讀后續(xù)寫講解

截圖發(fā)朋友圈sharethepictures1.張博（3）班2.黃心悅（6）班3.曹旭輝（4）班4.陳琳（3）班5.馮圣杰（4）班6.郭子瑕（3）班7.邱新特（4）班8.金宸如（3）班9.朱澄镕（6）班10.林子心（6）班讀后續(xù)寫1.讀懂全文who,when,where,what,how,why2.從文中獲得重要的隱藏的線索3.分析給你的兩段的開頭句第一段給你的第一句要與第二句有銜接第一段最后一句與第二段第一句有銜接三步走1.vacationingv度假2.theFoggyFigure[?f?gi][?f?g?(r)]

霧影

3.haunt[h?:nt]

時常出現(xiàn)在4.ghostly[?g??stli]

可怕的5.creature[?kri:t??(r)]

生物6.sniff[sn?f]

嗅，深深吸入7.thefaintscent[fe?nt][sent]微弱的氣味8.strike[stra?k]struck侵襲9.dock[d?k]

碼頭，船?？看a頭10.scary[?ske?ri]

膽小的，可怕的11.shrug[?r?g]

聳肩12.barely[?be?li]

幾乎不13.lower[?l???(r)]

降低14.hug[h?g]

擁抱who:when:where:weather:

What:JustinandMaryUncleThomasonedayduringthevacationat5:00amfirstattheiruncle'slakehousethenattheboatdockFoggyThefoghadsettledoverthelake,makingitimpossibletoseeanythingUncleThomastoldJustinandMaryabouttheFoggyFigurethathauntsthelake.TheydeterminedtoseetheFoggyFigure.1.讀懂全文ghostlyfrighteningscaryWhetherdidtheyseetheFoggyFigure?Thinking？？？

IstheretheFoggyFigure?DoyouthinkUncleThomaswasjusttryingtofrightenuswiththatstory?2.隱藏的線索thehiddencluesabouttheFoggyFigureJustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthen.....3.分析兩句開頭句thingshappenedontheboat.theirfrightenedfeelings.TheFoggyFigureappeared.whatistheFoggyFigure.___________________atmospherenervousandfrightening存在問題：

1.沒有下劃線

2.對話太多

3.第一段最后一句與第二段第一句沒有銜接

張淑雯鄭慧琳夏晨輝蔡佳佳鐘淇，張博，羅慧杰王佳慧程卓瑤朱芮瑩五個檔次：

第五檔：21-25第四檔：16-20第三檔：11-15第二檔：6-10第一檔：1-5

JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!

JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“Uncle

Thomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too.“Let’sdoit,”MaryandJustinsaid.JustincarefullyloweredhimselfintotheboatandthenreachedforMary’shand.Maryclimbedintotheboatandsatbesidehim.Shewasgettingnervousnowthattheywereonthewater.“Seeanything?”Theylookedaround,andgradually,thefogbegantolift.Maryturnedaroundandscreamed.“TheFoggyFigure!”Itwasintheboatwiththem!JustinandMaryhuggedeachotherinfear,butthentheyheardalaugh.JustinmovedtowardtheFoggyFigure.“UncleThomas?”“Iknewthatstorywouldgetyoutwooutofbedearlyenoughtotakeaboatridewithme.”Marysighed,happytherewasnoFoggyFigureafterall.Justinlookedrelieved,too.UncleThomaslaughed.“Whatdoyousay?Ipackedabreakfastforus.”Marysmiled.Shehadsmelledthescentofcoffee.AndUncleThomashadpackedsweetcakesforthem,too.“Let’