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared....

Despitethenew-foundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto....Notwosnowflakesarealike.Butyoumightnotknowthemanwhodiscoveredit.

Actually,it

canbetracedbacktoWilsonBentley,

afarmerfromVermont,theUSA,whoin1885becamethefirstpersontosuccessfullyphotographanindividualsnow

crystal—theicethat

makesupsnowflakes.

Afteryearsoftrialanderror,Bentleywasabletocapturetheintricatedetailsofsnow

crystalsbyusingacompoundmicroscopeattachedtohisbellowscamera.Hewent

ontophotographmorethan5,000ofthese"iceflowers"

duringhislifetime—

never

findinganyduplicates—

andtheimagesstillshinetothisday.

故事解讀

在那個(gè)人們只是農(nóng)耕土種、飼養(yǎng)家畜的時(shí)代，美國佛蒙特州的人們對自然現(xiàn)象的美麗和奧秘并不感興趣，更不用說去欣賞那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，對于威利·本特利來說，雪花的美麗和獨(dú)特性卻是無法抗拒的。他先是試圖把雪花畫下來，但每次都是雪花融化了，他還沒畫完。有一天，他與他母親說，“如果我有那臺(tái)相機(jī)，我就可以拍雪花了?！彼赣H不理解地對他說：“把時(shí)間花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但盡管如此，威利的父母還是在孩子十七歲的那一年用可以買上石頭奶牛的錢給他買了儀態(tài)當(dāng)時(shí)最好的相機(jī)（多米感言：父母對孩子的愛真是超級偉大?。?。從此，威利癡迷于拍攝雪花，盡管周圍的人都對他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他從未放棄過。他明白，自己的任務(wù)是將這些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美麗展現(xiàn)給世界。因此，他繼續(xù)投身于拍攝雪花的工作中，不斷地嘗試、改進(jìn)、完善，終于有一天，他找到了拍攝的竅門。

續(xù)寫審題

第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，沒有人在乎?！?/p>

我們的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該馬上接著寫威利自己的想法和反應(yīng)是什么（自然，他會(huì)繼續(xù)鉆研技術(shù)，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花來了）。結(jié)合下一段的首句提示，在該段段末應(yīng)該寫他因?yàn)樾∮忻麣?，從而得到了“雪花本特利”的美譽(yù)。

第二段：提示句“盡管剛剛成名，雪花·本特利還是下定決心要拍出一張完美的照片?！?/p>

我們的續(xù)寫應(yīng)該馬上接著寫本特利因?yàn)閳?zhí)著追求完美主義，終于成為了眾人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了絕美的雪花。他的努力和細(xì)致讓他捕捉到了那些令人嘆為觀止的細(xì)節(jié)。他成功了！故事告訴我們：一個(gè)人不但要生活，還要會(huì)生活。只有你的全力付出才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中處處是美景。

支架句子Hecapturedtheperfectsnowflakeimage,amasterpieceofclarityandbeautythatwouldberememberedforgenerations.Throughcountlessefforts,Bentley'sperseverancebegantopayoff.SnowflakeBentley'scontributionliesnotjustinhisphotographsbutinhisunshakablededicationtoperfectionism.4.Hetaughtusthattruesuccessliesnotinthesuccessandstatuswereceive,butintheachievementandsatisfactionwegainfromknowingthatw

havetriedallout.

參考答案1Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.HoweverhardBentleyworkedonhisphotography,everyonestillreferredhisworktoajokeorasillystuff.Thoughencounteringfailureafterfailure,Bentleynevergaveup.Witheachnewsnowfall,Williewouldsetouttocapturetheuniqueshapesandpatternsofsnowflakes.Hespenthourshuddlingoverhismicroscopeandcamera,capturingthedelicatebeautyofeachsnowflake.Astheyearswentby,hisphotosbecamemoreandmoredetailedandlifelike.Peoplebegantonoticehisworkandunderstandhim.Slowly,hegotthenicknameofSnowflakeBentley.(92words)

Despitethenew-foundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto.Inlateryears,hepushedtheboundariesofhisphotographyskillsandeventuallydevelopedaspecialtechniquethatallowedhimtocapturesnowflakesinthreedimensions,revealingtheirintricateandoftensurprisingstructures.Hisworkisrecognizedasapioneeringcontributiontothefieldofsnowflakephotography.Today,SnowflakeBentley'sphotoscontinuetoinspirepeoplearoundtheworld.Hisstoryremindsusthateventhesmallestandmostoverlookedobjectsinnaturecanholdimmensebeautyandwonder.Loveitandjustdoit!(84words)

參考答案2

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Theoutsideworldmighthavebeenindifferenttothebeautyofsnowflakes,butforBentley,eachonewasamasterpieceofnature,uniqueandirreplaceable.Hesawinthemnotmerelythepatternsandshapesbutalsothestoriesoftheirformation,thesecretsoftheatmospheretheyhadtraveledthrough.Hispassionforhiscraftwassointensethatitexcelledtheindifferenceoftheera,makinghimapioneerinafieldthatwasyettoberecognized.Hesoongotth