人教版高中英語必修一 （Natural Disasters）Reading for Writing 教學(xué)課件

Unit4NaturalDisasters

SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting——概要寫作[題型解讀]概要是一篇較長文章本質(zhì)思想的簡潔重述，它要求用盡量少的語言對原文的主旨進行復(fù)述。概要不是簡單的換句話說，更不是評論，而是作者思想中最基本部分的準確再現(xiàn)。[評分標準]《考試說明》中規(guī)定概要寫作閱卷時按5個檔次給分，其中最高檔次第五檔(21-25points)的評分標準是：1.理解準確，涵蓋全部要點；2.能準確使用相應(yīng)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；3.完全使用自己的語言；4.有效使用了語句間的連接成分，使完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

[寫作方法]1.定位——查找核心信息

通過閱讀定位語篇的核心信息，包括核心單詞，核心短語和核心句子。(句子為主，以單詞和短語為輔)2.改寫——用自己的語言改寫信息

在核心信息的基礎(chǔ)上進行語言表達形式的改寫，對原文的語言表達形式盡可能實現(xiàn)大規(guī)模的改變。改寫過程中，原則上字數(shù)不超過原句，不改變原文的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，充分考慮語句壓縮。3.核查——添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞，檢查句子的連貫性

核查句子的連貫性。核查標點、語法、連接詞及字數(shù)，優(yōu)先考慮使用較短的連接詞，如：but，then，later等。

寫作技巧如何寫概要寫作？一、題型特點概要寫作的閱讀材料詞數(shù)一般為300左右。寫作要求考生在對原文閱讀后根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫出一篇約60詞的內(nèi)容概要。概要所用語句既要用詞準確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語義連貫，不得抄寫原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。

二、注意事項1.詞數(shù)要限制在60詞左右，上下不得超過10個單詞。2.要根據(jù)文章的體裁特點進行概要寫作。3.人稱和時態(tài)要與所給文章中的人稱和時態(tài)保持一致，但必要時也可變換成第三人稱。4.寫作時盡可能地使用復(fù)合句，必要時可轉(zhuǎn)換詞性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。

[典例示范]閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。We’vereachedastrange—somewouldsayunusual—point.WhilefightingworldhungercontinuestobethematterofvitalimportanceaccordingtoarecentreportfromtheWorldHealthOrganization(WHO)，morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweight.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Worse，nearly18millionchildrenundertheageoffivearoundtheworldareestimatedtobeoverweight.What’sgoingon?Wereallydon’thavemanyexcusesforourweightproblems.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthemessageisgettingthrough—uptoapoint.Inthe1970s，F(xiàn)inland，forexample，hadthehighestrateofheartdiseaseintheworldandbeingoverweightwasitsmaincause.Notanymore.Apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005，anddoctorsevenoffersurgeryofremovingfatinsideandchangetheshapeofthebody.Nowonderitranksastheworld’smostbody-consciouscountry.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Byfarthemostpopularexcuseisnottakingenoughexercise.Morethanhalfofusadmitwelackwillpower.Othersblamegoodfood.Theysay：it’sjusttooinvitinganditmakesthemovereat.Somealsoblametheirparents—theirgenes.Butunfortunately，theparentsarewrongedbecausethey’renormalinshape，orratherslim.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.Parentsareeagertoseetheirkidsshapeup.DoasIsay—notasIdo.[解題思路]第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeoplenow________________________thanfrombeingunderweight.2.It’sthe________________that’smorelikelyto________________thesedays.Part2：3.The______oftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousby_____________________________.4.InFinland，apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatly____________thenumberof________________deathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.diefrombeingoverweightgoodlifekillusdangerspublic-healthcampaignssince2001reducedheartdiseasePart3：5.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinland________________doubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknow___________________________________—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Part4：7.Others____________goodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelatively_______________________________.takingdietpillswhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweightblameunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight第二步：改寫1.要點1和2

合并：Goodlifeismorelikelytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.

改寫：Goodlifebecomes_______________________________________andmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要點3和4

合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealizedthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthenumberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinland.

改寫：Since2001peoplehavegradually____________________________thedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeople________________heartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.thekillerofourhealthbecomeawareofdyingof3.要點5和6

合并：Manypeopletookdietpillstoloseweightthoughweknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight.

改寫：Manypeople____________________________toloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.4.要點7和8

合并：Peopleshouldstopmakingexcusesandtakepositiveactiontolostweight.

改寫：Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshould____________________tolostweight.tooksomenegativemeasuresactpositively第三步：核查Nowadays，goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.(要點1)Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofheartdiseasehasdropped.(要點2)Regrettably，manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.(要點3)Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshouldactpositivelytolostweight.(要點4)UNIT4

NaturaldisastersSectionA

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