讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(lèi)+我不是這個(gè)意思+講義 高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

試題呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料。根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Theydon'tmeanitOurfamilymovedherefomChinatwoyears

ago,andwethoughtwewereprettywelladjustedtoAmericanways.ThisyearmyparentsdecidedtogiveapartyonChineseNewYearandinvitesomeofourAmenicanfriends.Thepartywentpretywell.Ourguestswereamazedattheflavorofallthespecialfoods.AfterthedinnertheythankedusforshowingthemwhatarealChineseNewYeardinnerwaslike."Ilovedthedishes.Youandthegirlsmusthavespenthoursdoingallthework."Mrs.O’Mearasaidtomymother.“Thegirlshelpedwiththecutingand

I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob."saidMother.Iheardalittlegasp（倒吸氣）

frommyfriendKimO’Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIaskedwhatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn’tundertandwhymymothersaidso.Ihadtolaugh."Shedosn'tmeanit.It’sjustthewayshetalks."Seeingherstillconfused,Iwentonexpaining,

“InChina,parentsconsideritgoodmannerstodenypraisesbouttheirchildren.Otherwise,

itwouldbethesameasbragging（自夸）."

Kimseemedalittlehesitant,butshenoddedanyway.ThatEaster,theO’Mearasinvitedourfmilyfordinner.MrsO’Mearacookedahugehamwhichweenjoyedalot.AsMrs.O'Meanstartedcuttingthecakefordessert,Mothersaid,"I'mnotsureiflcaneatonemorebite.ThatwasthebesthamI'veevertasted!""Aw,

thathamwasterrible,"saidKim."Ibetyoucoulddoalotbetter,Mrs.Yang."注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

150左右。2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震驚的）

silencearoundthetable.Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.我的課堂流程是：一、請(qǐng)學(xué)生講講前文的主題和情節(jié)：主題：兩個(gè)家庭（一個(gè)中國(guó)家庭和一個(gè)美國(guó)家庭）過(guò)節(jié)互相邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方做客，在交流過(guò)程中免不了互相之間的贊美，由于東西方文化對(duì)待別人“贊美”的態(tài)度和回應(yīng)不一樣，引起了美國(guó)小孩Kim對(duì)待別人“贊美”的誤解，并且弄得雙方很尷尬，最后通過(guò)作者的解釋化解了誤解和尷尬。前文情節(jié)：我家新年請(qǐng)Kim一家來(lái)做客——Kim的母親贊美我們姐妹幫助母親——我母親不好意思謙虛一下，說(shuō)I'msorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob.——Kim不理解我母親為什么那樣說(shuō)——我做了解釋Kim好像明白了——復(fù)活節(jié)Kim一家請(qǐng)我們?nèi)プ隹汀夷赣H贊美Kim的母親火腿好吃——Kim來(lái)了一句thathamwasterrible弄得大家都很尷尬。二、續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思原則：兩段首句定一框,

二框二首正能量根據(jù)兩段首句，請(qǐng)學(xué)生說(shuō)說(shuō)第一段情節(jié)，重點(diǎn)是把過(guò)程敘述清楚（重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn)）,此時(shí)不談細(xì)節(jié)。根據(jù)大家的意見(jiàn)，“敘述過(guò)程”三句話(huà)。Paragraph1:Therewasastunned（震驚的）

silencearoundthetable.1.OmearastaredatKim.Kimfeltembarrassed.2.Iwassurprised

andasked

“Whydid

youtalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kim

replied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”根據(jù)第二段首句和正能量原則，接著請(qǐng)學(xué)生說(shuō)說(shuō)第二段情節(jié)，重點(diǎn)是把過(guò)程敘述清楚（重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn)）,此時(shí)不談細(xì)節(jié)。根據(jù)大家的意見(jiàn)，“敘述過(guò)程”三句話(huà)。Paragraph2:IfinallyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.1.

I

comfortedher

and

explained,

“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”2.

Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame.3.

Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,

”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”三、請(qǐng)學(xué)生在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤皆鎏砑?xì)節(jié)（注意：細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)不要太多；學(xué)生一般都喜歡用對(duì)話(huà)但是不會(huì)寫(xiě)對(duì)話(huà)，對(duì)話(huà)一定要符合語(yǔ)境，精煉）第一段：1.Omearastared（coldly/angrily）

atKim.Kimfeltembarrassed（redface）.2.Iwassurprisedandasked

“Whydidyoutalktoyourmotherlikethat?”3.Kimreplied,

“youhadtoldmenottopraisefamilymembersinfrontofothers.Itwasthesameasbragging.Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly.”（續(xù)寫(xiě)過(guò)程中很少學(xué)生能表達(dá)清楚）

第二段：1.Icomfortedher（怎么安慰

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown）

andexplained,“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’tpraisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelderly.”（續(xù)寫(xiě)過(guò)程中很少學(xué)生能表達(dá)清楚）2.Hearingthis,shesighedwithshame（怎么表達(dá)羞愧Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed）.3.（怎么表達(dá)難為情Droopingherhead）Sheapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehaviours.Hermothersaid,”That’sallright.Weknowyoudidn’tmeanit.”（結(jié)尾回扣主題）四、范文展示，學(xué)生背誦Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

O’mearawasstaringcoldlyatKim,whosefacereddenedwithembarrassment.Iwasalsoshockedatmyfriend'smeanremark.Clearingmythroat,Ifinallyasked,"Whatdidyoutalk

toyourmother

likethat?"Kimturnedaround,seeminglyannoyed,“B-butyouweretheonewhot-toldmethatsayingnicethingsaboutyourownfamilywasthesameasbragging!"shestuttered."Iwasjusttryingtoactmodestly!”IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Itookherhandsinminetocalmherdown,andexplained“GenerallyChineseparentsdoesn’t

praisetheirchildreninfrontofotherstoshowmodestybutyoungpeoplearealwaysexpectedtoberespectfultotheelder."Hearingthis,Kimsigheddeeply,hercheeksflushed.Theawkwardsilencewassoonbrokenasthemisunderstandingwaserased.Droopingherhead,Kimapologizedtohermotherforherimpolitebehavior.Mrs.O'Mearawinkedather,joking,"That'sallright.Weknowyoudidn'tmeanit!”下水文：Therewasadeadlysilencearoundthetable.

Aoremainedsilent,juststaringcoldlyatJin'sface,whichhadturnedredduetoembarrassment.Iamalsoshockedandangryatmyfriend'sharshwords.Afterclearingmythroat,Ifinallyspokeupandasked,"Didyousaythattoyourmother?"Jinturnedaroundandcrossedhiswaist,seemingveryangry."B,butyoutellme,sayinggoodthingsaboutyourfamilyislikebragging!"Shestuttered."Ijustwanttokeepalowprofile!"IfinallyknewthatKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

Ipattedhershoulderinanattempttocalmherdownandexplained,"Usually,Chineseparentsdon'tpraisetheirchildrenasasignofhumilityinfrontofothers,butyoungpeoplearealwaysrequiredtorespecttheir