2021高考人教版英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)《統(tǒng)考版》35分寫作規(guī)范搶分練（一）

35分寫作規(guī)范搶分練(一)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)[2020·昆明市“三診一?！备呖寄M考試]Lucy,the5thgrader,hasaloveofwritingletters.Shewrotetohermailmantoexpressherthanksinlastweek.“Doug,youmayknowmeasapersonwhowrotelotsoflettersanddecoratestheenvelopestoo.Iwantthankyoufortakingmylettersanddeliveringit.Imakepeoplehappilywithmyletters,butyoudotoo，”Lucywrote.Thenextday,LucygotaletterfromDougthankingherforrecognizingwhichhehaddoneandtheimportancesofhisjob.Feelingmovedandinspiring,DougsharedLucy'sletteronline.Itreceivedmorethan200,000likes.第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)[2020·沈陽市教學(xué)質(zhì)量監(jiān)測三]假定你是李華，為讓學(xué)生更好地了解儒家文化，你校將邀請李教授到學(xué)校做“儒學(xué)”講座。請你給在你校就讀的外國學(xué)生寫份英文通知，內(nèi)容包括：1．時間和地點；2．內(nèi)容安排；3．注意事項。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：孔子Confucius；儒學(xué)ConfucianismNotice________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________StudentUnionJune17th,202035分寫作規(guī)范搶分練(一)第一節(jié)答案與解析：Lucy,eq\o(the,\s\do16(①a))5thgrader,hasaloveofwritingletters.Shewrotetohermailmantoexpressherthankseq\o(,\s\do16(②))lastweek.“Doug,youmayknowmeasapersonwhoeq\o(wrote,\s\do16(③writes))lotsoflettersanddecoratestheenvelopestoo.Iwanteq\o(∧,\s\do16(④to))thankyoufortakingmylettersanddeliveringeq\o(it,\s\do16(⑤them)).Imakepeopleeq\o(happily,\s\do16(⑥happy))withmyletters,eq\o(but,\s\do16(⑦and))youdotoo，”Lucywrote.Thenextday,LucygotaletterfromDougthankingherforrecognizingeq\o(which,\s\do16(⑧what))hehaddoneandtheeq\o(importances,\s\do16(⑨importance))ofhisjob.Feelingmovedandeq\o(inspiring,\s\do16(⑩inspired))，DougsharedLucy'sletteronline.Itreceivedmorethan200,000likes.①the改為a。冠詞誤用。grader是可數(shù)名詞，又是第一次在文中出現(xiàn)，所以應(yīng)用不定冠詞修飾。②刪除in。介詞多用。表時間的名詞前帶有l(wèi)ast，next，this，these，that等指示性限定修飾語且其前沒有冠詞時，其前要省略介詞。③wrote改為writes。動詞時態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)and提示可知，此處與decorates呼應(yīng)，故用一般現(xiàn)在時形式。④want后加to。不定式符號to漏用。wanttodosth.想要做某事，是固定搭配，故用不定式作賓語。⑤it改為them。代詞誤用。此處them與前面的復(fù)數(shù)名詞letters呼應(yīng)。⑥happily改為happy。形容詞和副詞混用。makesb.＋形容詞，是固定搭配，形容詞作賓語補足語。⑦but改為and。連詞誤用。根據(jù)語境中的youdotoo可知，上下句表示并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。⑧which改為what。名詞性從句中引導(dǎo)詞誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處是一個賓語從句，what在從句中作haddone的賓語，表示事物的概念。⑨importances改為importance。名詞形式誤用。importance是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。⑩inspiring改為inspired。非謂語動詞誤用。根據(jù)Feeling可知，此處與moved并列作表語，且表示人的感受，故用過去分詞。第二節(jié)參考范文：NoticeInordertohelpstudentslearnmoreaboutConfucianculture,ourschoolwillinviteadistinguishedexpert,ProfessorLi,togivealectureentitled“Confucianism”inourschoolhallonJune25th.Thelecturewilllastabouttwohoursfrom2p．m.to4p．m.coveringthreeaspects:FirstesthegeneralintroductiontoConfucianism,includingitsorigin,coreideasandinfluence.Duringthelecture,Confuciusandhisanecdoteswillalsobeincluded,whichisgoodnewsforhisadmirers.Thefinalpartisthequestionandanswersessio