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續(xù)寫題目:閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ThoughIeatanapplealmosteveryday,onemonthagomydoctorcametomyhousestandinginfrontofme,notbeingkeptaway,duetomysuddenillness."WellJian,IthinkIneedtohaveastrongtalkwithyou.Youareoverweight.HaveyoueverheardaboutBodyMassIndex(指數(shù)),BMI?Well,I'veweighedyouandmeasuredyourheightandyouhaveaBMIof28.Thatisobese(肥胖的),”saidthedoctor.IknewIwasalittlebitoverweightbutIdidn'tthinkitwasthatbad.HeaddedthatmynamemeanshealthyinChineseandhethoughtitistimethat1shouldbecomehealthy.Thereisadirectlinkbetweenmyhealthandsport.Soheaskedme,"Howmuchsportdoyoudoeveryweek?"1toldhimthatIgoforawalkeveryweekend.Thenhereplied,"Hmm,that'snotalot.Sportandhealthgotogether.Theyaffectyourmental,physicalandemotionalhealth.Forexample,sportcanimproveyourmentalhealth,allowingyourbraintothinkbetterandfocus.Itwillhelpyoutolearnmoreeasily.Isthatclear,Jian?"“Ithinkso.Iknowitwouldbegoodtobeabletoconcentratebetteratschool."Isaid.Thedoctorexplainedtomethatfromaphysicalpointofview,sportmakesustiredsohelpsustosleepbetter.Atthesametime,sportburnsoffthecaloriesthatwehaveconsumed.Itbuildsmuscleandimprovesourcirculation(血液循環(huán)).Sporthelpstocontrolourcholesterolcount(膽固醇指標(biāo))andthisisimportanttostopushavingaheartattack.Addiionally,italsokeepsourbloodpressurenormalandstrengthensourbones.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thedoctor'swordsleftmelostinthought.
"Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?"thedoctorsuggested.
文本分析:Negative:Iwasoverweightandhadlittleknowledgeaboutkeepingfit.Change:startedself-reflection;haddesiretochange;buthesitated;begantotakeapositiveattitudetowardslife.What:Iwasoverweightwhichaffectedmyhealth.Mydoctorwastryingtopersuademetodomoresports.When:onemonthagoWho:Iandmydoctor.Where:inmyhouse.人物性格:Ieatanapplealmosteveryday.1toldhimthatIgoforawalkeveryweekend(Ihavelimitedhealthyhabits)IknewIwasalittlebitoverweightbutIdidn'tthinkitwasthatbad.(Iamsatisfiedwiththepresentsituation)Ithinkso.Iknowitwouldbegoodtobeabletoconcentratebetteratschool.’Isaid.(havelittlehealthyknowledge)第一段需要回答的問題:Para1:Thedoctor'swordsleftmelostinthought.WhatdidIthinkabout?DidIwanttochange?Whatwasstoppingme?Didthedoctorfindoutmyhesitation?第二段要回答的問題:Para2"Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?"thedoctorsuggested.
DidIwanttojointeamsports?Whichteamsport?What'sthebenefit?Howdidlfeelattheend?語言積累:迷茫Myoldhabitsstartedbuzzingroundinmyhead.我的舊習(xí)慣一個(gè)個(gè)地在我的腦子里冒出來。冷靜下來Iwassostunnedbywhathe'dsaidthatlhadtocollectmyselfbeforeIcouldreply.他的話嚇得我目瞪口呆,我定了定神才能答上話對(duì)...感興趣Theideaof...sparkedsbinterests.迫不及待,控制不住Icouldn'twaittodolcouldn'thelpbutdo羞愧自我懷疑后悔猶豫感激充滿希望受啟發(fā)的shameful(adj.)self-doubt(n.)regretful(adj.)hesitated(adj.)thankful/grateful(adj.)hopeful(adj.)inspired(adj.)內(nèi)心獨(dú)白:WhatIdidinthepastwaswrong.Ihadtochange.HowluckyIwastohavesucharesponsibledoctor!WhatifIcouldn'tpersist?下水文Para1:Thedoctor'swordsleftmelostinthoughtApparently,whatIdidinthepastwasfarfromenough.Icouldn'thelpbutreflectonthesignificanceofintegratingregularphysicalexercisesintomydailyroutine,whichcouldnotonlyenhancemyconcentrationatschoolbutalsobenefitmyoverallphysicalandmentalwell-being.Temptingasitmayseem,Istillflinchedatthethoughtoftoughtrainingalone,andstartedtodoubtmyself.Thedoctorstaredatmyfaceasifhehadalreadyreadmymind.Para2:“Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?"thedoctorsuggested.“Teamsports?”Theideaofjoiningateamsportsparkedmyinterest,sinceitseemedlikeafantasticwaytocombinethephysicalworkoutwithsocialinteraction.Theimagesofbeingpartofateamandworkingshouldertoshoulderwithmyteammatestowardsacommongoalreallyappealedtome.Istoodupandgavehimahug.expressingmygratitude.lcouldn'twaittoembarkonmynewfitnessjourneyandfinallyliveuptomynamewhichcontainedmyparentshighexpectations.范文:Thedoctor'swordsleftmelostinthought.ItdawnedonmethatifItrulydesiredalifefilledwithgoodhealthandcontentment,Ihadtomakesomechanges.However,Iwasuncertainabouthowtobeginthistransformation.Thethoughtofengaginginsolitaryexerciseseemedmonotonousandlackinginspiration.Ilongedforanactivitythatwouldnotonlybeenjoyablebutalsokeepmephysicallyactive."Exercisingaloneishard.Whynottrysometeamsports?"thedoctorsuggested.Hiswordsstruckachordwithme.Ihadalwaysdreadedthethoughtofexercisingalonebuttheideaofbeingpartofateamsparkedasenseofexcitementwithinme.Thethoughtofhavingothersto
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