2024屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫公式總結(jié)（語言描寫 結(jié)尾升華）講義

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫公式第一部分語言描寫一、正確使用標點符號(1)說話人+說話內(nèi)容“說”后用逗號，引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫，句尾標點符號放在引號內(nèi)。Hesaid,“Youaremybestfriend!”(2)說話內(nèi)容+說話人陳述句引號內(nèi)用逗號，引號外第一個字母小寫：疑問句或感嘆句引號內(nèi)用問號或感嘆號，引號外第一個字母小寫。且“某人說”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“saidsb.”。①"Yes,"hesaid.②"Youmaybothgo,"saidAndy.③"Don'tmove,"shesaidtoMikeinasoftvoice.(3)說話內(nèi)容+說話人+說話內(nèi)容“某人說”可以寫作“sb.said”也可以寫作“saidsb.”:“某人說”前面引號內(nèi)用逗號，引號外第一個字母小寫?！澳橙苏f”后面如果用句號，則后面引號內(nèi)第一個字母大寫；“某人說”后面如果用逗號，則后面引號內(nèi)第一個字母小寫。①“That'scool,”hesaid.“CanIhaveatry?”②“You'dbetterletmego,”teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisplace.”③“Youcangoanyplaceyouwant,”Amysaid,“butIthinkyou'llfindwhatyouneed.”二、避免重復使用say在進行語言描寫時很多同學全部都只用“said”這一個單詞，這樣使得句子重復呆板，因此要學會靈活多變的各種“說”。explain解釋state陳述protest抗議sob哭訴insist堅持comfort安慰repeat重復agree同意order命令scream尖叫promise承諾whisper耳語yell/shout大叫declare聲稱add補充assure保證complain抱怨apologise道歉announce宣告argue爭論interrupt打斷beg請求demand要求mock嘲諷claim聲稱cry/exclaim喊叫suggest/advise建議stammer/stutter/stumble結(jié)巴ask/inquire詢問reply/answer/respond回答1.“Christine!照顧好你弟弟!”母親高聲喊道?！癈hristine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!”Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪兒嗎?她怎么樣?請告訴我。”他懇求道。"Hannah,doyouknowwheresheis?Howisshe?Pleasetellme."Hebegged.3.“報紙上有一個圣誕愿望競賽。”Amy的媽媽宣布，“給圣誕老人寫封信可能會得獎。”“There'saChristmaswishcontestonthenewspaper,”Amy'smomannounced.“WritealettertoSanta,andyoumightwinaprize.”三、如何讓對話更生動第一類“……,”sbsaidina…voice/tone.某人以…的聲音、語氣說到inapleasanttone/voice以一種愉悅的聲音/語氣inafirmtone/voice以一種堅定的聲音/語氣inarudetone/voice以一種粗魯?shù)穆曇?語氣inasadtone/voice以一種悲傷的聲音/語氣也可以用inavoice/toneof+名詞的搭配inatone/voiceofsurprise用一種驚訝的語氣inatone/voiceofcuriosity用一種好奇的語氣inatone/voiceofimpatience用一種不耐煩的語氣inatone/voiceofcommand用一種命令的語氣1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的語氣說?！癥oumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.2.“我很樂意?！卑桌蛴糜淇斓恼Z氣說?！癐wouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.3.“我不想和你一起去?！卑愑貌荒蜔┑恼Z氣說?！癐don'twanttogowithyou.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.4.“不，我沒有告訴他這個秘密?！彼玫统恋恼Z調(diào)說.“No,Ididn’ttellhimthesecret.”hesaidinalowtone.第二類“xxx,”sbsaidin/with+心情類名詞.某人以…的心情說道……1.“Youaresafe,”Tomcriedwithexcitement.“你安全啦！”Tom激動地說道。2.“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.“我討厭你！”她生氣地大喊道。3.“Whatalovelyrabbit,”Isaidinastonishment.“好可愛的兔子??！”我詫異地說到。4.“Nicetomeetyou,”hesaidwithenthusiasm.“很高興認識你。”他熱情地說。第三類“xxx,”sbsaid+adv..+doing.(添加非謂語動詞表達后續(xù)動作)1.“我去給我們拿點咖啡。”她溫柔地說道，朝廚房走去?！癐'llgetussomecoffee,”shesaidgently,headingforthekitchen.2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生氣地大喊道，砰的一聲關(guān)上門?！癐don'tbelieveyouanymore.”Heyelledangrily,slammingthedoor.3.“我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見不到你了?！丙溈思拥卣f，緊緊抱住他們?！癐wasattackedbyawolfandIthoughtIwouldneverseeyouagain.”Mikesaidexcitedly.huggingthemtightly.第四類sbdidsth.didsthandsaid“xxx.”(添加動作鏈)1.他攔下出租車，提著行李箱跳上車，對司機說："請去警察局。"Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver.“Gotothepolicestation,please.”2.她沖上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地說：“對不起，我的寶貝?！盨hedashedforward.kneltdownandmurmured,"I'msorry,mybaby.”3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包說：“請等一下我！”Iputonmyclotheshurriedly,grabbedmybagandsaid."Pleasewaitforme!"Translation1.“沒人能理解我！”安迪哽咽著，雙手掩面?！癗obodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.2.農(nóng)夫抱起狗，跪下來，輕聲說：“現(xiàn)在是你的了?！盩hefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”3.她眼里噙著淚水說：“對不起。”Withtearsinhereves,shesaid,“Sorry.”4.“嗨，蘭迪。我對意大利面條的事感到抱歉?！眲P瑟琳低聲道歉，臉漲紅了?！癏i,Landy.I'msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.5.“看！”羅斯指著窗戶，激動地喊道。“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.6.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說?！癢anttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.7.