高考英語讀后續(xù)寫災難故事類與朋友結(jié)伴滑雪突遇雪崩后死里逃生課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習災難故事——與朋友結(jié)伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(風雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.4續(xù)寫原文5段首句Paragraph1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Paragraph2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了經(jīng)驗豐富的滑雪愛好者肯·斯科特和好友保羅結(jié)伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“保羅比較幸運，部分被埋葬，很可能還活著?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫保羅如何脫險，以及脫險后尋找好友和尋求救援。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“回憶起那次可怕的經(jīng)歷，斯科特感謝了他的朋友和救援隊伍。”可知，第二段可描寫當被埋在封閉空間的積雪下時，斯科特的心理活動及獲救后的感激之情。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索結(jié)伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——尋求援助——獲救——感激12續(xù)寫素材13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.（as引導的時間狀語從句）[高分句型2]Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.（由關(guān)系代詞which引導非限制性定語從句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving.Sofortunatewashethatmostofthesnowhadgoneoverhisbodyandcontinueddownthehill.Insuchashallowburial,hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,scoopedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.Lookingaroundtheworldofsnow,hedesperatelyshoutedScott’snamebutreceivednotraceofresponses.Paulunzippedhisparkaandpulledoutthephonetomaketheemergencycall.Shortlyafterwards,therescueteamarrived.Withgreatefforts,PaulandtheteamlocatedScottandfoundhimaliveinanenclosedspace,whichendedtheunthinkableaccidentwithanincrediblesurvival.16范文呈現(xiàn)Recallingtheterribleexperience,Scottthankedhisfriendandtherescueteam.Whenburiedundersnowintheenclosedspace,Scottdriftedbetweenterrorandpanic,hopingthathisfriendPaulwasnotburiedsodeep.Heheldontothatfaintpossibilitylikearopewhichcouldpullhimtosafety.Hepainstakinglytookonlytinybreaths,fightingtostaypositivebyfocusingonthisbreathing.Timetickedawayslowly.Justashewasfeelinghimselffadingaway,therescueteamarrived.Inthatone-in-a-millionchance,theymadeit.Withthedullskyclearingup,bothPaulandScottbreathedinthefreshairwithabandon,feelingtherebirthoflife.17范文譯文保羅更幸運，最終被部分埋葬，可能還活了下來。他是如此幸運，以至于大部分的雪都蓋過了他的身體，繼續(xù)下山。在這樣一個淺埋的地方，他開始抖雪，徒手鏟雪，然后設(shè)法把自己拉了出來。環(huán)顧雪地，他拼命喊著斯科特的名字，但沒有得到任何回應。保羅拉開他的派克大衣的拉鏈，拔出電話打緊急電話。不久之后，救援隊趕到了。在巨大的努力下，保羅和團隊找到了斯科特，并在一個封閉的空間里發(fā)現(xiàn)了他還活著，這以令人難以置信的生還結(jié)束了這場不可思議的事故。18范文譯文回憶起那段可怕的經(jīng)歷，斯科特感謝他的朋友和救援隊。當斯科特被埋在封閉的空間里的雪下時，他在恐懼和恐慌之間徘徊，希望他的朋友保羅不要埋得那么深。他緊緊抓住那微弱的可能性，就像一根繩子，可以把他拉到安全的地方。他費力地只做了很小的呼吸，努力通過專注于這種呼吸來保持積極