河北省衡水中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期四調(diào)考試讀后續(xù)寫認(rèn)個爺爺講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechainlink(鐵絲網(wǎng))fence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger,”hesaidjokingly.

LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinmewewerebothlonelyandanxiousandthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.

Itwasawonderfulconnection.Thereweren'tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog.

Ihadalotofimaginaryfriendsawholefamily,actuallywithawife，children，abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe'dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame“my"room.Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor(割草機)somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter,Billwouldattachasnowplow(鏟雪機)tothefrontofthelawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup."Sureyouwill.You'llgetapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,"Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout."WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?"

MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150

左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.文本分析：Divideparagraphstoanalyzetextinformationwhilepayingattentiontocharactercharacteristicsandthedevelopmentofcharacterrelationships:第一段：Attheageofseven,ImovedandmetmyneighborBill,whohandedmestrawberriesthroughawirefence.第二段：Billalwaysworksinthegarden,andIoftentalktohimintheyard.ButBillwon'tgetboredbecause"I"isachatterbox.第三段：Ihavenopeerstoplaywith,andmyparentsarealsoverybusyanddon'thavetimetoacpanyme.Ihavemanyimaginaryfamilymembers.第四段:Whenmyparentswereonabusinesstrip,theyentrusted"me"toBill,whichbecameamonthlyactivityforus.Bill'sfamilyhasadedicatedroomfor"me".第五段：Billpromisestoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower,andhislawnmowerwillbeequippedwithasnowplowinwinter.IpromisedhimthatIwoulddesignabettersnowplowforhiminthefuture.HethinksIwilldefinitelysucceedandobtainapatentinthefuture.續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：Firstparagraph:"I"proposedtobeadoptedBillwasshocked,buthappilyagreed"I"toldmyparentstovisitthemhaveareuniondinner,takeafamilyphotoBillfeltitwastimetoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower.Secondparagraph:IfeelafraidofcausingtroubleBillhelpsmeresolveitwithhumorIstartstudyingmoreseriouslyandfinallylearnBillexpresseshisappreciationformewithahugIembracehimbackandbelievethatIhavethebestfriend.官方范文，Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billstoodfrozenforalittlewhilebeforeabroadsmilecameacrosshisface.ThenIsawtearsinhiseyes.Hewrappedmehisarmsandburiedhisfaceinmycoattohidehistears,hisvoicetrembling,“Ofcourse,sweetheart!I'msohappytobeyourgrandpa!”Soonafter,Billprintedoutanadoptioncertificateandhungitonthewallof“my”room,Gazingatthesnowoutside,Billsaidtomeexcitedly,“It'stimetolearnhowtodrivealawntractor.Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwasalmostfrightenedtotears,butBilljustchuckledinhislaidbackwayandfortedme,“Don'tworry,Grandson.Ihavealreadyplannedtochangeafence.”Weeventuallyreplaceditwithanice,tallwoodenfence.MydadandBillinstalledittogether.Whatimpressedmemostwasthattherewasadooronthefence,whichdefinitelystrengthenedourconnection.Underneath,Iknewthatwewereatruefamilynow.參考范文一，Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Thequestioncaughthimoffguard.Thenwearinganawkwardyetpleasantsmile,hesaidearnestly,“Thankyouforsayingthat.Butit’sOKthatwejustkeepourrelationshipwherewearenow.I’mreallyhappythatwecanplaytogether.”Puzzled,Iproceededtoaskwhy,buthejustdeviatedtoanothertopic.Laterthatnight,ItoldmyparentsBill’sresponse,andtheysmiled,too,sayingthatallIcoulddowastovisithimmoretorepayhiskindness.Inodded,vaguelyknowingtoletitpass.

Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwaspanicked,“Ohmygod,Ijustmadeaterriblemistake.”Hearingthepiercingcrack,BillranoutbutsoonwasrelievedtoseeIwasfine.Hejustfortedmegently,“it’sOK.Let’sfixit!”Withthebrokenfencegone,

Billcouldn’tfixitimmediately,sohehadtolethiscourtyardexposedtoeveryone.However,everyone,includingmyparents,wouldgreetedhimwhenevertheysawhim.Gradually,Billsmiledmoreandneversetupthefenceagain.Asforme,occupiedwithoperatingthosemachines,Igraduallysaidgoodbyetomyimaginaryfriendsandimpressedotherkidswithmyskills.Itwasluckythatwemeteachother.

參考范文二，Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billlookedsurprisedforamoment,thenawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.“Well,that'safirstforme!”hechuckled.Myparents,whowerestandingatadistance,exchangedamusedglances.Fromthatdayon,Billofficially