日調(diào)研課概要寫(xiě)作解讀

高考新題型之概要寫(xiě)作Summary《普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試英語(yǔ)科考試說(shuō)明》概要寫(xiě)作：提供一篇350詞以?xún)?nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫(xiě)出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。（滿(mǎn)分25分）詞數(shù)少于40的和多余80的，從總分中減去2分評(píng)分原則1、本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2、評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所寫(xiě)概要的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3、詞數(shù)少于40的和多于80的，從總分中減去2分。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮： 1對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況； 2應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性； 3上下文的連貫性； 4對(duì)各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況；Narration（記敘文）Eposition（說(shuō)明文）FormsofLiteratureArgumentation議論文）Argumentation議論文）TopicSupportingideasConclusion概要寫(xiě)作（滿(mǎn)分25分）

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根據(jù)科學(xué)，有聲書(shū)和實(shí)體書(shū)之間閱讀方式的微小變化會(huì)極大地影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)效果。Accordingtoscience,slightchangesofreadingwaysbetweenaudioboosandesAudiobooshaveanywhere,evenwhenyouarein

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盡管有聲書(shū)既方便又有吸引力，但是研究表明，在理解疑難學(xué)習(xí)材料上實(shí)體書(shū)占有優(yōu)勢(shì)。Convenientandfascinatingasaudioboosare,studieshaveshownthataterials

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這是因?yàn)槁匍喿x以及實(shí)體書(shū)所提供的視覺(jué)線(xiàn)索有助于大腦消化我們所讀的東西。That'sbecauseslowreadingandvisualcluesprovidedbyphysicalbooshelpbrainstodigestwhatweread

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因此，要想學(xué)得快，就要根據(jù)具體需要在兩者之間做出選擇。Therefore,tobeafastlearner,choosebetweenthembasedonyourspecificneeds

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