高考短文改錯(cuò)公開(kāi)課

DearTom,

Howareyou?Imissyou.I’dliketointroducethelayoutofmyschooltoyou.Enteringthecampus,andyouwillsteponthemainpathledthroughthewholecampus.Ontheleftofthecrossroadsislocatedthemodernlaboratorybuildingwhileoursplendidteachingbuildingisintherightwherewehavefascinatinglessonseveryday.Attheendofthemainpath,thelibraryontheleftgreetstoyouandthegymisontheoppositeside.Happily,wedidsportsafterclassinthefootballfieldwhichisbetweenthelibraryandthelabbuilding;thebasketballcourtfacesthefootballfieldacrossthemainpath.Ilovemyschoolwithstudentsworkinghardtorealizetheirdreamsandteacherstrainuslikeourparents.Providedyoucanvisitmyschoolsomeday,Iwillshowyouaroundit.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyou.Bestwishes.英語(yǔ)高考專(zhuān)題復(fù)習(xí)HowtocompleteProof-reading

如何做改錯(cuò)題？Findthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.Beresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonMakeagreatprogressTheaccidentwashappenedSharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblyforoninwithShoesequipmentGenerallypossiblePlayagame高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷短文改錯(cuò)新題型假段定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)〔∧〕，并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔\〕劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線〔—〕，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者〔從第11處起〕不計(jì)分。

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes〔圣女果〕inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!What’sthemaintroublewithus?1.對(duì)錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型不熟悉，看不出句子有錯(cuò)，越讀越覺(jué)得對(duì);2.看出句子出錯(cuò)的地方,但由于詞匯記憶基

礎(chǔ)不扎實(shí)無(wú)法改正;3.知道改正句子錯(cuò)誤的地方,但無(wú)視題目要

求而是按照自己的習(xí)慣隨意使用更正符號(hào)，

以及將更正后的單詞寫(xiě)在規(guī)定處之外的地

方。Anyrules？Anyskills？

Howtocorrect?動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù),還要注意形和副;非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)區(qū)分,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟;ALimerick

打油詩(shī)介詞冠詞常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記??；句子成分多分析；邏輯連詞需關(guān)注；一、動(dòng)詞形

主要包括兩類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，以及主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。2010全國(guó)卷ⅠOnedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp.2011全國(guó)卷ⅠbuttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.2012全國(guó)卷Ⅰ…butwhenthingsgowrong,Igotangry.

camewerewent或在go前添加did時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致時(shí)態(tài)2012全國(guó)卷ⅠWhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid…2013全國(guó)卷ⅠIwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.2013全國(guó)卷ⅡTeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.2014全國(guó)卷ⅠForalltheseyears,wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseed…torepasseddrunkhave時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)過(guò)去式與過(guò)去分詞的混淆(被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)be+過(guò)去分詞)時(shí)態(tài)二、名詞數(shù)

主要指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式、還包括所有格、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞的混淆等的用法錯(cuò)誤。2010…h(huán)estoppedataboxofgoldenballforChristmastrees.2011Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2012Idestroyedeachofmytoy.2013(I)Hewastall,withbroadshoulder.2014Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoesto…ballsluggage不可數(shù)名詞toysshouldersyears2010全國(guó)卷：MyfriendNicktoldmeastoryabout…whichwasinterested.2013全國(guó)卷Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.

注意形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)題的?？键c(diǎn)。三、還要注意形和副interestingwell2007浙江卷Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.學(xué)生常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤：Weshouldworkhardlytoachieveourgoals.hardproud四、非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)區(qū)分

這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有_______、________、_______和_______錯(cuò)誤。2010全國(guó)卷：Ontheboxwasacardsay:“25centseach”.2011全國(guó)卷1.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuya

tickettoHangzhou.

2012全國(guó)卷Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner…現(xiàn)在分詞過(guò)去分詞動(dòng)名詞不定式sayingbuyingHaving2013全國(guó)卷Sheusedtoholdingmeonherknees.ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetsofarthisyear.學(xué)生版:Thebigfireburnedhundredsofhouses,madehundredsoffamilieshomeless.LiMengcameseemeeveryday.Ialwaysmaketheteachertoexplainmyquestionsformorethanonce.

to∧foundholdmaking人稱(chēng)代詞，及其主格和賓格，物主代詞的使用．2.反身代詞oneself的使用．3.不定代詞的使用．4.關(guān)系代詞，連接代詞．5.Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的區(qū)別．五、代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟2010全國(guó)卷I

MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS…Oneday..theoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp…Withoutamoment’sdelay,myneighborprickedupthebox…h(huán)is2011全國(guó)卷IWhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhe...2012全國(guó)卷II

washappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.

Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegan

toseewhichwashappening2014全國(guó)卷IThefruitsaresmallinsizebut…therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.manythemmy∧whatfriend’s2007陜西：JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!

myself學(xué)生版：Wemusttryour’sbesttoovercomealldifficultiestosolvethisparticularproblems.

ourcatchasightofasthewholelosemyheart表灰心lateoninhurrybythepriceof10inSundayafternooninthisweekendexpressusItissoabeautifulplace!suchmanypeopleMycarneedswash.

主要考查固定短語(yǔ)、習(xí)慣搭配、習(xí)慣用法，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和慣用法或搭配錯(cuò)誤。aon∨ourselvesso六、介詞冠詞常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住alateratsuchwashing2012全國(guó)卷IThismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.

2013全國(guó)卷heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduring

theycameovertoplay...2.Havingteaintheafternoonprovidesabridge

betweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbe

serveduntil8o’clockatnight.七、句子成分多分析

不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類(lèi)；不同的語(yǔ)境要選擇不同的詞語(yǔ)。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。growthwhenwhich詞性誤用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系代詞的選擇2014全國(guó)卷I1.Thefruitsaresmallinsizebutjuicyandtaste.2.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.tastywonderful詞性誤用八、邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注1.句子的上、下文不一致，張冠李戴，甚至相矛盾；2.連詞but，and，or和so的用法錯(cuò)誤屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤；3.過(guò)渡詞的誤用；2010全國(guó)卷I25centseachpiece…Nickhasbroughtthepriceupto10centsapiece.2011全國(guó)卷Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor...downand2013全國(guó)卷However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.2014全國(guó)卷Althoughweallowtomatoesto….but….ever改為yet或刪but其他常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤：Iopenedthewallet,tyingtofindoutwhoseitwas.Therefore,Ifoundnothingbut300yuaninit.However過(guò)渡詞誤用動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù),還要注意形和副;非謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)區(qū)分,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟;ALimerick

打油詩(shī)介詞冠詞常?？迹?xí)慣用法要記??；句子成分多分析；邏輯連詞需關(guān)注；3stepsforproof-reading解題三步驟Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意〕2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.〔分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)〕3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.〔檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)〕短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問(wèn)題

四不改:

①標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。

②大小寫(xiě)不改。

③詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。

④在綱外生詞不改。文中出現(xiàn)帶漢語(yǔ)注釋的詞，在句中不可能用錯(cuò)。

Don'tforget!親，請(qǐng)注意標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答題！?。henIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasingwhenIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginewhatmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyo