讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類+我不是這個意思+講義 高三英語一輪復習

試題呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料。根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Theydon'tmeanitOurfamilymovedherefomChinatwoyears

ago,andwethoughtwewereprettywelladjustedtoAmericanways.ThisyearmyparentsdecidedtogiveapartyonChineseNewYearandinvitesomeofourAmenicanfriends.Thepartywentpretywell.Ourguestswereamazedattheflavorofallthespecialfoods.AfterthedinnertheythankedusforshowingthemwhatarealChineseNewYeardinnerwaslike."Ilovedthedishes.Youandthegirlsmusthavespenthoursdoingallthework."Mrs.O’Mearasaidtomymother.“Thegirlshelpedwiththecutingand

I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob."saidMother.Iheardalittlegasp（倒吸氣）

frommyfriendKimO’Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIaskedwhatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn’tundertandwhymymothersaidso.Ihadtolaugh."Shedosn'tmeanit.It’sjustthewayshetalks."Seeingherstillconfused,Iwentonexpaining,

“InChina,parentsconsideritgoodmannerstodenypraisesbouttheirchildren.Otherwise,

itwouldbethesameasbragging（自夸）."

Kimseemedalittlehesitant,butshenoddedanyway.ThatEaster,theO’Mearasinvitedourfmilyfordinner.MrsO’Mearacookedahugehamwhichweenjoyedalot.AsMrs.O'Meanstartedcuttingthecakefordessert,Mothersaid,"I'mnotsureiflcaneatonemorebite.ThatwasthebesthamI'veevertasted!""Aw,

thathamwasterrible,"saidKim."Ibetyoucoulddoalotbetter,Mrs.Yang."注意:1.續(xù)寫短文詞數(shù)應為

150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震驚的）

silencearoundthetable.Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.我的課堂流程是：一、請學生講講前文的主題和情節(jié)：主題：兩個家庭（一個中國家庭和一個美國家庭）過節(jié)互相邀請對方做客，在交流過程中免不了互相之間的贊美，由于東西方文化對待別人“贊美”的態(tài)度和回應不一樣，引起了美國小孩Kim對待別人“贊美”的誤解，并且弄得雙方很尷尬，最后通過作者的解釋化解了誤解和尷尬。前文情節(jié)：我家新年請Kim一家來做客——Kim的母親贊美我們姐妹幫助母親——我母親不好意思謙虛一下，說I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob.——Kim不理解我母親為什么那樣說——我做了解釋Kim好像明白了——復活節(jié)Kim一家請我們去做客——我母親贊美Kim的母親火腿好吃——Kim來了一句thathamwasterrible弄得大家都很尷尬。二、續(xù)寫情節(jié)構思：構思原則：兩段首句定一框,

二框二首正能量根據(jù)兩段首句，請學生說說第一段情節(jié)，重點是把過程敘述清楚（重點難點）,此時不談細節(jié)。根據(jù)大家的意見，“敘述過程”三句話。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震驚的）

silencearoundthetable.1.OmearastaredatKim.Kimfeltembarrassed.2.Iwassurprised

andasked

“Whydid

youtalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kim

replied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”根據(jù)第二段首句和正能量原則，接著請學生說說第二段情節(jié)，重點是把過程敘述清楚（重點難點）,此時不談細節(jié)。根據(jù)大家的意見，“敘述過程”三句話。Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.1.

I

comfortedher

and

explained,

“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”2.

Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame.3.

Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,

”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”三、請學生在適當?shù)牡胤皆鎏砑毠?jié)（注意：細節(jié)描寫不要太多；學生一般都喜歡用對話但是不會寫對話，對話一定要符合語境，精煉）第一段：1.Omearastared（coldly/angrily）

atKim.Kimfeltembarrassed（redface）.2.Iwassurprisedandasked

“Whydidyoutalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kimreplied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”（續(xù)寫過程中很少學生能表達清楚）

第二段：1.Icomfortedher（怎么安慰

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown）

andexplained,“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”（續(xù)寫過程中很少學生能表達清楚）2.Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame（怎么表達羞愧Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed）.3.（怎么表達難為情Droopingherhead）Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”（結尾回扣主題）四、范文展示，學生背誦Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

O’mearawasstaringcoldlyatKim,whosefacereddenedwithembarrassment.Iwasalsoshockedatmyfriend'smeanremark.Clearingmythroat,Ifinallyasked,"Whatdidyoutalk

toyourmother

likethat?"Kimturnedaround,seeminglyannoyed,“B-butyouweretheonewhot-toldmethatsayingnicethingsaboutyourownfamilywasthesameasbragging!"shestuttered."Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly!”IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown,andexplained“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’t

praisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelder."Hearingthis,Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed.Theawkwardsilencewassoonbrokenasthemisunderstandingwaserased.Droopingherhead,Kimapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehavior.Mrs.O'Mearawinkedather,joking,"That'sallright.Weknowyoudidn'tmeanit!”下水文：Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

Aoremainedsilent,juststaringcoldlyatJin'sface,whichhadturnedredduetoembarrassment.Iamalsoshockedandangryatmyfriend'sharshwords.Afterclearingmythroat,Ifinallyspokeupandasked,"Didyousaythattoyourmother?"Jinturnedaroundandcrossedhiswaist,seemingveryangry."B,butyoutellme,sayinggoodthingsaboutyourfamilyislikebragging!"Shestuttered."Ijustwanttokeepalowprofile!"IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Ipattedhershoulderinanattempttocalmherdownandexplained,"Usually,Chineseparentsdon'tpraisetheirchildrenasasignofhumilityinfrontofothers,butyoungpeoplearealwaysrequiredtorespecttheir