建議信是否開設(shè)學(xué)生職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃課程（寧波一模2023.11.9）講義高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

原題假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Albert想了解中國(guó)高中生對(duì)于是否需要開設(shè)學(xué)生職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃(careerplanning)課程的想法，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給他，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的觀點(diǎn)；2.你的理由；3.你的建議，注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

思路

建議信是向特定的個(gè)人、組織或團(tuán)體提出建議、意見或解決問(wèn)題的方案。這種信件通常以禮貌語(yǔ)氣書寫，旨在表達(dá)發(fā)信人對(duì)特定問(wèn)題的看法，并提供具體的建議或解決方案首段就可以開門見山，直抒觀點(diǎn)理由和建議可以一起放在中段最后尾段表示希望考慮我的想法并感謝表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句型：AsfarasI'mconcernedFrommyperspective,FromwhereIstandPersonally,Ibelieve。Iholdtheviewthat...iholdthefirmbeliefthat...Ifirmlybelievethat……陳述理由（支持）的短語(yǔ)：lmprovedCareerDecisionEnhancedSelfawarenessSkillDevelopmentIncreasedCollegeandUniversityApplicationSuccess陳述理由（反對(duì)）的短語(yǔ)LimitedScopeOnesizefitsallApproachTimemitmentLackofPracticalExperience高分示例1DearAlbert,

Concerningthenecessitytoset

upthecourseaboutstudentscareerplanning,Ifirmlysupportforit.

Themajoritystudentsjustprioritizeacademicstudy,sparinglittleattentiononfuturecareerdevelopment,whichcouldresultinanunwisedecisionwhenfacedwithcareerselection.However,therelatedcoursecanequipstudentswithessentialprofessionalknowledge,instructionandguidancesoastorealizeabrightcareerdirection,effectivestudyandadvancedpreparation.SuchabeneficialcourseisitthatIhighlysuggesteditbeincorporatedintoourstudybyregularinsightfullectures,seminarsorevenpracticaljobexperience.I’mconvincedwhatitwouldbringtostudentsisbeyondimagination.

Yourconsiderationofmyviewpointandsuggestionsaresincerelyappreciated.LiHua重點(diǎn)詞句解析

Concerning

thenecessitytosetupthecourseaboutstudentscareerplanning,I

firmlysupport

forit.

（表達(dá)“我覺得有必要開設(shè)這個(gè)課程”，并沒有用“Ibelieveitisnecessary...”這樣的寫法，避免了大眾化表達(dá)）

Themajoritystudentsjust

prioritize（v：優(yōu)先考慮，將...置于首位）academicstudy,sparinglittleattentiononfuturecareerdevelopment,whichcouldresultinan

unwise

decisionwhenfacedwithcareer

selection.（這個(gè)句子，結(jié)合了非謂結(jié)構(gòu)與非限定性定從兩種高級(jí)句式）

However,therelatedcoursecan

equipstudentswith（表達(dá)“讓學(xué)生擁有...”，沒有用bring/provide/offer等，用“equipsbwith..."升級(jí)）

essential（adj

必不可少的,

升級(jí)necessary）

professionalknowledge,instructionandguidancesoastorealizeabrightcareerdirection,effectivestudyandadvancedpreparation.Sucha

beneficial

courseisitthatIhighlysuggesteditbe

incorporated（v

融入

融合）

intoourstudybyregular

insightful

（見解深刻的）lectures,seminarsorevenpracticaljobexperience.（使用倒裝句）

I’mconvincedwhatitwouldbringtostudentsisbeyondimagination.（使用疑問(wèn)詞引導(dǎo)的名從）

Yourconsiderationofmyviewpointandsuggestionsaresincerelyappreciated.高分示例2：DearAlbert,IfirmlybelievethatyourinquiryaboutwhetherhighschoolshouldoffercareerplanningcoursesisnecessaryCareerplanninghelpsstudentsbetterunderstandtheirinterestsandstrengths,therebyguidingthemtowardsafulfillingfuture.Italsoenablesthemtomakewisedecisionsabouttheiracademicpathandpotentialcareerchoices.Therefore,Istronglyremendincludingitasapulsorycourse.Thiscanbeachievedthroughseminars,seminars,andinvitedspeeches,providingvaluableinformationandguidanceforstudentsthroughouttheiracademicjourney.Thankyouforconsideringmyopinion.Ibelievethatthiscoursewillbenefitstudentsintheirfutureefforts.(99w)YourLiHua高分示例3DearAlbert,InresponsetoyourqueryaboutthenecessityofcareerplanningcoursesforhighschoolstudentsinChina,Ifirmlybelievethatsuchcoursesareindispensable.Byintroducingcareerplanningeducation,studentscangainvaluableinsightsintovariousprofessions,allowingthemtomakewellinformedcareerchoices.Moreover,itcultivatesessentialskillslikegoalsettinganddecisionmaking,empoweringstudentstocharttheirownpaths.Therefore,Iwholeheartedlyadvocatefortheincorporationofcareerplanningcoursesbyinvolvingworkshopsandseminarsinthehighschoolcurriculumtopreparestudentsfortheirfuturepursuits.Lookingforwardtoexchangingthoughtsonthismatter.YousLiHua高分示例4DearAlbertInregardtoyourinquiryaboutthenecessityofcareerplanningcoursesforhighschoolstudentsinChina,Iholdtheviewthatsuchcoursesmaynotbeimperative.Firstly,highschoolstudentsareoftenburdenedwithacademicpressure,andintroducingadditionalmandatorycoursescouldfurtheroverwhelmthem.Furthermore,manystudentsmaystillbeexploringdifferentinterestsandmaynothaveaclearcareerpathinmindatthisstage.Instead,Isuggestofferingcareercounselingservicesoroptionalworkshopstoprovideguidanceforthosewhoareinterested.Lookingforwardtohearingyourthoughtsoncontrastingperspective.BestregardsYoursLihua同話題小試牛刀：假定你是李華，你校上周五舉行了有關(guān)個(gè)人職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃的活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校英文刊物CampusWeekly”寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括:1.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及過(guò)程;2.活動(dòng)反響。注意:ASteppingStonetoCareerLastFriday,ourschoolinvitedsomeexpertstogivelecturesaboutcareerplanningwiththepurposeofgivingsomeinstructionsaboutcareerchoices.Inthelecture,theexpertsgaveussomeadviceonhowtochoosecareersandwhatweshoulddoforourfuturecareers,whichreallyinspiredus.Furthermore,theexpertsanalyzedthetopcareerswhichareingreatneedforusandithelpedusstudentsfindoutourinterestinourfuturecareers.Allthestud