讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)人和動(dòng)物互相救贖共同成長(zhǎng)(2023.10天域聯(lián)盟)講義高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文中文Theyear2013markedaturningpointinmylife.InJune,myhusbandwasofferedanewJobinGhana.FeelingthatIhadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerandcopywriter,I,withoutanyhesitation,madethedecisiontorelocatewithhim.2013年是我生活的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。6月份，我的丈夫在非洲加納得到了一份新的工作。我覺(jué)得自己作為一名攝影師和廣告文案撰寫(xiě)人的職業(yè)發(fā)展已經(jīng)到了瓶頸，所以我毫不猶豫地決定和他一起搬到那里。Whilemyhusbandengagedinwork,myvisadidn'tgrantmethesameprivilege.Butthat'sokay.Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Iwasleftisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Ournewhomewasabungalownearariverthatcutacrossexpansivegrasslands.Withfewpeoplearoundourhome,Iturnedtonature,whichhadbeenafondnessofminesincechildhood.Everyday,

Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlessly.雖然我的丈夫在工作，但我沒(méi)辦成工作簽。但這沒(méi)關(guān)系。反正我也不知道該做什么。我有一種“與世隔絕”的感覺(jué)，思鄉(xiāng)之情油然而生，我似乎失去了生活的目標(biāo)。我們的新家位于廣袤草原上河邊。我家周?chē)鷰缀鯖](méi)有人，我投身于了自己從小就喜歡的大自然。每天，我都會(huì)帶著相機(jī)，無(wú)目的地漫游，拍攝照片。Itwasn'tlongbeforeSeptemberarrived,bringingthefullflowoftherainyseason.Afteroneparticularlybadthunderstorm,Ifoundafinch,apoorlittlethingbarelyamontholdwithonewingbroken,ontheground.Evidently,hehadbeenabandonedbyhisflock,hisnestblownfromatree.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Hewasthesizeofmylittlefinger.Hiseyesweretightlyshutandhewasshuddering,tooyoungtosurvivealone.Isomehowfeltaconnectionwithit.ImmediatelyIscoopedhimupandcautiouslyplacedhiminacardboardboxwithtowels,mimickinganest,andstayedupallnightresearchinghowtocareforhim.轉(zhuǎn)眼間，九月份就來(lái)了，雨季到了，水位上漲。在一次特別嚴(yán)重的雷暴后，我在地上發(fā)現(xiàn)了一只雀兒，一個(gè)可憐的小鳥(niǎo)，只有一個(gè)月大，一只翅膀斷了。顯然，他被他鳥(niǎo)群遺棄了，他的巢被從樹(shù)上吹走了。這個(gè)情景讓人心痛。他只有我小指的大小。他的眼睛緊緊閉著，他在顫抖，他太小了，無(wú)法獨(dú)自生存。我不知怎么的，感覺(jué)和他有一種“聯(lián)系”。我立刻把他撿起來(lái)，小心翼翼地把他放在一個(gè)裝有毛巾的紙箱里，模仿一個(gè)巢，然后熬夜研究如何照顧他。Thenextday,heseemedtoregainsomeenergy.Hewokewithhismouthopen,thoughstilltooweaktoletoutacall.Ifedhimsomefoodandchirpedathim.Tomyamusement,hechirpedbackandevenclimbedintomyhand.Iaffectionatelygazedatthisadorablecreature,whowasnowboldlypeckingmyfingersnowandthen.Asurgeofwarmthranthroughme.Tenderlystrokinghisfeathers,Ichirpedalullaby,singinghimtosleep.Gradually,hiseyesdroopedandhedriftedoff.Icouldn'thelpbutchuckleatthesceneasfarashewasconcerned,Iwashismother.

續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：“Iwilltakecareofyou."Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.