我打開窗戶對著對面喊道?！拔抑牢覀円郧耙娺^面，但我不記得在哪里了?！薄openedmywindowandshoutedacross,“Iknowwe'vemetbefore,butIcan'trememberwhere.”8.“想試一下嗎?”我撫摸著瑪麗娜的手說?！癢anttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.第二部分結(jié)尾升華一、分類1、氛圍結(jié)尾:floatedintheair/filled+地點/…wasbathedin“飄在空中/充滿/沉浸在”(1)Thegoldensunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheyardandhappinessfloatedintheair.(2)Withthecoolbreeze,thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.2、擁抱哭泣對話法AhuggedBtightlywithtearsflowingdownone'scheeks,whispering...母親給了我們每個人一個大大的擁抱，眼淚順著臉頰流下來，在我們耳邊低語：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們。Themotherhuggedustightlywithtearsflowingdownhercheeks,whisperinginourears,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.強調(diào)句:Itis+名詞+that+謂語(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”正是愛和關(guān)懷使世界運轉(zhuǎn)。Itisloveandcarethatmaketheworldgoaround.4.Fromthenon,“從那時起,……”從那時起，我總是盡可能地幫助別人。Fromthenon,Ialwaysgiveothersahelpinghandifpossible.從那時起，友誼在我們兩人的心中綻放。Fromthenonfriendshipbloomedinbothofourhearts.5.Onlythendidsb.realizethat…“直到那時某人才意識到…”直到那時我才意識到，我們不應該把愛視為理所當然。OnlythendidIrealizedthatweshouldnevertakeloveforgranted.6.Itoccurredtosb.that…“某人突然想到…”他突然想到，有了家人的愛，過生日就不再是煩惱了。Itoccurredtohimthatwithfamily'slove,itwasnolongerdisturbingtohavebirthday.7.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforget...“許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記…”許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記那份特別的禮物。Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetthespecialgift.8.Manyyearshavepassed,buttheexperienceisstilldeeplyengravedinone'smind.許多年過去了，但這段經(jīng)歷仍深深地銘刻在一個人的腦海里。9.Neverhadsb.donesth.“某人從來沒有…”她從來沒有這么驕傲過！Neverhadshebeensoproud!二、精彩結(jié)尾賞析親情類1.TheMotherhuggedthetwinstightly,whispering,“Thisisthebestsurpriseintheworld!”2.OnlythendidIrealizedthathowmuchmymomlovedme.3.Itoccurredtomethatfamilyloveisthegreatestgiftinlife.4.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.5.Itwasatthisverymomentthatthefrozenicebetweentwogenerations——melteddownintoawarmstreamflowingintotheirhearts.6.Theearlysunlightstreamingin,laughterlingeredaroundtheroomandhappinessfloatedintheair/thewholefamilywasbathedinhappinessandlove.7.Aftersomanyyears,thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentsstilllingeredinmymind.=thetasteofthecake,thelaughteroffriendsandtheembraceofmyparentswerestilldeeplyengravedinmymind.8.Thisbirthdayisboundtobekeptinmymemoryforever,lighteningmyfuturepath.助人類1.有時候，我們小小的行動可以給別人帶來很大的不同。Sometimesoursmallactioncanmakeagreatdifferencetoothers.2.許多年過去了，但我永遠不會忘記瑪格麗特的圣誕禮物和她的善舉。Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetMargret'sChristmasgiftsandheractofkindness.2.母親給了我們每個人一個大大的擁抱，在我們的眼中低語：“謝謝你們的好意。是你的愛溫暖了我們?！盩hemothergaveeachofusabighug,whisperinginoureyes,“Thankyouforyourkindness.It'syourlovethathaswarmedusup.”3.我突然想到，一個簡單的舉動可以讓世界變得更美好。Itoccurredtomethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.5.雖然外面的風還在呼嘯，但一股暖流涌上心頭。Althoughthewindstillscreamedoutside,awarmcurrentroseinmyheart.個人成長類(逆境、積極向上)1.在你身上發(fā)生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何應對。It'snotwhathappenstoyou,buthowyoureacttoitthatmatters.2.直面困難，努力。你終將制造奇跡。Bebrave,risetosetbacks,andmakeefforts.Youwillendupcreatingmiracles.3.恐懼締造不了未來，但希望可以。Fearneverbuildsthefuture,buthopedoes.4.每個人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的沒有。只要你開花，就會有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。Everyoneislikeaflower,somehavingfragrance,butsomenot.Aslongasyoubloom,therewillbebeesandbutterflies.5.要把最壞的情況變成最好的情況，一個人應該采取行動。Tochangetheworstsituationintobest,oneshouldtakeactions.6.正如諺語所說，永遠不會失敗。我要么贏，要么學習。Justasasayinggoes,“Neverlose.Ieitherwinorlearn.”7.成功之路并不平坦。它充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和困難。Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.個人成長類(夢想)1.這是真的：如果夢想足夠大，事實并不重要。It'strue:Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount.2.任何一個有夢想，有勇氣和毅力的人都會成功。Anyonewit