續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithinmechanged.第二天，他似乎恢復(fù)了一些精力。他張著嘴醒來(lái)，但還太弱，無(wú)法叫出聲來(lái)。我喂他一些食物，并模仿著對(duì)他嘰嘰喳喳叫。令我感到有趣的是，他回應(yīng)了我，甚至爬到了我的手上。我深情地注視著這個(gè)可愛(ài)的小生物，他現(xiàn)在時(shí)不時(shí)地啄我的手指。一種溫暖的感覺(jué)在我體內(nèi)涌動(dòng)。我溫柔地?fù)崦挠鹈?，?duì)他唱著搖籃曲，哄他入睡。漸漸地，他的眼睛變得無(wú)力，他開(kāi)始打瞌睡?？粗@一幕，我忍不住笑了出來(lái)就他而言，我就是他的母親。續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：“我會(huì)照顧你的?！蔽业吐曊f(shuō)，向他做出了承諾。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：就在那一刻，我意識(shí)到，當(dāng)我全身心投入到照顧這只雀兒的時(shí)候，我的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了改變。文本分析：“我”在工作中遇到瓶頸，生活陷入一潭死水時(shí)隨丈夫遠(yuǎn)去加納。在加納百無(wú)聊賴(lài)中救助了一只受傷的鳥(niǎo)兒。照顧他的過(guò)程中，“我”也迎來(lái)了生活的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。文章的主題是人與動(dòng)物。這類(lèi)主題實(shí)在是續(xù)寫(xiě)的高頻話題，考察的方向大多為“人救助動(dòng)物”、“動(dòng)物救人”。但在這篇文章里，明線是“我”救助受傷的鳥(niǎo)兒，暗線是鳥(niǎo)兒救贖我。這類(lèi)人和動(dòng)物互相陪伴，互相成長(zhǎng)的話題不?？?。此外，文章的語(yǔ)言非常優(yōu)美，很有文學(xué)欣賞價(jià)值。尤其是原文對(duì)“我”在加納無(wú)聊的生活狀態(tài)的描寫(xiě)，對(duì)“我”和鳥(niǎo)兒互動(dòng)場(chǎng)景的描寫(xiě)，尤為生動(dòng)，值得反復(fù)朗讀和背誦。這樣優(yōu)美生動(dòng)的文學(xué)描述加大了續(xù)寫(xiě)的語(yǔ)言難度，想要寫(xiě)高分，沒(méi)有深厚的積累是非常難的。官方范文“Iwilltakecareofyou.”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.

Thefollowingdayswerefilledwithmemeticulouslypreparinghismeals,tendingtohisinjuredwingandensuringhereceivedthewarmthandattentionherequired.Daysturnedintoweeks,andmydedicationtonursingthelittlefinchbacktohealthneverwavered.Iwatchedasheregainedhisstrength,hisonceshutteredeyesnowbrightwithcuriosityandhiswinghealing.HewouldclingtomeasIwentfromroomtoroomandevennestleonmyhair.Ourdailyinteractionsevolvedfrommerecaretakingtogenuinepanionship,fromwhichIfoundsolace.Then,onemorning,Iwasawakenedbyahighpitchedhungercall.Instinctively,Islippedonmycoatandrushedtohim.Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch’scare,somethingwithinmechanged.

WhileIwasputtinghislifebackoncourse,hewasalsoreplottingmine.NolongerdidIfeeladriftorisolatedinaforeignlandandtheroutineofcaringforhimhadgivenmearenewedsenseofpurpose.Mycamera,onceaninstrumentofaimlesswandering,nowhadasubject.EveryshotItookdocumentedthefinch’sgrowthandeveryclickoftheshuttercapturedamomentofoursharedexistence.Thelittlebeinghadbeemymuse.Iknewthateventually,thedaywouldewhenIhadtoreturnhimtohisownkind,andlifeinGhanahadtocontinue,butitwouldholdadifferenthue.IntheembraceoftheAfricanlandscape,Isupposeditwasnotabadideatobeeawildlifephotographertoadvertisethebeautyofnature.試水作文1：“Iwilltakecareofyou."Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.

Histinybodywasvulnerableand

hislifeheld

inmyhands.

Each

day,Inurturedhimwithcare,feedinghim,cleaninghim,talkingtohim

andphotographinghimperiodicallytodocumenthisrecovery.

Ifound

myselfobservinghispatterns,adjustingmydaytohisrhythm,andevenadoptinghischirps.

Each

smallinteractionseemedtostrengthenourbond.

TheonceexpansiveandoverwhelminglandscapeofGhanaseemedtoshrink,

fadingintothebackgroundof

oursharedexistence.

ThesolitudeIoncefeltwasreplacedbyaharmoniousunionwithnature,orchestratedbythetinylifeIheld

inmyhands.

Atthatmoment,IrealizedthatasIdedicatedmyselftothefinch'scare,somethingwithin

me

changed.

Ihadbeeapartofthenaturalworld,connectedthroughthelifeIwasnurturing.

Hissurvivalandgrowthbecameasourceofmyownpersonalgrowthandjoy.Hisresilienceinspiredme,andhisdependenceonmegavemea

senseofimportanceIhadn'tfeltsinceImovedtoGhana.

NolongerwasIaloststrangerinanewland;Iwasa

participant,aguardian,actively

connectedtothevibrantfabricoflife.Myphotography,onceamereinstrumentforobservation,evolvedintoamediumofexpression,capturingthetenderdaysspentcaringforthefinchandportrayingtheinterconnectionbetweenhumans,creatures,andnature.

下水作文2“willtakecareofyou.”Imurmured,makingmypromisetohim.Overthefollowingdays,mydailyroutinerevolvedaroundthistinyandfragilecreature.Iscouredtheinternetforthetipsoncaringaninjuredfinch,diligentlyfollowingeverypieceofadvice.Witheachdaypassingthelittlethinggrewstronger,hisbrokenwinghealing,hiseyesnowgleamingwithcuriosityandhischirplivelierthanbefore.Meanwhile,ourbondalsodeepenedIcouldalmostunderstandhischirpsandhewouldhoponmyhand,perchedonmyshoulderandevennestledinthecrookofmyarm.Oneday,whilef